My Immortal Version 2

by Maxria

Sorry for bringing you guys pain again, but I got bored and I decided to TRY to fix the original "My Immortal" series. So basically it's a fanfiction of a fanfiction. Or a hatefiction of a fanfiction. What ever you would prefer to call it.

1. Chapter 1

You may know my story as the most ridiculous story in the history of stories. However, that story is not the true story, or at least it's not in its true form

Hello, my name is Ebony Grimdark. You have known me to be a girl with very long black hair with purple streaks and red tips. However, my hair is just plain black with a hint of red at the ends of my bangs. I do in fact have icy blue eyes despite the fact that I'm a vampire. Not all vampires have red eyes you know. However, all vampires have fangs and pale white skin. I'm also a special vampire in the sense that I'm also a witch. This is my story about my time at Hogwarts.

Everyone knows the story of Harry Potter, however they do not know of the other girl involved in his story. My seventh year at Hogwarts was near as I arrived in Scotland. Despite the fact that it was September, it was snowing outside. It made me look almost invisible because of my skin. It was contrasting with my clothes, which are mostly black.

I started walking towards Hogwarts, and as I did, all the popular girls stared at me. I didn't care. I'm much better than them. I know not to give in to their words. They are going to be jealous anyways this year. I was going to get the most popular Slytherin in the whole school; Draco Malfoy.

Speaking of which, he was walking this way! And he looked interested in talking to me. He walked up to me and said, "Hello, Ebony."

"Hey! What's up, Draco?" I asked.

"Not much, just looking for some first year students to give a hard time to." He laughed and I joined in. He wasn't too nice, but he knew how to keep his status. Plus you got to admit, he is kind of funny! I heard my friends call me, and I said goodbye to Draco. I ran over to my group of friends and gave them all a big hug. I truly missed them. It's hard going away for the summer. These girls were like sisters to me. We all went in a big group up to Hogwarts for the sorting ceremony and of course the famous feast.

AN: Sorry for bringing up this dreadful fan fiction! (And I'm sorry my version is still in it's sucky form...)