Okay, so after a REALLY bad review someone left me (which I wanted SO SO bad to reply to) I am struck with a SEVERE case of writer's block on those stories. I came up with this idea a few days ago and turned into a story. It will be a bit more researched so, enjoy!
Disclaimer: SVU's characters are DW's! Elyse and her kidnapper are mine!
"AHHHHHHH!" The screams pierced the room as a hand reached around and pushed the girl underwater.
"Freeze!" Detective Elliot Stabler of the NYPD yelled as he breached the door and entered the tiny bathroom. The man turned around and immeadiately surrendered.
He let the girl go and she turned herself around, eyes closed, gasping for air.
"Get the dirtbag out of here," Elliot's partner, Olivia Benson, called out as the officers pushed the criminal out while Olivia and Elliot pulled the girl up from the water.
She was shaking, her blue jeans, tank top, and auburn hair soaked.
"Hey, sweetheart, what's your name?" Olivia asked as the stretcher arrived to take the girl to the hospital.
The girl didn't respond.
"She's too traumatized. Get her to Mercy!" The EMS yelled as the doors of the ambulance shut and drove away.
Watch out for more! Elliot and Olivia learn more about the girl and her troubled past.
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