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Broken Heart poem #2

Oh god Oh god

Help me through this time

Oh god Oh god

Love leaves me

In the ashes lay my heart broken

Oh god Oh god

I sometimes cry myself to sleep

Oh god Oh god

I have nightmares about him

Oh god Oh god

When I wake up in the morning i feel nothing anymore

I cut myself to help with the pain

Oh god Oh god

I have tried to kill myself

It never works because my friends always stop me

Oh god Oh god

Now I am being watched all the time

I feel like I am being watched all the time

Oh god Oh god

I have no clue of what to do

Slowly I am dying because I cut myself everyday

Oh god Oh god

I pray to be strong again

Oh god Oh god

Help me fix my broken heart