Here's the remake of Regrets. Thanks to Mythstar Black Dragon and alwayzhappy0751 and redstockings for reviewing the first draft. This is the first poem I've ever written, so constructive criticism would be nice. :)
Disclaimer: I don't own Abarat, Carrion, or anything to do with Abarat. Clive Barker does. Curse him. :(
Regrets
If I could undo time
Recall my thoughtless actions.
If I could meet your carefree gaze,
Your gaze that saw right through me.
If I stop these nightmares,
Hearing you scream "I hate you"
If I could pry those words from your lips,
Those words I long to hear
The only words you never said to me.
Would I?
If I could see your lovely smile,
A smile for me, and only me.
If I could I've thought for years.
If I could hold you, your perfect skin
Against mine, one more time,
Would I?
If I could take back those words,
Spoken in pain and loss, to keep you here with him,
Would I?
My angel, would I?
There you go. Remember to review!
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