Hey this is the first chapter of The Perfect Boy it is a SasuTen fic with some NejiTen there is also some ShikaIno if you look real hard tell me if you like it and review ppl I really like this story and I already have a few ideas for the next chapter
Disclaimers- I DO NOT OWN NARUTO If I did Sasuke and Neji would be Mine! LOL :) I also do not own any of the songs in this fic
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The Perfect Boy
Chapter 1
With the beat of a Britney Spears song pounding in her ears, Tenten Tian clipped up her long brown hair in her signature buns and slid into the hot tub on her parents' deck. Steam rose up from the bubbling water, momentarily obscuring her friends' faces. She inhaled deeply and eased downward. Suddenly, something grabbed her feet under the water.
"NEJI!!!!!!" Tenten screamed. Her boyfriend's sleek, wet head surfaced next to her, and everyone burst into laughter. "What? Did I scare you?" Neji Hyuga asked, flashing his sexy little smirk that curled just the edges of his mouth. After dating him for almost a year, Tenten still thought he was the cutest boy she'd ever seen. Neji's beautiful pearl eyes could always melt her annoyance.
"Yes, you did, jerk!" Tenten said playfully. She punched him on his well-toned ar. "Don't hurt him to badly," Ino Yamanaka called from the other side of the hot tub. "HE's the only one left who knows how to tap a keg- Shikamaru already passed out." She pointed to a dark shape lying in a heap on a lounge chair, barely visible through the Konaha night.
"How is that possible?" Tenten giggled at her best friend. "The party just got started!" "She's not going to hurt me," Neji growled. "Not before I......." He trailed off as he stood up in the water, grabbed Tenten, and tilted her back in his arms. "Eeek!" She giggled, hoping she wasn't flashing the rest of the hot tub. Her D&G string bikini top didn't allow for a lot of gymnastics. Neji went for her neck like a vampire. He started to run his mouth lower, but Tenten struggled upright and shoved him away. "Okay hornball. Save it for later," she said with a laugh. Reluctantly, Neji released her and sat down again. Tenten settled back contentedly in the hot water, Neji's arm around her tanned shoulders. Light spilled over the deck from the French doors behind her. The glow reached the manicured gardens at the edge of the two-acre lawn. Most of the teenage population, plastic cups in hand, were packed in Tenten's living room, where the leather furniture had been pushed against the walls to make a dance floor.
On the deck, couples were cuddling on lounge chairs with beer bottles strewn on the ground next to them. Kiba Inuzaka had started a game of drunken tackle football on the lawn. "Touchdown!!!" Choji screamed as he grabbed the ball and landed headfirst in the shrubbery at the side of the yard.
Tenten smiled. Her first official house party of the summer was only an hour old, and she could already tell it was going to be a great night. In fact, it was going to be a great summer-maybe the best ever. Tenten's other best friend, Sakura Haruno, slid up next to her. "So when did your parents leave?" Sakura asked, resting her elbows on the edge of the tube behind her, looking sleek and athletic in her pink Speedo. Tenten laughed. Even though Sakura's idea of resting Saturday was going to the mall for hours on end, Tenten still thought it was funny that she insisted on wearing a one-piece suit to a party full of bikinis and boys. "This afternoon-finally," Tenten replied. "They should be arriving in the Sound any minute now."
"I can't believe you have the whole house to yourself for two whole months!" Ino squealed, splashing across the tub to join the two other girls. "I know, right?" Tenten agreed. "You know, at first, they actually tried to tell me that I had to help them fix up that little midlife crisis-I mean , vineyard. But they couldn't resist my powers of persuasion-"
"And that A in AP English, you nerd," Neji teased. She gave Neji a push. "Go get me another beer," she ordered playfully, admiring the muscles of his back as he climbed of the hot tub and shook the water out of his long, dark hair. A tan line showed where the waist line of his baggy gray shorts had dropped down a little. She heaved a sigh of delight of she thought of her and Neji-and her big, empty house-together, all summer.
"Girls, we're going to have so much fun!" she declared, stretching out her long legs and watching her toes bob in the bubbling water s her two best friends flanked on her side. "First of all, we finally got to throw a party we've been planning since finals. And for the rest of the summer, we'll have shopping sprees in the city, the beach every afternoon-" "Parties at your house every weekend!" Ino finished for her, sending a splash of steaming water toward each of the girls. "You have the best party house in Konaha, Tenten."
"No question," Sakura said, looking across the artfully lit pool to the view of the bay. Behind them the sprawling six-bedroom Chinese-style house pulsed with Rihanna's latest album. Tenten smiled her agreement. Everyone was getting what they wanted: Mom and Dad were living their dream up in the Sound, and she was experiencing sweet independence down here in Konaha.
"I should probably go mingle, guys," she told everyone. "I am the hostess, after all." Neji splashed back into the tub next to her just in time to hear her last words. "Don't go too far," he said, winking at her meaningfully. Tenten laughed at him and pulled herself onto the deck, knowing he was enjoying watching the water run off her slim, tanned figure. "If you tap the new keg, I might have a special treat for you later," she said flirtatiously. He grinned back. "Wait, I want my party favor now!" He grabbed for her, but she dogged his grasp and draped a silk sarong around her hips, slipping a gauzy linen shirt on top.
As Tenten made her way to the foyer, she saw Neji's best friend push through the oak front door. "PANDA-CHAN!!!" Lee yelled, crushing her with a bear hug. The hall filled up with huge, brawny boys lugging an extra case of beer. A skinny blonde and black haired appeared behind them, each waving a bottle of vodka. Tenten shook her head- for two of the richest girls at school, Temari and Kin certainly managed to look remarkably cheap.
"We brought Grey Goose!" Temari called. "Your place is awesome, Tenten!" Kin squealed. "Thanks," Tenten said. "Why don't you stick the vodka in the kitchen?" "Oh my God, is that Zaku Abumi?" Temari screeched in reply, staring into the living room. "Doesn't he play for Suna University?" She and Kin hustled past Tenten, nearly knocking her over.
Within an hour, her house was filled with basically every person she knew-and a bunch she didn't. Tenten felt like the queen of summer. When she looked around again, Ino and Sakura were dramatically debating something with Kin. Temari was making out with some guy Tenten didn't know. Someone had put on the Lady Gaga, and couples were grinding in the living room and making out on the sofas. Kiba Inuzaka broke a vase, and Tenten was drinking vodka tonics way too fast.
She needed a breather. So she made her way back onto the now-deserted deck, trying not to stumble too much. "Mmmm," she murmured, collapsing onto a canvas lounge chair. She closed her eyes and let the pounding music behind her wash through her mind. She could feel someone standing over her.
'I've come to collect my party favor now, hostess," Neji whispered as he slid onto the chair next to her. Tenten smiled and wrapped her arms around his neck. he pulled her on top of him. "I am so glad your parents are gone."
"Me too." She loved the feeling of his whole body pressed against hers. She twined her fingers in the long, silky hair at the back of his head and kissed him gently. His body tensed, and excitement shot through her. Mmm Neji was so yummy. His lips always tasted like cinnamon. He wrapped his arms around her and flipped himself over, taking her with him. Now he was on top, gazing down at her. "It's going to be a great summer, Tenten Tian," he said softly as he pressed his hips against hers. She closed her eyes and he kissed her again, this time parting her lips with his tongue.
I couldn't agree more, she thought. She ran her hands up and down his bare back under his T-shirt as he shifted to the side a little and slid her shirt up. She shivered at the sensation of the fabric brushing her skin.
After a few blissful minutes, Tenten drew back and glanced at the diamond-encrusted Bulgari tank watch her parents had given her for her sixteenth birthday. Ten o'clock. By now, Mom and Dad would have unloaded all the wheelbarrows and pitchforks and whatever the hell they used to resuscitate a run-down vineyard and would be sipping wine, happily oblivious to the biggest party in Konaha. "I should probably go make sure no one's throwing chairs out of the windows or something," she said.
Neji groaned and reached for her. "Don't leave yet." She smiled and tried to pull him up. "Come with me!"
The packed room was grinding to the heavy bass line. The crowd had spilled up the stairs-Tenten could hear some sort of thumping from her parents' room overhead-and into the kitchen.
"Kiba, what are you doing in there?" Tenten called over to the brawny football player. Kiba Inuzaka had apparently given up running in the yard and had just taken off the top of blender. "A little something I like to call Kiba's Late Night Bean Special," Kiba answered with a grin. "You'll love it, Tian" The whir of the blender was just audible over the music. In the back of her mind, Tenten briefly wondered if he was trashing the kitchen but decided it didn't matter. After all, she had two whole months to clean up, and right now dancing to Beyoncé was her main priority. You love's got me looking so crazy right now.
Neji's arm slid around her waist. He pulled her up tightly against him and handed her a cold beer from the freshly tapped keg. Tenten wrapped one arm around his shoulders, swaying her hips to the music, and took a sip with the other hand. "Mmmm," she murmured and buried her face in his neck. Your touch got me looking so crazy right now.
From behind her, she could hear Ino shrieking, "Oh my God! She did not!" Somewhere, glass shattered. Tenten shook her hair back from her face and raised her arms in the air, swaying to the music. Neji took her chin in his hand and leaned down. "You're the most beautiful girl I've ever seen," he murmured into her ear, his lips brushing the side of her face. Their eyes met as he slowly brought his mouth to hers.
Tenten felt like her whole body was electrified. She ran her hands down Neji's back as he dipped her backwards. "Ow! Ow! Go, Tenten!" Sakura giggled, bumping her shoulder. Tenten twirled around, her eyes closed, singing as loud as she could, "Got me looking so crazy in love!"
In the distance, she could hear someone calling her name. But the music drowned out the voice. She'd deal with it when this song ended. Beyoncé could not be ignored. Then the call came closer.
"Tenten! Tenten Tian!" That sounds like my father, she thought dreamily. I wonder if they ever have stereos in the Sound.
"TENTEN! TIAN!" Wow, that really sounds like Dad. Tenten smiled to herself. But when she opened her eyes, her father was not smiling back.
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How'd you guys like it was the first chapter ok? If you guys review I'll write the next chapter :) Tell me if I should continue or not ok? And give me some ideas on the next chapter I already have a few ideas but need to hear yours cause they might be better! :)