Check back at this page, I will be constantly updating it as I write my story.
This is an Exalted story, but I will try to include enough explanations to make it comprehensible to even those who are unfamiliar with White Wolf's newest setting.
Terms included so far.
Daiklave: Large sword
Grimcleaver: Large ax
Anima Banner: An aura, generally taking the shape of an animal or humanoid for Solars, and various elemental forms for Dragon-Blooded, that is displayed whenever an Exalt uses a lot of power.
10/8/2003
Well, here it is, the last character chapter, hopefully after this, the story will pick up. It isn't too long, but it introduces the last of the major characters, and one minor, though re-occurring character.
To reviewers
Shearre: Gee, thanks for spilling the beans about the Abyssals :-P Nevertheless, thanks you the review, I'm glad someone commented.
Bard's Soul: Ah, well Sparrow's not exactly what she appears, but she is closely tied to several Lunar Exalts in this story. Once again, thanks for the comment.
Ah well, without further ado, here it is. As ever, I thrive on constructive criticism.
8/17/2003
Good heavens it's been forever since I last updated this story! I found myself lacking direction and then getting caught up in other projects. Well, I'm back to working on this story, and hopefully I'll be able to hold onto my inspiration long enough to complete it. I'm also currently working on revising my other story, Broken Wings (insert shameless plug here), before I get back to updating that one again.
This newest chapter isn't too long, but it's the second to last of the character pieces. Once the next one is finished, the story should really get moving.
On another note: Please ignore Heaven Cried, she's an idiot who's annoyed at me for getting her web page taken down for plagiarism . I've blocked her so she shouldn't be able to post any more pointless flames.
As ever, reviews are welcomed; constructive criticism is adored.
Thanks all,
Lhiannan-Sidhe
-5/14/2002
Hello,
The next chapter is now up! Unfortunately I don't think I'm going to be able to continue updating at this same speed, it just takes up too much time. I've renamed the chapters and the story, though frankly, I think the story name is kind of silly. Oh well, since I can't think of anything better, it will just have to do. I have also expanded Malakai's chapter a little.
Heaven Cried has apologized and says that she won't post nasty reviews anymore!
Thor: I think I've found all of the mistakes you mentioned, but I'm not one hundred percent sure about the tense inconsistencies. Please tell me of you find anymore. This next chapter should clear up some of those questions you had about the Exalted world. Thank you for taking the time to read my story.
MooMooChan: Thanks a lot! For the record I do intend to finish a Warrior's Tale eventually, I just have a major case of writer's block on that one. Yes there is going to be some romance in this story, but I still haven't made up my mind about which of the characters it will involve. Maybe I'll take votes or something.
Thanks to Dracus for all of your help.
Thank you all,
Lhiannan-Sidhe
-5/12/2002
Greetings again,
I just posted the second character chapter, and it's a good bit longer then the first.
For those of you who are unfamiliar with the Exalted, a Daiklave is a large sword, a Grimcleaver is a large Ax, and an anima banner is that flashy display you get when an Exalted uses lots of power.
Thank you to FuryS Forge and Yi Hsin for your reviews. I have edited the first chapter. Hopefully it is now a little clearer.
For those of you who haven't seen the reviews, I am currently being harassed by a person going by the name of Heaven Cried, or something along those lines. I have tired to block her from posting reviews, but I am not certain whether or not it has worked. Please ignore anything she might write.
Thank you,
Lhiannan-Sidhe
-5/10/2002
Greetings,
This will be the first story I have posted in quite some time, so I hope you will excuse any glaring errors. For those of you who are unfamiliar with Exalted, I ask you to give this story a chance. I will try to explain everything in time, though it might be a bit confusing at first. If you are a White Wolf fan, and you haven't played Exalted, I strongly recommend you try it. It is a bit different from what you might be used to, but it is never the less worth your time.
I intend to write this as a story following the tale of a circle of young Solar Exalted. The first few chapters will be devoted to introducing the various characters, the Dawn caste Exalted first, then the Zenith, the Twilight and so on.
Reviews are welcome and appreciated. It is easiest to improve a story when you are given feed back so I always welcome constructive criticism.
Thank you, and best of luck to you all,
Lhiannan-Sidhe