*spoilers to all Divergent books. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED*
Hey, this is my story I published earlier but I made a few changes and I will be posting more now. I hope you all enjoy it! i'm sorry in advance for any grammar and spelling errors, i'm doing my best to catch them all.
This takes place right after Tris was shot by David and she is starting to loose consciousness but instead of seeing her mother this happens...
And I start to feel a droop in my eyes, no! I can't leave Tobias, stay awake Tris.
As I drag myself to the door my whole world starts to get darker and darker and I yell for Caleb.
"Caleb! Caleb! Help!"
But it only comes out as a quiet whisper. But I think he heard me, or am I becoming delusional?
I hear someone come in and pick me up but before I see who it is I close my eyes finally accepting the darkness.
Beep..Beep..Beep..
As I wake up I inwardly groan at the pain I'm experiencing, where am I? I start to open my eyes but I feel a sudden, sharp pain jolt through me and I instantly decide to keep them closed. But I can hear voices, two, one male and one female.
"I still can't believe she did this" said the man in a pained voice.
"What? Saving Chicago or the getting shot and almost dying?" Asked the other person.
" It's just she promi⦠she promised!" He sadly exclaimed "and I can't live without her, I won't" the man secretly promised. "She is the love of my life"
"Woah, don't say that. You aren't going to anything because that isn't what she would want. I loved her too, she is my best friend" the woman wholeheartedly professed.
"I'm so mad at Caleb" Caleb! why are they talking about my brother, is he here? " why would he let Tris go in his place? I knew he was a coward and if he weren't for Tris, I probably would have killed him." Said flatly. Tris? Who's Tris? Did Caleb get a girlfriend?
"Sadly, Tobias all we can do is wait" "I know, but it hurts to watch her there. She looks so lifeless, Christina"
Tobias? Christina? Tris?
Okay, who are theses people? Where am I?
After a third try I successfully open my eyes and groan. But it comes out as a scratchy and dry hiss. I attempt to lift my hand to my head but before it even leaves the bed a whole hurricane of pain waves come at me. Before I can even look around two strange people say "Tris!" As I try to speak but not a word will come out, the woman, Christina? I think. Hands me some water and while I chug the water I see that i'm in some type of hospital. how did that happen? Then a handsome young man stare at me with a weird look.
Why is he looking at me like that? and why does feel like I like it?
As I try to speak again the man suddenly leans down to kiss me. I instantly freeze up and luckily he notices and stands at his previous position. With a furrow in his eyebrows he asks "what's wrong Tris?"
I slowly ask "who are you? And who's Tris?"
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Question of the day: What was your favorite line or scene for the Divergent trilogy?
my favorite scene was when Tris was high on peace serum because Tobias' reaction was priceless.
