I plan to use this poem in one of my stories if enough people like it.

Dive

Dive into the darkness, feel the drought that fills my soul.

See the world threw clouded eyes, eyes clouded with confusion and hurt.

Feel the pain as I do, from your cold words….

Words that burn worst than any inflict able wound.

Dive into the bottomless pit, where my love use to be.

Watch as you tear down my once mighty walls.

Experince the pain you inflict with each punch you throw….

Wounds that damage the body and the soul.

Dive into the empty shell that use to be me.

Observe the blood that seeping threw my wounds.

Touch what is left of my reality …..

As it shatters into pieces.

Dive

I wrote this poem during a bit of a depressing day which I'd rather not bring up……

Please comment and tell me what you think if I get enough reviews I'll consider posting a couple more from my little black book.