YYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!!My first fanfic i can't believe i did it so read it and then tell me what u think
I DO NOT OWN NARUTO OR THE CHARACTERS AT ALL!!
Chapter : one
She waits for her life to end while the blood drains out of her. Like a leaky faucet. She sits there thinking of all the things she hasn't done yet in her life. Like having sex, or a boyfriend, or kids, or get married and have a big house with a yellow porch. She wishes sasuke would come and rescue her soon from this slow and agonizing death.
-Flashback-
"Sakura!" screamed naruto. "Get back here your going to get lost."
Sakura ignored naruto and kept running. She was having fun chasing the black and white cat. Even though she was 14, she wanted to keep chasing the cat. Anyways it was funny how her uncle naruto got mad and stuff.
The cat ducked in to an ally way that was dark and damp. There in the ally way was a gang doing an initiation for two new members. One of the members was her big brother sasuke uchiha. He was adopted like her. He was always a trouble maker but he loved sakura to death like she was a real sister. He even loved her more than a sister.
The gang spotted her and sasuke walked over and said "sakura dear go home." sakura said "but why big brother" really innocent like. He started to tell her that she just had to when he was interrupted by ithachi uchiha. He was the leader of the gang. He also was sasukes real brother. They were separated when they were little they found each other when sasuke wanted to join the gang.
Itachi saw that she meant a lot to sasuke and he hated his brother. So why not have him kill her for his initiation he thought. itachi spoke and said "she will be the one you will have to kill to get in the gang." sasuke yelled back at him "no itachi anyone but her, please anyone but her!" he said "sasuke you do it or I'll do it and you know how I kill people."
"But itachi you know how I feel about her. I can't do it I just can't..." he trailed off almost starting to cry. Itachi said "you either do it now or I do it now in front of every one in the gang." itachi was now yelling at sasuke. Sasuke turned around and took out a kunai. Before he started to run toward her he said "please for give me sakura." he let out the tears he was holding back and ran toward her full force.
All sakura could do was stand there and think to her self. 'Why was big brother doing this? How could he do this to her? How could he kill her like she was nothing to him even if it hurt him soooo much either way?' she asked herself over and over again. She loved her 15 year old brother like a real brother, even more than a brother.
She tried to run but couldn't she just stood there in horror of her big brother was about to do to her. When sasuke got close to her he moved his arms and stabbed her on her side. She fell limp in his arms blood dripping slowly out of her side. She screamed only once and then she just started to cry saying, " sasuke why? Sasuke whhhhhhhhy? It hurts sasuke it hurts." she said it over and over again really soft to her self so the gang couldn't hear her.
The last thing she heard from sasuke was him saying. "I'm soooo sorry please forgive me and I love you, I'll be back for you before you die to save you."
Then she lost consciousness before sasuke and the gang dumped her in another dark ally way.
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!! I DID IT YYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!
please review my real and first fanfic ever. please tell me if i should continue it or just leave it as it is. My first fanfic i can't believe i did it so read it and then tell me what u think.
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