Chapter 1: A Strange Feeling

I decided to visit Hoenn out of the fact that I wanted to discover new things.

Oh, wait, crap, I forgot to tell who I was. The name's Nathan Terrace, the winner of the Sinnoh League last year.

So, back to where I was. I was visiting Petalburg in Hoenn with my friend Zeke Anderson when this happens:

"You really think we should?" I asked.

"Of course, he's not that tough" Zeke said, trying to convince me.

"You sure, the other four were a breeze, but I heard this one cracked a pokemon's spine in half."

"Oh come on, it'll be fine"

"*sigh* Alright, if you say so."

Zeke was pushing me to challenge the gym leader Norman. It was the last week they would be accepting challenges. But Norman was a bit cold hearted at this time, and we've heard of more pokemon injuries since.

All of a sudden, three people rushed out of the gym. One on a cane, one looking drunk, and another rushing like mad with an Umbreon by his side. Then something strange happened. I got this weird feeling in my body and I staggered a little.

"Are you alright?" Zeke asked, looking concerned

"It's nothing" I said, trying to regain balance. "something obvouisly not right about those group of people"

"Should we follow them?" Zeke asked.

"We should," I replied "It might tell me what just happened.

Oh boy was I in for a surprise.


AN: So? How was it? Reveiw so I know what I should improve on. nothing harsh though, as this is my first fic EVER

and yes, this will be an alteration of srgeman's "A Little Night Music"

Note: IDK why, but just so you know. both characters are male