Ok. I'm brand new to fan fiction. Just started reading it about a month ago. I have been reading Samcedes stories and I love them! I wanted to write my own story. I write, but its mostly poetry and stuff like that. I started on a novel a long time ago but I never finished it. So anyways. Tell me what you think about my Samcedes fic. Please please please review it and let me know ur opinion.
Mercedes took a deep breath and looked around, "I cant believe Im here right now." Her thoughts are fixated on how she is sitting on the couch at Kurt's house with Sams around her shoulders and how he has his head laying on top of her own. She along with Finn, Puck and of course Sam are watching Avatar for the umpteenth time that month.
"I will never get tired of this movie!" says Puck. "The girl is so badass!" Finn nods in agreement.
Sam lifts his head to look down into Mercedes brown eyes, "My girl is badass too," he whispers to her. Mercedes giggles and winks at him and replies,"You know it baby." Mercedes was finally happy. She had a guy that cared about her and showed her real attention. Not someone who wanted to use her for personal gain. Then why is it that she had this feeling of impending doom inside. Sometimes she didn't feel worthy of being with Sam. He had constantly reassured her that he was proud to be with her but she never really believed him.
After the movie ended, Mercedes drove Sam home. Mercedes was unusually quiet so Sam spoke up. "Babe, whats wrong? Are you ok?"
"Yeah, I'm ok. Just thinking."
"About?"
"Us."
"What is it about "us" that has that worried look on your face?"
In a hurry to squash his questioning she tries to quickly come up with a safe answer."Uh..er..um just thinking if we are gonna have a happy ending like Avatar."
"Oh babe, of course we are. Just like Sam did in the movie. I will fight for you." Sam didnt know how true those words would become later. "You are my girl." He reached out and grabbed her hand and gave it a little squeeze.
Mercedes felt bad for not telling Sam the truth but she didn't want to get into it with him, at least not now. She was tired and plus Sam had work early in the morning.
Arriving to the motel, Sam got out of the car and walked over to the drivers side. He sensed something was still wrong but didn't want to push the issue. He opened the door and Mercedes got out. He closed the door behind her and gave her a big hug. He breathed her in, smelling her perfume and her hair products. She uses lavender on her hair and she has a sweet smelling perfume. He could stand there all day if you let him. He lets go and gives her a soft kiss. He licks his lips, "Your lips taste like coconut."
Mercedes smiles wide, "Its my chapstick. I thought I would try something new."
"I like it," Sam replies. He steals one more kiss. "Good night baby, thanks for driving me home. Are we still on for tomorrow night?"
"Of course we are. I will text you when I get home." Mercedes hops in the car and drives away as Sam stands there.
"What is going on with her?" he wonders aloud. He shakes his head and gets to bed. He has a busy day tomorrow.