Chapter 1
This is my edited variant of Ch. 1! Please NO FLAMERS WITH BAD REASONS, but tips and criticism helps. Please also don't compare my story to any authors like Soleneus or NorthSouthGorem.
I will say this 2 times. I deleted Ch. 2 and Ch. 3 so as to better the story after looking at the plot and etc. The next chapters will have different scenes so it seems not as rushed. Also, thanks DemonicPain10 and renegadeofficer89 for the tips on how to better the story!
Disclaimer: I have no rights to Naruto or Prototype. Naruto is the sole property of Masashi Kishimoto. Prototype is the property of Radical Entertainment.
Hope you guys like or enjoy it.
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Talking- "Yo."
Demon Talking- "Yo."
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It was a dark night on October the 10th. Many shinobi lives were destroyed by the rampage of the Kyuubi. A young baby with the name of Naruto was heard crying over the battlefield.
Hiruzen Sarutobi, an old shinobi that was once known as "The God of Shinobi" picked Naruto up and examined him. Hiruzen spoke," It seems that you are a legacy of great power and destruction."
Time Skip – 5 years later….
Our main character Naruto was found as a blonde five year old coldly looking at one of the old abandoned labs titled "Gentek" under Konoha. He knew of what they were meant to do. He also knew of their greatest experiments on the Blacklight Virus.
As our main character walked into one of the rooms, he walked over to the sample with a DNA sample of James Heller, Pariah, Alex Mercer, and Elizabeth Green. He injected the sample into himself and strapped himself onto a table before he passed out in pain.
Time Skip – 6 years later….
Naruto is currently in a cocoon in his hive/lair, leafing through all of the memories of the previous avatars of the virus. His body changed form with unique touches and blends as he blends some of the forms together (Basically, he is going to have offensive forms like Alex's and James' forms).
He also set up a small hive that slowly grew in population with every passing hour in a nondescript village. Any ninja that were nearby were killed and assimilated into the group, giving the knowledge of how to use chakra to Naruto and his Hunters. Naruto also began making new forms, reviewing his situation of how to take advantage of the element of surprise.
Naruto then came across a strange variant of mountains that were inhabited by many eagles and falcons. He thought about it, and decided to mentally command a carrier infected pigeon out of the village to make more airborne infected that could help with air invasions.
The next thing he did was to make new infected civilians, seeing as the ones employed by Greene and Mercer were only cannon fodder. So he began to experiment with his infected crowd, changing their usual mindless strategy and making them faster and stronger.
He then went back to his memories and saw a flaw that mostly cost the infected. Naruto began to adjust some of every infected to have ranged biomass snipers that looked like a normal infected with an 2 arms that constantly shot fast biomass infected bullets. He named these carriers, seeing as every bullet was meant for infection.
Time Skip – 10 years later….
Naruto, a boy with blonde highlights, a muscled body, and cruel looking face was looking over the village. He seemed to be a being of true anger and darkness with his aura. He spoke, "I wonder how long I have before I die and my anger overtakes my body?"
He then disappeared and reappeared in front of his home, an apartment that was filled with graffiti and blood. He looked over the messiness and sighed as he cleaned himself up and got into bed. As he started to fall asleep, Naruto thought to himself," Why do I even bother with this shithole of a village? Why not take over Mist?"
The next morning, Naruto got up, brushed his teeth, washed his face, ate some cereal with water, and walked to the academy while thinking about how to keep his growing virus secret for the moment. Angry stares from the villagers ticked him off, and he began to walk faster.
4 arrogant shinobi, Chunin level, approached him and tried to beat him up before he got to the academy for his graduation. Naruto gave his reply in the form of transforming his hands into axes of virulent growth and got into a stance (Like most Evolved after revealing their weapons).
The first Chunin ran at Naruto doing hand seals while the others readied their kunai to throw. Naruto stopped after running right next to the Chunin and disappeared while the Chunin readying a jutsu froze and screamed.
After Naruto had moved and disappeared across the area near the 4 shinobi, they all screamed but were abruptly cut off as their torsos fell off. However, an explosion kunai that was already primed by one of the Chunins was left on the ground with an ominous sizzling sound.
Naruto leaped up one of the nearby buildings after hearing the sound and watched it explode. He then jumped back onto the ground walking undisputedly. Everyone who saw the display of terrifying skill paled.
Naruto absorbed the blood spilled on him from the 4 dead shinobi looking flawless, badass, and stoic. The villagers nearby ran off screaming, "The Demon is killing us all!" He then ran up a building, jumped/glided halfway across Konoha, and landed right in front of the academy at 5 am.
When Iruka came in the academy at 7:30 am to start his rounds, he saw Naruto sitting there motionless. "Whoa, Naruto you scared me!" spoke an amazed Iruka. Naruto just humphed and continued to stare blankly as more people started coming in to take their seats. Iruka announced that it was the day of the Graduation test.
He started to pass out written tests with easy-as-hell questions, making that portion go quickly. Then he led the class out to the field to start their Taijutsu portion of the test.
As the students lined up to start their Taijutsu portion, Iruka began calling their names out. "Akimichi Choji. Get up on the stage," Iruka spoke. Choji got in the circle to fight his opponent. He punched his opponent Mizuki out of the circle after a few blows were traded. "Haruno Sakura.
"Your turn," Iruka yelled to the pink abomination we know as a fan girl. She got up on the stage to fight Mizuki. Sakura ended up barely passing after kicking Mizuki in the gut. Naruto sighed as the matches were too boring and went into a tree to watch the matches (Assassin's Creed III for the win).
Soon it was Naruto's turn, and when he got down to fight Mizuki in the circle, Mizuki attacked the moment Naruto got in, who then dodged it and mule kicked Mizuki away. Mizuki did a flip in the air to stay in the circle, ran at Naruto and began throwing punches at him looking infuriated.
"Stand still!" Mizuki yelled at Naruto. Naruto shrugged and stood still, letting Mizuki hit him, but not getting hurt by the fist in the process. Naruto retaliated with a smash into Mizuki's face and pulling off Mizuki's arm (thus no Forbidden Scroll Arc, not really something I would need in the story 'cuz of Naruto's need for stealth), knocking him out and getting the fastest record for any of the matches.
Sasuke's fangirls began screaming Naruto cheated after Iruka's announcement of this fact. Iruka lost his temper after 3 seconds of the nonsense and bullshit that was coming out of most of the female population of the class. After getting pissed off, he activated the "Demon Head no Jutsu" and screamed, "Shut The Motherfucking Hell Up You Fucking Sasuke Fangirl Idiots!"
After Iruka terrified the fangirls plus the 2 facts that Mizuki got sent to a hospital and Iruka took over and released his stress on the punching ba… err fangirls. Then the class moved back into the classroom for the Jutsu portion. (Rookies and few nondescript characters pass) Naruto sighed and walked into the Testing Room and waited patiently for the Jutsu Test.
He did the Bunshin correctly (surprise eh?), the "Kawarimi no Jutsu," and his "Henge no Jutsu," and left the room not saying anything to anyone and getting back to his seat quietly with his headband inside a pocket.
Soon after, one of the elite forces of Konoha, Anbu, appeared to tell him he was requested at the Hokage's office. Naruto complied, not caring as he got shunshined there. The Hokage got up and requested all the Anbu nearby to get out of the office.
After the Anbu left, the Hokage asked Naruto, "Why did you kill 4 of my Chunins in my village?" Naruto replied, "If you don't control your shinobi, I am not faulted." The Hokage sighed and asked him, "What jutsu did you use to beat the shinobi?"
Naruto spoke, "My transformation is not a jutsu, seeing as it is inferior in the aptitude for killing my opponents." The Hokage replied, "If that's the case, let's test your abilities, Buki (Weapon)." The Hokage sighed and made a Kage Bunshin to accompany Naruto, but when Naruto spoke about using the Kage Bunshin to do the paperwork, the Hokage widened his eyes and began to bash his head incredible hard into the wall, making a hole from every smash that connected.
As Naruto and the Hokage went to Training Ground 3 the three Jonins/Anbu we know as Guy, Kurenai, and Yugao showed up to test Naruto in the various forms of Taijutsu, Genjutsu, and Kenjutsu. Naruto snorted and waited on the field for Guy to start.
Guy started the spar with a Konoha Whirlwind at Naruto, who dodged it easily and smashed Guy into the tree near him. Guy took the hit, and hit back with a flurry of punches and kicks. Naruto back flipped over Guy who stared at him in shock, but shook it off and jabbed at Naruto, who flew back with no visible damage.
Guy began thinking, 'What can I do to beat him? He has no flaws in his stance of his, but he hasn't taken any damage with the 500 pound punches I hit him with. He also seems very strong from his well-muscled body and his aura.'
Naruto also thought, 'It seems that my plan for employing a variant of Goken for my army of human shaped infected was a very good thing, seeing as how much damage it seems to do.'
Naruto decided to end the match, so he began launching very strong haymakers, snapping the nearby trees in half as he and Guy ran throughout the area. Naruto also started kicking in conjunction with his haymakers, unbalancing Guy as they got out of the forest.
The Hokage signaled Guy to drop his weights to see if Naruto could stand up to Guy, who disappeared suddenly and smashed Naruto in the face, only for Naruto to shrug off the hit and start to smash Guy multiple times in the gut who lost consciousness.
Naruto stopped after this occurred and waited for his next opponent and the medics to carry Guy away. Kurenai activated "Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death" only for Naruto to shrug it off, considering his Jiinchuriki status. Kurenai went off the field shaking after that demonstration.
Yugao walked up to Naruto who activated his Chainsaw Form, which was basically a sword that had razor edges with biomass connecting it to Naruto's arm. They clashed and jumped back, with Yugao's sword being cracked. Yugao, seeing this effect on her sword, took out another and resumed the fight with cautious slashes at Naruto while moving quickly after he faced her.
Naruto held his saw in front of himself and watched Yugao stop and clash with the sword while trying to regain her momentum. Naruto then got began to vertically rotate while he faced Yugao, forcing her to jump away once again. Naruto pursued her while continuing the vertically variant of the Blade Tornado attack.
The Hokage stopped the fight, seeing Naruto as a very powerful possible Kage level shinobi. As he was about to gift Naruto with the rank of Jonin, a Hunter and Brawler flew out of the forest, shocking everyone after it bowed to Naruto (Prototype 1 and 2). Naruto face palmed. The Hokage asked, "What the fuck Naruto?"
Interesting edit? Guy is a Jonin level Shinobi, but Naruto is a mixture of Elizabeth Green, James Heller, Alex Mercer, and Pariah. Also, if you think Naruto is overpowered, he had 5 years to train himself in his abilities. Not only that, Kurama is a lot more agreeable with Naruto, considering Naruto has no morals. So Naruto is easily Kage level. I don't like flamers and also, there is only Naruto x Harem because of votes. Sorry 'bout not specifying the amount of women. The women below are put in the harem if they are at least 2 votes. The poll is:
Mei: 2
Hana: 1
Anko: 4
Tsunade: 2
Kurenai: 3
Yugao: 0
Fem. Kurama: 5
Yugito: 3
Karui: 0
Samui: 6
Fu (Jiinchuriki): 1
Ryuzetsu: 1
Mikoto: 3
Shizune: 0
Repeat: I deleted Ch. 2 and Ch. 3, so as to better the story and make it better after looking at the plot and etc. The poll ends after Ch. 6 so make your votes count. Also, if you want to vote again, your original vote is cancelled. CANCELLED. KK?