I wrote this for my school's creative writing submission thing... and I kind of liked how it turned out. I'm not sure where we're supposed to put poems in (are we even allowed to? LOL), but I just put it in a category I thought fit most? Anyways, please enjoy, but I don't expect many people to read it. Haha. For those of you who have read it, please review:) It doesn't need to be kind and stuff, just... I dunno. I want feedback? First poem I've written in a while... LOL. And according to one of my friends, it's sooo deep for me. OTL''
Bringing You Back Into My Mind
I'm having feelings towards you once again,
The feeling of affection,
Admiration, love,
Is it possible that I still have feelings for you?
I see, I hear, and I dream,
Of all those times we spent together.
As I reminiscence through the times we had as one,
I can't help but remember the good more than the bad,
I want to forget about your presence,
But my heart yearns for you.
Would there finally be a day,
Where you'd recognize your feelings for me, too?