This is my first story so please review because I want to know if I should write another one!
Amelia, why Are you Here?
Chapter One"Hey, mom!" Marco yelled trying to get his mom's attention. "I'm going to go and see Ellie!"
"Oh, Marco," his mom said when she came in the living room. "You mean that nice girl who I always see you with before I come to pick you up? She is such a nice girl!"
"No, Ma. That's Paige but only because I am helping her with school and the only time I can really help her without interruptions is there. I mean Ellie, my girlfriend!"
"Oh, right! How could I forget? Well, Marco, she is also a very nice girl." Marco heard her mother mumble something to herself that sounded like "and she also looks like a vampire." But he couldn't exactly make out the words so he let it be. "Fine, Marco. Be back in about two hours for dinner."
"Okay, Ma."
Marco went outside and guess who he found sitting next to his car? Amelia! (A girl who was his best friend back in the days before she moved to England. They've never heard since.
"Oh, My! Marco!" yelled Amelia to the top of her lungs. "I did not know that you lived here," she said when she started walking towards him.
"Then why are you here? And why did you come back from England?"
"Marco, Marco. Let me talk! I came here because I got a letter saying that they wanted to meet me here. They put the address and so I decided to come."
"What if you did not know the person who lived here and all he wanted was some money or was going to play a big trick on you? What would you do then?"
"Slow down, Marco. Let's not worry about that right now. That did not happen (unless you are planning on doing those things)? Let's just focus on what's happening right now. What have you been up to?"
"Amelia! Let's not, right now, I mean. Let's focus on who sent you that letter. And what better place to be. We are at my house and my mom and dad are in there. Let's go and see who did it."
"Fine, Marco. I guess some things just haven't changed."
"What does that mean? What are you talking about anyway? All I want to know is who sent you that letter. Is that so bad to ask for?"
"I mean that you're still the same old Marco. Always serious and all mysterious. Why can't you just let it go and get out of here, some place? Come on. I just got here and I haven't been inside yet. So I'm not that comfy. Let's go some place."
"No Amelia, and you did that trick on me before. Saying I'm all serious and trying to get me to go out someplace. Well, it's not working this time. Now let's go inside and we'll see who gave you that letter."
"Well, hold on a minute. Aren't you going to be late?"
"Late?"
"Late. You came out here and I suppose that you were going somewhere because you were walking towards your car."
"Well…um… Hey! You don't need to worry about my life right now. That's my business! Stay out of it!"
"Fine. Let's go then," but when she said that, Marco seemed a little sad. That was once his best friend and he was basically saying leave me alone. He didn't want her to leave him alone. He wanted them to be best friends again. 'She was one great friend!' thought Marco. But he still wasn't going to go out some place with her. He wanted to find out who sent her here and why.
Wait a second. His parents weren't the only people who knew where he lived. It could have been any of his friends. Some of them even met Amelia before. The problem with that is that no one knew where Amelia lives. Well, if she is staying, they do now. And whoever sent that letter would tell him because this would change his life. This would really change his life.
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