Arakisu Ga Oho No Suna - Retribution Sands of Arrakis -
Summary: The story starts of in the Wave Arc with the fight with Zabuza. Kakashi has just got trapped by Zabuza in a water prison.
Zabuza then sends four mizu bunshin at Naruto, Sakura, Sasuke, and Tazuna.
With Sakura frozen in fear, Sasuke charges blindly head long at the mizu bunshin. As Sasuke approaches the water clones brake off in pairs.
Two leading water clones easily side step Sasuke blind charge and the other two head straight for Naruto.
Thinking fast Naruto manage to take one out but get knocked off balance and left wide open.
Capitalizing on its advantage the mizu bunshin lifts its copy of Kubikiri hocho (Beheading Cleaver) and prepare to cleave out Naruto's head then the worlds goes black.
Intromission
Retribution is going to be a long story with a crossover with Dune based on maverick9871 story "Dune's New Legacy." Naruto's training on Dune is taken for maverick9871 story with some changes so that it fits into my story. I'm not taking credit for his work and strongly suggest that if you read his story for though only a one chapter it's a good story.
Retribution is going to be a major AU with minor to vast difference going on. Geography the size of the countries varies from canon. First all major countries Land of Fire, Water, Earth, and Lightning are somewhat smaller so that they all are about the same size.
The Land of Wind takes the land they lose so it's about double in size so it's more like Dune though most of The Land of Wind is uninhabited do to the lack of surface water leaving only a few towns that are more outposts than anything else.
Many characters will be somewhat different then in canon and will come and go. With them either being killed or lost in battle never to be heard from again...maybe.
The Akatsuki will be in the story but won't be major players. They will have a role to play just not an overwhelming one.
Where some major enemies didn't die until later on in canon, they may die earlier in my story for their not meant to be around for long.
I don't like how so many story and anime always reuse enemies or like the manga keeps beginning them back from the died instead of bring in new villains or monsters and keeping the story fresh exciting.
This story will be a semi-harem with more than one person with Naruto. However some are a onetime thing or friends with benefits.
There will be one major female lead but that is not till later in the story. There are a few sub female leads that are more for support and help build the story.
As the last living man Uzumaki Naruto knows that he the only one left to rebuild his clan so isn't that he forced to have multiple mats (there will be fox references because of absorbing the Kyubi youki and freeing its soul as well as changes to Naruto himself) but that choose to be with more than one person and cares for them all however the main female lead will be different and the other will know that he doesn't love them any less because of it.
There will be two female leads with other mats Tsunami, Kurenai, Koyuki, Ino, Temari, and Kushina.
Naruto himself will be different than canon. He will be much stronger than most in the story and be able to kill them easily and quickly however that is the type of fighter he is in this story, fast and deadly.
I'm warning you now that Naruto has been training since he was young so of course he'll be stronger, also he is a seal master, and that he started working on seals first allowing him to create seals to speed of his training, combat, defense, and many other uses.
His skills and abilities will be made up of many jutsu that I create myself also some I see in other fanfic that I liked but changed to suit my story.
As for abilities, he will have a bloodline and gain abilities for have fully adsorbed the Kyubi. A few of abilities he get from the fox are "Eye of the Fox" which turns his eyes purple and give him prefect sight, allowing to see in the dark as clearly as day; see through chakra like Zabuza Hidden Mist and genjutsu with relative easy.
He also will get a few jutsu for the fox like "Kitsune-hi (foxfire)"; "Kitsune ni hoko (Roar of the Fox)"; "Kitsune no gekido (Fox Fury)".
Foxfire is a powerful fire jutsu that made from pure youki that burn anything it touches to ashes, the only thing that can come close is Amaterasu but a Amaterasu made by the Sharingan is not a true Amaterasu just a low level variation for humans only the Sun Goddess herself and create a true Amaterasu.
Roar of the Fox is a powerful wind and sound jutsu made like Foxfire from compressing pure youki, however unlike Foxfire that can be created anywhere on the body Roar of the Fox come from the throat and then releases through the mouth.
Fox Fury is like Eye of the Fox except that it heightens all of Naruto body flooding his body with pure youki.
Eye of the Fox is always active when Fox Fury is used and gains increased strength, speed, claws, enlarged caine teeth, and a thin but heavily condensed youki cloak around the body.
The cloak is so thin that without a Dojutsu you'd never see it however even it being thin it very tough and hard to penetrate it where anything below A-rank won't even scratch it, it takes A-rank or an S-rank jutsu to even damage it.
The down side is that it puts a heavy burden on his body and even though it's healing his injures, while in use it drains Naruto's stamina when active.
Where once he deactivates Fox Fury or forced to, he will be heavily exhausted and be unable to use youki or any youki base skills for some time.
Physically Naruto looks different in a few ways. First his hair is crimson red like all Uzumaki are but has sun blond tips like Luke from Tale of the Abyss except that his stand out more and are longer.
When he younger his hair is short but after he comes back for training on Dune his hair is the longer and look just the same as Luke was at the beginning of the anime except spikier on top.
Theirs is a reason that he grows his hair out but that will be told later. Second his body is not overly muscled more along the line of a swimmer or runner because like I said before his style is based on speed for quick and fast strikes.
That doesn't mean he's not strong but he doesn't fight with strength but does use either chakra or youki to enhance his strength if he needs to.
Third is his eyes they are the same Azure/Ocean Blue but with angry, focused, uses Eye of the Fox, or Fox Fury they change to a Royal Purple color.
Naruto's Swords
- Kuroi Kaminari - Olath Nizzre' - (Black Lighting) - His favorite next to till he get Mugen
- Shinsei-fu - (Sacred Wind) - Gift from the Goddess of the Wind
- Mugen no Uuzushio no Ryu - (Dragon of Infinite Whirlpools) - Gift from Dragons
- Kasai no Seirei Tsubasa - Velve d' Chath Quar'valsharess (Blade of Fire Spirit) - Gift from Inari Okami
Naruto's Gear
- Mugen Sakyu no Resa - (Endless Dune Bracers) - Primary bracers after coming back from Dune
- Kuro Ryu Buresa - (Black Dragon Bracers) - Special bracers used later in story
- Veldri Ky'ostal d' Har'oloth - (Shadow Armor of the Underdark) - Main clothes used later in story
- Orthae Veldrin - (Sacred Shadows) - Primary clothes has after coming back from Dune
1st Female Lead's Gear
- Kumo no Kura Yoroi - or - Olath Ky'ostal d' Orbb (Dark Armor of the Spider) - Special clothes later in story
- Aijin no Kage - Jabbress Veldri - (Mistress Shadow) - Primary light clothes gift from Naruto
- Uzushio no Seiryu Hakari - (Blue Dragon Scales of Whirlpools) - Main clothes gift from Naruto
- Aka no Shi - (Red Death) - The sword of lead female also gift from Dragons
- Akai Ryu Resa - (Red Dragon Bracers)
More will be added later on homepage for other lead and for Naruto full gear.
Naruto's Bloodline is made up of three parts. The first part is encoded into all Uzumaki genes and is inert till the first time they felt fear of dying as a teenager they would be brought to Dune and giving the choice to train there.
However they wouldn't be able to activate it unless they were noble, honorable, and willing to put the needs of others before themselves but also be willing to follow their heart and do what they feel is right.
The second part of the bloodline comes in two parts Healing and Elemental.
All parts of the second part of the bloodline vary in level that a person starts with.
Like some may have high chakra and blood, and strong attraction to water and low to Lightning and Wind. Healing has three parts to it Chakra, Regeneration, and Blood.
Chakra grants high than natural chakra reservoir, large chakra coils, and bigger chakra points (tenketsu). Regeneration grants rapid healing.
Allowing depending on the level of mastery can heal lost limp and damaged organs. Mastery of Regen can heal from most wounds all but decapitation or destroyed heart so long as they have enough chakra.
Blood is unique in that is has no affect on the user but allow them to use their blood on use to heal wounds, the amount that can be heal depends on the mastery on blood limit.
Mastery of Blood can allow their blood to heal intermediate wounds and minor fatal wounds on others. Elemental also come in three parts Wind, Water, and Lightning.
Usually only two are active and requires training to unlock the third. It also allows the mixture two elements so they can with training have mastery over Ice (Wind and Water) and Storm (Lightning and Water).
The third part of the bloodline requires activation of part one (going to Dune and surviving); mastering either Regen or Blood; and mastering all three elements; to unlock Tengoku (Heavens Release) allow the mixture of all three elements.
And so are story begins…
Disclaimer: don't own Naruto or any other references just story.
Arakisu Ga Oho No Suna
Retribution Sands of Arrakis
Ch. 1 Shifting Sands
Today started off pretty well, as I was lying comfortably (like a rock) in the bed, while the sun decided to kindly (malevolently) grace me with its presence (basically shining it rays of death right in my eyes).
Seeing, as I wake up on a high note feeling nice and clean like I just took a nice shower (which a broken pipe flooding my bed) figured someone was telling me to get up.
Getting up and going into the bathroom remove my clothes I take a nice hot relaxing shower (as relaxing as showering in ice water is).
After I finish cleaning myself off I look in my closet for my favorite orange jumpsuit (being my only clothes I have since nobody let me buy anything else) I quickly put it on.
Feeling hungry I look for in the fridge where I see a brand new milk, (expired last month, funny since I bought it yesterday) a juicy banana, (that bears a strikingly resemblance to charcoal, why don't think even Kami knows) and fresh bread (that more mold then bread).
Having the intense urge for so cup of ramen (being the only edible food I got).After a healthy breakfast (as healthy as five cups of ramen can be) I make my way to Team 7 meeting place.
I walk down the street greeted by friendly smiles and people wishing me a wonderful morning (glaring fiercely followed by whispers of monster and demon).
Arriving on time at the bridge (meaning waiting another three hours for the chronically later sensei) I see Sakura asking (more like groveling) Sasuke for a date.
Then just like that 3 hours goes by and Kakashi appears (3 hours of listening to Sakura endless ask Sasuke on a date) saying it time to get Team 7 missions for the day.
Arriving promptly at Hokage office where Sasuke politely (demands) ask for a more challenging mission.
Being the nice (weak-willed) Hokage that he is gave Team 7 a C-rank mission to protect the bridge builder Tazuna.
After friendly introduction from Tazuna (ending with Kakashi having to restrain Sasuke so
he doesn't murder the client) Team 7 splits up to return to their home and pack then arrive at the gate and on the road to Wave.
As we calmly walk along the road, where clear blue sky. We stumble upon a puddle. From the puddle two friendly look missing ninja appear (as friendly as ninja with faces mask and large poisoned claws gauntlets are).
Finally see them Sasuke bravely (reckless) charges them and almost loses his head but have no fear Kakashi come to the rescue (some rescue since he was hiding during the clash of wills).
After a friendly chat with the missing mist ninja (as in tying them to a tree and kicking till they talk) we depart again down the road to Wave.
Arriving in Wave as we take in the sights (mist and lot of it) a nice razor-sharp sword greets us (diving to the ground seem like the best thing to do at the time).
After the sword embeds itself a tree we meet another friendly missing mist ninja name Zabuza who says he want to play with us (killing nice and slow and very painfully).
Kakashi charges into the dense mist made by Zabuza (thicker then my milk in the fridge) and get caught by Zabuza in a water prison.
Zabuza then sends four mizu bunshin at Naruto, Sakura, Sasuke, and Tazuna.
With Sakura standing tall (frozen in fear).
Sasuke charges fearlessly (blindly) head long at the mizu bunshin.
As Sasuke approaches the water clones brake off in pairs. Two leading water clones easily side step Sasuke blind charge and the other two head straight for Naruto.
Thinking fast Naruto manage to take one out but get knocked off balance and left wide open.
Capitalizing on its advantage the mizu bunshin lifts its copy of Kubikiri hocho (Beheading Cleaver) and prepare to cleave out Naruto's head then the worlds goes black.
Yeah today was a good day (too die).
(AN: All credit for this part of the back story for Naruto training goes to maverick9871. I only change some of it so it fits into my story and lead to where my story is going if you want to read the unedited version of the story if called "Dune's New Legacy" look it up or go to maverick9871 profile.)
Naruto groaned and looked around and asked "What happened."
A chuckle from behind him made Naruto turn and saw a man with a blindfold over his eyes and the man with gray hair in a black outfit that Naruto never saw before and said
"Hello there Naruto."
Naruto got up quickly and said "Who are you and how do you know Me." as he rubbed the back of his head.
The man laughed and said "Why wouldn't I know my own descendant"
Making Naruto freeze and look at the man who was sitting in a lotus position.
Naruto asked "Who are you."
The man said "For now just call me Paul."
Naruto bit his lip and asked "What did you mean when you said I was your descendant"
Paul said "Ah, to be young and reckless again..."
"Many countless years ago I was the emperor of the known universe."
"I brought the entire universe to its knees and lead a holy army to cleanse the universe of darkness..."
"I had 2 children, Leto the 2nd and Ghanima...people do crazy things when they believe in things..."
"My son Leto, he took the road of self sacrifice and pain to save the lives of many..."
"You see Naruto, there was a time where there were hundreds of worlds with life on them and countless lives were born and died that people have no knowledge of any longer."
"Among these people was a group of female priestess who were called the Bene Gesserit sisterhood."
"For over a millennium the sisterhood did a selective breeding program choosing the strongest heirs of all the great families and bloodlines of the universe to try and make what they believe would be a god, one they could control..."
"I wasn't about to submit to them."
Making Naruto wide eyed and asked "You're a god?"
Paul chuckled and said "Some think of me as such and more thought my son Leto was but we were both human though we were far from normal..."
"Just like you we were blessed with powers that we did not want and had to use to do what is right and noble."
Naruto frowned and said "So you know about it."
Paul smiled and said "Don't worry, the fox is nothing compared to us Naruto but let's not worry about him for the moment."
"I am sure you are wondering why you are here and were we are, right."
Naruto nods and Paul said "One of the many powers that we have is the ability to see the future and with this ability my son and I both saw the future of mankind and saw the destruction of all life in the universe..."
"We both saw the path that needed to be taken to save the universe and though I am a great and noble man the price I felt was too high and I refused to do it..."
"My son Leto however did pay the price and changed the universe forever by becoming closer to god then even I am..."
"Leto said that he would never have a child because of the price he had to pay to save the lives of all humans..."
"Ghanima, his twin sister had another view than him..."
"She loved him and understood the price he was paying and was going to pay and since she had most of the same powers as me and her brother had she decided to give him the chance for peace that he would never normally had..."
"You see in order for Leto to save humanity he had to give up his mortality and become immortal and guide the people of the universe forever..."
"In order to save her brother Ghanima gave him several heirs in secret."
Naruto scrunched his nose and said "So it was incest."
Paul chuckled and said "You have to realize something Naruto, at that time my children were related to every family line in the universe except for 1, and I ended that line myself."
"You see Naruto when you love someone enough a simple thing like they are family isn't any reason not to be with the one you love you should remember that."
"In other words there was a lot more people born from that then you might expect but for now it's not important..."
"What is important is that with the power Leto had he was able to slightly alter his body and because of this when he had children they had the slight changes that he created...one is what you are experiencing right now."
"This world we are in now is Arrakis, desert planet, also known as Dune."
Naruto was wide eyed and said "Are you saying we are on another planet."
Paul said "The change Leto made was when his descendants hit puberty they would awaken the dormant powers that were hidden in their bloodline."
"They would not however be able to use them unless they were noble, honorable, and willing to put the needs of others before themselves but also be willing to follow their heart and do what they feel is right..."
"If they had those qualities then the first time they felt fear of dying as a teenager they would be brought here to be trained which is why you are here."
Naruto looked around and said "So I am going to be trained...to do what exactly."
Paul smirked and said "That Naruto is something we will have to find out...you will be given task to complete."
"Each task you complete you will learn something new."
"If you give up or give into fear then your training will end."
"Fear is the mind killer, you must face your fear and conquer it...you will only be brought here this one time and when you give up or give in to fear then you will return to your world the exact moment you left changed by your experience here...however if you die here you die."
"This is not a game and the abilities of our bloodline are not toys."
"In all the years since my son Leto was able to become mortal again since there was someone who could save humanity if it needed it there has only been 60 who have passed the first test to come here and only 40 have left here alive."
"Your own mother was the last to come here before you."
Naruto said "My mother, who was she?"
Paul said "Your mother was a Whirlpool Nin that fled to Konoha after Uzushiogakure fell to the alliance of Iwa, Kumo, and Kiri during the start of what you call the Third Shinobi War."
"Anymore you must learn for yourself not all questions have an easy answer and your parents are both apart of you and separate from you, in time you will understand."
"Also you must remember not everything is as it seems."
"As for your father that isn't something I can tell you as I'm only a guide and can't tell which road to take only point you in the right direction."
Naruto eyes went wide and said "Wait why did the Yondaime chose me to hold the Kyubi."
Paul looked at Naruto sadly and said
"You must remember every living being was given the freedom of choice and like all things not everyone choices wisely and takes into account how their actions with affect others."
"For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction to the choices they made."
Naruto thought a moment and his eyes went wide and he looked down and said
"I see...because he decided to put the needs of the village first and because of that choice he made both he and the village paid for it."
"For him he died and the village has lost its center and like a tree it's rotting from the inside, and without even realizing it."
Paul said "Do not be sad or angry with what he done."
"He and the village made their choice and their actions against you have showed others how blind they are and they will have to pay for in time as all must."
"However enough about the past your mother proved to be a descendant I was proud of, on the battlefield she was like an unstoppable storm who showed strong in not just body but the mind as well."
"Where she would fearless and merciless when protecting her allies and loved ones as any Freman would, to her loved ones there was kindness and compassion that could turn your worst enemy into your greatest ally."
"I see much of her strength in you Naruto and I'm proud you...but now you must begin your trails."
"You have the choice to give up now and return to your world as you are...or you may take the harder path and you might die or become more then you are."
Naruto thought a moment and had a flashback of the when he was three and kick out of the orphanage on the day of his birthday and the savage beating he got that night which led the path he followed now and said
"I won't back down or let my fear rule me I will face fear and move forward."
Paul smiled and said "Very good."
"You first test is to survive."
"On this planet there are creatures called Worms."
"They can be over a mile long and a quarter mile wide."
"They are attracted to vibrations in the sand so any noise or even walking might attract them so you must be careful or they will attack and possibly kill you."
"I can't tell you how to pass this test but it's not only the worms you have to be afraid of. You see on this planet water is more valuable then blood."
"You can't waste even a drop of it."
"The heat from the desert is enough to cause death quickly if you do not learn to survive it. All I am aloud to do is give you a still suit and explain how to use it."
"After that I will disappear and you will have to leave this place through the stairs to your left and cross the desert to the giant rock formation that is 10 miles south of here that you can barely see once you exit this cave."
"If you make it there then your first instructor will be waiting to teach you the proper way to cross the desert as a Freman warrior."
"That is all I can tell you."
"Are you still willing to proceed with this first test?"
Naruto gulped a moment and thought
"I must not be afraid."
and said "Yes."
Paul closed his eyes and said
"Very well."
Then began to explain how to wear a still-suit and after Naruto had one on he said
"Good luck Naruto...I'm proud of you."
Before a blur of wind and he was gone.
Naruto climbed the stairs and once he made it outside he looked at the desert and then the sky and saw 2 moons and thought
"Hm, I'm not in Wind country by the looks of it never saw two moons before."
As he looked he saw what appeared to be more black rocks a great distance away and thought
"Well that must be where I need to go."
As he began to climb down the small path.
2 hour later Naruto was walking on the desert and thought
"this doesn't seem so hard though I hope I make it to shelter before that storm gets here. I can see sandstorm forming in the distance."
30 minutes later Naruto thought
"Damn, even at night it is hot here.
My damn water tube thing is already empty so I have to wait a while for it to make more...that sandstorm is getting closer.
I'm not going to make it to the mountain before the storm gets here."
As he sat down and began to rest and thought
"I wonder where those worms he warned me about are. Could he have been pulling my leg?
Hmm...what did that book say about storms in the desert...oh that's right, they create a lot of dust that makes it hard to breathe and with the wind could cause the sand to tear flesh and bone quickly.
You need to hide in a shelter or make yourself one out of sand to survive the storm but make sure you also have a way to breath that doesn't close off and kill you."
As he began to dig him a shelter the sand around him began to shift slightly and he frowned and thought
"stupid sand."
As he glanced over his shoulder to judge the storm and his eyes went wide as he saw a shape dive into the sand and thought
"OH SHIT, THAT'S NOT A STORM, IT'S A FREAKING WORM."
As he began to try to climb up on the sand that was shifting around him and he saw the worm was coming toward him and Naruto thought
"think, think, what did Paul say about worms...that's it, they are attracted to vibrations."
As he put his hands together and said
"Kage bunshin no jutsu."
30 Kage bunshin appeared and Naruto screamed "Scatter."
As Naruto began to run as best as he could toward the mountain area he saw the Kage bunshin all took off in other directions with a few heading toward the mountains also.
The worm that was heading toward Naruto surfaced and began moving quickly toward the larger group of clones and one of the clones thought
"Shit, got to move faster."
As he began to send chakra to his legs and got further ahead of the others 7 clones but the worm caught up to them quickly destroying them and then the one that was further ahead of the others.
At that moment the memory from that Kage bunshin hit Naruto and the others and they all started sending chakra to their legs as the worm began to turn around another clone saw more sand spout forth in the distance and thought
"Shit another worm."
This changed his course and slipped in the sand hitting the ground dispelling itself.
As the memory hit the other clones they looked at the 2nd worm coming in the distance and began to panic running in every direction while the real Naruto thought
"oh god."
Just then a clone ran passed him and Naruto screamed
"Hey, wait for me."
As the clone was getting up the sand dune faster than Naruto who made it to the top of the dune only to roll down the other side clipping the clone who was running on the sand making it fall and go up in a puff of smoke.
As it did Naruto got its memory and thought
"So he was using chakra to coat his feet to walk on the sand like tree climbing. He was still slipping but he had better traction."
As he tried to send chakra to his feet and was still sinking a little but was able to make it to the top of the next sand dune as more of his clones memories hit him and he looked back and saw 2 worms heading toward him and he put his hands together and said
"Kage bunshin no jutsu."
As more Kage bunshin appeared and took off running in different directions.
This kept on going over the next 3 hours as Naruto hit the bottom of the rock formation using chakra to climb on a ledge as 10 sand worms roared at the mountain and Naruto thought
"OK, I am so kicking Paul ass when this is over."
Just then he heard what sounded like a heartbeat in the distance and the worms that were restless waited a few minutes and turned toward the noise and began to leave.
Naruto let out a breath and waited for about 20 minutes when he felt a blade at his neck and a man's voice said
"You have got to be the luckiest and dumbest idiot I have ever seen."
As the blade was removed from his neck he saw a black haired man standing there and Naruto gulped seeing a blade that looked like it was made out of bone and the man said
"I am Sorasida."
Naruto said "Naruto..." before he passed out.
Sorasida laughed as he picked Naruto up and carried him inside the mountain.
When Naruto woke up he found himself in a bed and looked around and saw Sorasida sitting in a meditative state not too far away and Naruto asked
"Are you my next instructor."
Sorasida opened his eyes and Naruto thought "what strange eyes." and Sorasida said
"Yes, I will begin to teach you the way of the Freman."
"How long it takes will depend on you."
"Are you ready to begin?"
Naruto sat up and his stomach grumbles and he looked sheepish and said "I am if we can eat first."
Sorasida laughed and handed Naruto a small red tube looking thing and he said "Eat it."
Naruto ate it and made a face and said "It's got a weird taste, what was that."
Sorasida said "Basically the only food you will eat while here."
"That little bite contains an entire days worth of calories and vitamins."
"Now come with me."
Over the next year Naruto was taught how to travel by sand without making a sound and the Freman style of hand to hand combat.
With the spice enriched daily vitamin bar he ate Naruto height grew 3 inches bringing him up to 5'9 and his baby fat worked away.
His speed, agility, reflexes, and instincts increased as well.
He also learned the art of Shai-Halud.
Naruto eyes have also become blue in blue.
Sorasida looked at Naruto and said "I have nothing left for you to learn from me Naruto."
"It is time you went for your next trail."
Naruto asked "Where is it furthermore what must I do?"
Sorasida said "You must head to the deepest desert south of the equator and find Stilgar. He will teach you to be a Fedaykin."
Naruto looked shocked and said "A death commando."
Sorasida nods and said "Yes, it is the next path that you are to take."
"You have learned skills that can make you stronger in your life and you could quit now."
"It is your choice."
Naruto frowned and said "You have taught me much Sorasida, shown me flaws in my way of fighting and thinking that will get me killed but I must ask, did my mother proceed pass this point."
Sorasida said "I can't tell you where she stopped at but I can tell you she passed this point and was given the same option that now faces you."
"I can't tell you which she chose though."
"It is your choice to continue or not."
Naruto looked at the sky and said
"I must continue."
"My dreams...they have changed since I arrived...I saw things in them I can't explain."
Sorasida said "It's the spice. It is awakening you."
"Your mind is still asleep though."
Naruto grabbed his head as he saw a man speaking and Naruto mumbled "The sleeper must awaken."
Sorasida said "That was Leto the first who said those words to Paul. It is the memories of your ancestors in you.
Do not be possessed by them or they will consume and destroy you."
Naruto nods and said "How will I find Stilgar."
As he looked to where Sorasida had been only to find nothing but air.
Naruto closed his eyes to say a small prayer for the man who trained him before he gathered his things and began to leave.
A month later Naruto was riding a worm when he saw a cloud of dust going into the sky and thought "spice mining, this far south. Strange."
As he steered the worm he was riding toward the cloud.
As he got closer the sound of battle was heard and Naruto saw several aircraft flying around a spice harvester and Naruto saw several men with red covering the top of their still-suits attacking the harvester and Naruto thought "those are Freman I must help them."
As he steered the worm he was riding toward the harvester and the worm opened its mouth and consumed the harvester.
As this was happening the Freman who were fighting began to attack the ships in the air.
20 minutes later the battle was over and Naruto had circled the battle on the worm and he heard several people approaching behind him and saw someone walk over and stab a rope hook in one of the breath holes for the worm and walked back to beside Naruto pulling the rope and said
"You have great timing Uzumaki, I was begging to think you wouldn't make it."
Naruto said "Are you Stilgar."
The man said "yes I am."
Naruto nods and looked at the others who were there and he handed the rope he had to Stilgar and took a step back and grunted and Stilgar said
"You have learned well the way of our people Uzumaki, though you still have much to learn."
"Do you still wish to become a Fedaykin?"
Naruto said "Yes, I must learn what I can to protect what is precious to me."
Stilgar said "Very well, we will teach you the Weirding Way since you are only up to the point of a traditional Freman since all you could do in the battle was direct the worm to attack a slow moving enemy."
Naruto thought "stay calm, he's testing you on your patience."
Stilgar waited and smirked and said "Sorasida has done well by you."
"You remember the lessons taught to you even when you had time to relapse into your old ways without supervision."
"Very good."
Naruto said "I still don't understand so much about this. I've spent the last year learning to calm down and how to survive where life should be impossible but I still don't understand so much."
"I've never met you and yet I know that you know everything about me."
Stilgar said "If you can complete all the trials that are ahead of you, you will understand. For now take your place in our order."
Naruto nods and got at the end of the line behind the Fedaykin warriors.
Over the next 11 months Naruto learned the ways of the Fedaykin warriors and their Weirding Ways of unarmed combat as well as using the Weirding module.
Naruto looked at Stilgar who removes his hand from Naruto still-suit leaving it stained red and said
"You are now a Fedaykin warrior with all rights that come with it...now there is nothing more me or my people can teach you."
Naruto asked "Then where is my next test."
Paul appeared behind him and said "There is no further test. All that is left is a choice." startling Naruto.
Naruto asked "What do you mean and where have you been. I wanted to talk to you about my..."
Paul said "Visions...that is where you are at."
"You are at the point in your training where your mothers stop because of the choice that she faced that you now face."
"Your body and mind have been trained to teach you all the skills that you will need in your world to be a ninja, hand to hand combat, chakra control, focus, battle strategy, weapon training, combat experience."
"Your mind has been conditioned to give you a few seconds into the future by slightly awakening your hidden powers."
Naruto said "But the sleeper must awaken...right."
Paul said "That is what all this training has been preparing you for. It's the same thing I myself had to do."
"I was trained to protect myself from birth but it wasn't until my father was murdered and my family betrayed that I learned the skills that you now have. You have a choice that I had to face."
"The choice is do you wish to take the water of life...if you do there is only 2 things that will happen, you take it and your mind, body, and spirit are strong enough to survive the experience fully awakening the power you have becoming a Kwisatz Haderach."
"If you are truly strong enough to pass this test then you will gain powers that you could never imagine but if you fail you will die."
Naruto frowned and said "This whole time all of this has been orchestrated to lead me and those of our bloodline to a certain ending, hasn't it."
Paul said "Yes, when you and anyone else of our family line comes here they are basically repeating history by facing the same challenges that I had to face so they may understand why it is so important that these test are done."
"None of this is real and yet it is."
"You see Ghanima used her powers to create this place."
"Time and space were folded by her to create a pocket dimension, in that pocket dimension she created clones, not clones like your Kage bunshin but real clones of important people that help me shape the universe."
These clones, including me exist outside of normal time and space.
"Leto made it when our family bloodline truly activates it brings you to this pocket dimension and trains you in our family style of combat and tests you at the same time."
"On Dune only the strong survive. If you are not strong enough to survive these tests then you die."
"You've only felt a glimpse of your true potential."
"This glimpse is to test you. Your mother made the choice to stop now because she realized that by proceeding you would be tempted with powers that would change who and what you are forever."
"Those who proceed from here are tested by the water of life...no one has ever passed this part of the test because those who took it died by letting fear take over them and gave up. It is your choice to take it or not."
Naruto thought a moment and said
"Something isn't right about this...if Leto and Ghanima both worked together to create this...false reality then what was their purpose."
Paul said "I don't know that is something you can only learn by taking the water of life and living."
Naruto sat down and thought
"my dreams...I dreamed of those I care for dying...I know that as I am now I can't save them but if I took the water of life then I might be able to but...if I drink it I could die."
A female voice inside Naruto head said
"I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer.
Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration.
I will face my fear.
I will permit it to pass over me and through me.
And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path.
Where the fear has gone there will be nothing.
Only I will remain."
Naruto looked around and thought "who was that." as he blinked a few times and Paul asked "Is something wrong."
Naruto said "No... But I will take the test. I will drink the water of life."
Paul shook his head and said "Very well. Come with me." as he led Naruto out of the cave they were in and out into the desert. After tying Naruto up he looked at Naruto and said "Are you sure about this. There's no stopping once you drink this."
Naruto bit his lip and said "I want to know...I got to know."
Paul nods and pulls out a vial of blue liquid and puts the vial to Naruto mouth he opens his mouth and drinks it...a few seconds later he begins to scream and thrash about as blood begins leaking from his eyes.
For the next seven days and nights Naruto thrashed about in pain until the moon rose on the eight day.
Paul who stayed beside him the entire time looked as Naruto quit moving in pain and opened his eyes slowly and whispered in a hoarse voice "Water."
Paul smiled as he gave Naruto a small sip of water from Naruto suit and Naruto fell asleep after that.
When Naruto awoke he found himself in a gold thrown room and looked around and saw that there was 2 people standing there both who looked to be about 22 years old.
One was a woman with a white dress and a crown and next to her was a man without a shirt and weird scars all over his right side of his body.
Naruto asked "Where am I."
The man said "You have arrived on the golden path. Welcome Naruto."
Naruto asked "Who are you."
The girl who Naruto recognized as the voice in his head said "I am Ghanima and this is Leto."
Naruto eyes went wide and he asked "What's going on, why am I here...why are you here."
Leto said "What did you see when you drank the water of life Naruto."
Naruto thought a moment and said "I...I saw my death and the deaths of everyone I know."
Leto said "As you know my sister and my history I will explain what is going on...to save humanity I became immortal so that I could stop those who would destroy humanity..."
"My sister here, in order to save me from the painful fate that I would have lived gave me several children."
"Those children had children who had children."
"On each planet in the universe my children, grandchildren, and great grandchildren were spread out till every planet had at least one of my family line on it..."
"We believe that if our children could use all the abilities that I have thanks to my choice that they would be able to save their world which would result in saving the universe and there would not be a need for me to be immortal to come save them..."
"There will always be darkness in the universe that wishes to dominate it and that could destroy all life..."
"All the test so far all my descendants took was to teach the skills that they would need to protect their precious people but I made it where if there was an darkness on the world that would destroy your world killing all life that when one of you came here you would have visions of people you care for to try and force you to take the water of life..."
"If someone took the water of life only to gain power or for greedy reasons the water would kill them but if you honestly wanted to protect your precious people the water of life would show you the future where you and your precious people would die and then you would be brought here before us..."
"That is why you heard my sister voice because there is a danger to your world."
"This is the final place you have to go before you return to your world at the moment you left."
"Here my sister and I will train you in the skills that normally would not be needed with the powers I had that I would use to try and save your world."
Naruto asked "What is this darkness...all I saw were shadows of a danger but I never saw who or what it was."
Leto said "I don't know all we could do is warn you and give you the tools we hope will save you and your world. It is your choice what to do with them...are you ready to begin."
Naruto asked "How many have ever come here and why did Paul say all who took the water of life died."
Leto said "Because there has never been a threat to your world before that could destroy it so none of your ancestors after they went to your world needed the powers so all that tried to drink it died. On other worlds other descendants have come here but not from your world. Does that answer your questions?"
Naruto nods and over the next year Naruto trained with the 2 siblings.
(AN: This will probably get confusing right here so I will explain it real quick, when Naruto was taken to Dune he was 16-17 years old and had just about to be beheaded by Zabuza In the Land of Waves.
Now when he reappears it has only been a second for everyone else and Naruto is now 18-19 years old.
Also about Naruto speed, Dune has a heavier gravity then the planet Naruto lives on so his speed after 3 years will be faster than most plus using the speed technique the Freman use which allows him instantaneous movement for quick burst of speed.
Naruto is a lot strong then in canon because he has been training since he was very young, which will be explain later.)
Naruto reappeared in the Nami no Kuni as a large zanpakuto less than a foot from his head about to sever it thinking fast Naruto whispered in a distorted voice
"Sui lie(Shatter)."
As Zabuza suddenly flew backwards with all the organs in its body destroyed then a loud splash as the Mizu bunshin explodes.
Naruto looked at the water from the destroyed clone then at Zabuza and sees a pained expression on his face and thought
"So words of power still work, that's good but where am I again and what's going on...it's been 3 years since I've been here...what's changed about me."
As he walked over to a puddle of water and looked at himself and thought
"So I am just as I left Dune."
As he saw his long crimson hair that had golden tips, a crimson long sleeved silk Kung Fu shirt with embroidered golden dragon on the back weaving in and out of a large whirlpool and calligraphy followed by a pair of crimson silk pants with white flames and a dark crimson-brown piwafwi with a whirlpool on the back that seem to pulses in and out a deep crimson make their one moment then gone the next.
Naruto pulled up his shelve then looked at his right arm and then at his reflection and smiled as he saw the scabs on his body in a weird pattern.
He then felt his back and felt his katana Kuroi Kaminari (Black lighting) and he could feel both his crysknifes at small of his back and he looked at his left hip and saw an sword hilt made of alluring white wood that had a archaic writing with word Kaze etched in the center.
Looking at his lower arms two bracers that appeared to be made of a mixture between reddish-brown leather and sandstone yet like his sword didn't reflect light also had the same archaic writing. Flexing both his wrists he watched both his hidden blades extend out then with a quick flick they retracted.
His hands were covered in crimson fingerless gloves with a plate on the back. Looking around he peers through the thick mist with heighten sense of sight called "Eye of the Fox" from having fully absorbed the Kyubi youki and freeing her soul, all his senses were heighten.
Over by Tazuna he sees Sakura shaking in fear and Sasuke-teme covered in wounds and bleeding, taking another look at Tazuna Naruto blinked and realized he was now roughly 6 ft tall.
Naruto then heard a scream and thought
"I know that voice."
As he looks at Sakura and sees two water clone charging Sakura and Tazuna with Sasuke laying on the ground out cold.
"Stupid Banshee if didn't know where they were before I do now and why in the nine hells is she running towards them…oh of course teme out cold she must think he's died and finally lost it through she didn't have must to lose.
And of course teme down for the count after running blindly straight at them and he calls me dupe and she calls a baka I wonder if it would be easier to let them die just so I can get a better team?
Wait scratch that they blame me for "getting them killed" and for not sacrificing myself for them.
Also Tazuna with them and he doesn't deserve to die because of their Achilles' heel."
Swiftly drawing Kuroi Kaminari and took off toward the direction the scream came from.
As Naruto approaches he sees the two clones split one goes for banshee and duck but while the other heads for Tazuna.
Before the first clone going for death blow to Sakura can react slices cleanly though its neck decapitating it returning it to water rain down on Sakura as she falls to her knees.
With a quick side step to the left and shunpo to appear behind the last clone and deliver quick stab through it heart and it to dissolve to water.
Naruto took that moment to take a quick look around for any more water clones then turns around to see Sakura kneeling over Sasuke about to tend to his wounds complete disregard to world outside the Uchiha.
Not even realizing that she almost died probably thought he get back up to protect her if she was in any real danger, Naruto narrowed his eyes and said in a demanding voice
"What the hell do you think you're doing Sakura you deserted the client and ran right at the enemy without even bothering to attack or defend the client?"
Saying her name with a small release of his KI.
Sakura not even bothering to look up and still tending to Sasuke injuries screeches
"Sasuke-kun was hurt, he needed help he would've been killed if I didn't help him."
"As for the drunk, Sasuke-kun comes first for who cares if he dies the clones were only trying to kill him not me or Sasuke-kun."
"And don't you tell me what to do Naruto-baka a dead-last like you can't do anything, Sasuke-kun had to save us just like always."
Naruto focus his eyes on Sakura and his azure blue eyes flash purple for a moment the return to blue.
He shunpo behind Sakura and with sword hilt hits her in the back of the head knocking her out.
With a quick one hand sign from the water that was left after Zabuza clones were destroy come together to for two new Mizu bunshin of Naruto.
Reaching down and picking both of them up be their shirts and unceremoniously throws them by Tazuna.
Naruto turns to Tazuna and gives a light bow
"Tazuna I apologies for my scaring like that and regret be on a team who chooses to disregard your life and the mission you hired them for to save their own lives and egos."
"After I this mission is over I suggest you write a formal complaint to Hokage and Village Council for both their action and inaction during this mission as well as Kakashi for putting your unnecessary in danger both now and before when the Demon Brothers attack he say them let them attack to see if they were a threat."
"Seeing that he should sent a message back to Konoha for reinforcement knowing that the next ninja coming to kill you were Jonin level at the very least."
Tazuna stares wide eyed and loose jawed at red head unsure of what just happened. After a few moments his brain kicks in and say in an uncertain voice
"I your really the same Nin a before?"
Naruto turns around and starts walking to where Zabuza is and has Kakashi in the water prison shift his sword to his left and rests in on his shoulder and tills his head so Tazuna can see only half of his face for the angle and say in a low voice
"I'm hurt Tazuna I would of thought you figured it out by know I was the one told you to come to Konoha and ask for ninjas help."
As he half smiles like fox
Tazuna for the second time is slack jawed at what he just heard also stutters
"You…re…you're the Crimson Flash?"
Still walking Naruto still in a low voice declares with his foxy smile getting bigger turning into more of a smirk responding to what Tazuna said
"I've gone by several names when I was outside Konoha that was just one of them but keep it to yourself as you saw my team isn't exactly trustworthy, moreover I try not to use that name too much the bounty keeps going up every time I use it."
Returning his full focus on Zabuza approaches the edge of the water.
As Zabuza looks in his direction he makes four one-hand hand seals that look even to Kakashi if he could see them with his Sharingan look like barely one seal.
Hold the last seal Naruto whispers
"Eien no Yami" (Eternal Darkness)
- - With Zabuza & Kakashi just after Naruto returns from Dune-
"Banshee shrieks"
"Will that was all too easy, so much for the great Kakashi of the Sharingan. You were as easy to trap as it was to kill your poor excuse for Genin. Ha…ha…a...ha…..aaaahhh"
Zabuza says mockery to Kakashi before laughing then cringes, then recoils followed by turning white as a ghost.
"What just happened first he about to kill me then for cringes like he was stabbed in the heart, now he looks like he ready to bolt and get as far from here as he can."
Contemplates Kakashi as he studies Zabuza before hearing loud splashes of water on the shore
"Crap, his going to be pissed, how was I supposed to know he was here…?"
Utters Zabuza darkly as he starts sweating bullets
"Now what is going on, now he scared?
What could be happening in the mist that so bad that it's enough to scare him?
I can't see anything through this mist and haven't heard anything since Sakura screamed.
Sasuke-sama must of unlock his Sharingan and defeated his clones, no no that wouldn't scare the demon of the mist…
NO! that damn Kyubi brat must have unleashed itself but I do sense it foul chakra what the blood mist is happening?"
ponders Kakashi as shadowy figure appears in the mist
"Friend of your Zabuza" says Kakashi sweetly eye smiling
Zabuza scoffs "Only if he in a good mood today" looking like he be walking on pins and needles
As the figure reaches the edge of the shore darkness follows out from him and covers the area rapidly.
"Oh no not th…" Zabuza starts to say before the darkness over takes him and Kakashi
Kakashi feels the prison dispenses on him then a void of endless darkness.
"Will this is… even my Sharingan can't see through this genjutsu…is even a genjutsu at all…"
forming the release seal Kakashi mutters
"Kai"
"Wait where's my hand or more importantly where I'm I? …I can't feel or see anything…and….I can't use or feel chakra crap I on water or was I must be sinking moreover drowning"
As Kakashi sinks to his water grave, Zabuza isn't doing much better flaring his chakra to both get out of the Illusion and stay above the water.
"I know you're there,…(silence)… release me already you had your fun I can't keep this much longer…." Yells Zabuza
-Naruto-
As Zabuza starts to sink the darkness fades and feels a blade at his throat.
"What have I told you about just jumping into danger like that it's going to be the death of you one these days."
"I can't always be around to save you" Snickers Naruto
Panting Zabuza responds
"Last I check I was about to be killed by you not save from you."
"Not only that I was only going to kill the ninja not the client."
"How was I to know that you were with them you never told me you were going with them?"
Laughing "Ok I guess I deserved that and you did help me awaken my bloodline but next time think before you act."
"You're lucky it was me with them or Meizu and Gozu would be died or interrogated in Konoha."
"I wasn't easy rescuing them from Kakashi and making sure he didn't kill them."
"I sent them ahead to watch the bridge and docks."
"Haku get you girly ass out here I thought I told you to keep no-brow here under control so he doesn't get himself killed?"
I mirror of ice ahead and out walk a mist hunter-nin.
"You told me to make sure he doesn't kill himself after I saw you take out the mizu clones I figure to would handle the rest."
"You damn traitor you know he was here, that was him and didn't tell him."
"Remove that damn mask I hate when you wear it, because I can always tell you grinning at me behind that damn thing" Zabuza-san snaps at Haku
"I hate to burst your bubble but I didn't know that was him I only said that you shouldn't have sent Meizu-san and Gozu-san to attack them only to watch them."
"As for this fighting here I told you we should wait till we heard from Uzumaki-sama since we were in any hurry to take care of a small team of Konoha ninja."
Haku says with a flare of KI when he said Konoha as he removes his mask smiling
"Enough! You two act more like brother and sister then master and student."
"I told you to infiltrate Gato's Organization so we can remove him and free Wave, and to not take risk because Gato always kills anyone that he doesn't need after they have out lived their usefulness for him so he doesn't have to pay them."
"Our spies from Kiri have already given us reports on large amounts of refuges, slaves, and the like that are being sold by Gato to all over the elemental nations."
"However we both know who is buying the most of them."
"Orochimaru" Zabuza spits out like the name is poison
"I know but you haven't since how Gato treat his so called merchandise his not far from what Orochimaru is doing at the rate he going."
Raising an eyebrow Naruto clarifies
"And that why we are here Wave is too close to Whirlpool and Kiri too ignore what happen for long before it begins to affect our plans, not to mention are allies."
"I'm well aware of that, it won't happen again." Zabuza responds
Naruto smiles
"Good I'll stay with Tazuna and guard him, since it pretty clear that Kakashi and his Genin can't handle it."
"You return to Gato and find all his business information you can without giving yourself away."
"I'll just tell Kakashi that a Hunter-nin showed up and drove you off but couldn't finish you off but he did injury you pretty badly."
"It half-true since Haku is playing one."
Haku ponders before saying
"However Gato won't like us coming back having failed what should we tell him?"
Scoffing Zabuza responds
"I may not like it but Haku right us coming back won't get us any further in his trust just farther."
Naruto takes a thinking pose
"That's true it may even make him suspect you are going to double cross him or take advantage of him." Smirking
"How about you just tell him that Orochimaru, sent some of his Oto-nin to get Sasuke and Kakashi for their Sharingan."
"And that their interference with you prevented you from killing Tazuna."
"This'll put them on guard in which they called for reinforcements."
Zabuza smirked wickedly under his bandaged face
"That's perfect not only does it get him to question his transactions with Orochimaru putting them on hold till we kill him, it also remove his suspicion away from making it easier to get our job down."
Haku states "That will work quite well but we need some proof to back up our claim, making it harder for Gato to believe that Orochimaru is going behind his back like this."
With a nod Naruto start making seals in the air with chakra using both hands.
After a minute of making seals with his hands which were so fast his hands were almost invisible to both Haku and Zabuza, Naruto finish hold the last to seals then slashing his arms in front of his chest in a "X" design talking in some ancient language.
"Faerz'undus Sharulg Belaern El'lar" Says Naruto then
"Kai"
A bright purple flash followed by a purple slash in space appears.
"Well that wasn't so bad last time it took one-fourth of my chakra to open now it's hardly uses any at all."
"I wonder if it because I passed the test."
"Give me a moment to get it so you guys can head back to Gato's hideout."
Reaching into the purple void Naruto then pulls out a scroll.
"Here a squad of Oto-nin that I kill a few weeks ago."
"I though they may have had a bounty but none of them did."
"Should be more than enough proof for Gato."
"Just tell that Kakashi killed then left them for a retrieval team to pick up."
Taking the scroll Zabuza looks over at the shore
"Shouldn't we just kill the Uchiha now save us trouble later not to mention Kakashi?"
Shaking his head, Naruto starts walking to shore with Zabuza and Haku flaking him.
"No they have their uses."
"Orochimaru is coming for the Uchiha during the Chunin exam giving us a perfect opportunity to take him and Sound out and free Ta no Kuni (LandofRice)."
As for Kakashi if he dies now the mission would be over, if not they would send a team of Anbu at the very least to investigate what happen.
Not exactly what we need right now wouldn't you say?"
The three nin approach a nervous Tazuna, Naruto step forward and kneels down next to and does a few hands seal making his hands glow green and hover them over Kakashi
"Hm seems he tried to break my Illusion."
"Then ended up using all his chakra, other than that and a few cuts his fine."
moving his hands towards Sasuke
"Ok I my hate the teme but Zabuza was it really necessary to toy with him this much."
"Most of this cut are barely not serve, I see you aim has gotten better at least."
Zabuza turns to face Naruto
"Did you say something?"
Naruto sneers at Zabuza
"Don't do that again one Kakashi is more than enough."
Stands up and face Tazuna.
"Well that taken care of Tazuna-san I like you to meet some friends of my Zabuza and Haku."
"You already saw the other two Meizu and Gozu earlier."
"They infiltrated Gato's Organization by having him hire them to kill you."
"That way it was easier for us to know what we were up against and stop any attempts to kill you and to take out Gato once and for all."
Turning to Zabuza and Haku
"Return to Gato and have Haku pass in information you get to me."
"I already go word that they set the perimeter around Wave to keep up wanted guest out."
"Hai" responds Zabuza and Haku at both Shunshin away
Naruto looks at the down team 7, then creates two more shadow clones with a half cross seal with one hand to join the other that he made to save Kakashi from drowning.
The clones pick up Kakashi, Sakura, and Sasuke and the four starts to walk to Tazuna house.
Tazuna shaking his head then jogs to catch up and walk alongside the real Naruto
"So you had this all planned from the start didn't you?"
"I mean the two that attacked us earlier you just stood there, I first thought that you were just afraid but now I see the true."
"You were in shook that they attacked weren't you?"
"You are correct, I had it all planned, though like most plans that don't always turn out the way to picture them turning out."
"We knew about what was happening in Wave for some time but there wasn't much we could do at the time, at least not without drawing attention to ourselves."
"So we I heard that you were going to hire bodyguards I sent word for you to go to Konoha."
"Then I sent Zabuza and Haku along with Meizu and Gozu to be hired to kill you so that I wouldn't have to worry about showing myself and protect you from the shadows."
"I also had other ninja block off Wave and make it look like Gato hire them."
"They stop anyone from entering Wave and give me a heads up in case Gato did hire more ninja or other outside party tries to take Wave for themselves."
"Though it didn't work out quite as I plan it, probably turned out for the better since we can now sow the seeds of doubt and mistrust Gato has in his clients making mine get closer to him so we can take him out."
"However that isn't our only goal we also want to take over all his businesses and assets."
"Wave will run the businesses while we take assets and help rebuild our forces and villages like …, …, …, and other villages that have join us or may in the future."
"It will also be used to help our allies like Wave and other villages with trade and of goods you or they offer, if you agree to join our alliance that we are building."
Naruto with a smile on his face
Tazuna turn to Naruto with a confused look
"Wait I thought you are a Leaf-nin?"
"Why wasn't Konoha one of the villages not to mention I have never heard of any alliance like this before?"
"Well that a long story but for starters I guess we can start with Konoha, well I not really a Leaf-nin not in the legally anyway."
"You see not long after I was born I had a demon that attack Konoha sealed inside of me. Now before to start freaking out its gone now I set it free and purified it soul."
"Now I have all it power though I can't completely control it so I seal it away so I can use only what I can control and get use to what I can't."
"Anyway after the sealing pretty much everyone wanted me kill for holding the demon. Lucky or not they decided that I was to be used a deterrent to other village as their secret jinchuriki which means human sacrifice."
"Basically I was their outlet for all the hate inside the village and deterrent to stop other villages from attacking with no choose but to live and die when they tell me too literally."
"Because they didn't want anyone to raise me or take me in they made me adult in law after I was a month old and put me in the orphanage."
"I stayed their till a month before my third birthday when they kicked out for last time and told me never to come back since I was adult and old enough to take care of myself."
"The next couple weeks got progressively worse. In the orphanage I got beaten and was hardly feed but once they kick me out I was left to the mercy of the villagers."
"I beaten to an inch of my life multiple times daily all the way till my birthday where they finally had enough of me decided to kill me."
"I was for the most part died for a few minutes to an hour I don't really know for sure but I do know that after I died the Kyubi almost got out because after I waken I saw the damage that it did to where they killed me at."
"At the time I didn't know what happened or why most of the village hated me and wanted me died till I was given my parents old apartment."
"Though I didn't know it was theirs till I found some scrolls they left me and told me what happened to me and what I had sealed in me."
Naruto laughed dryly
"Not something a three year old should have to find out by himself with no one to help get through it."
After a few moments in remembrance Naruto continues
"Anyways since I was mark as an adult barely a year old which is something either the council or the Hokage can't do legally they used a loophole that removed me as citizen of Konoha then made me a civilian adult by saying I move to Konoha after the attack and became a citizen."
"However if they had look closer they would have seen that I was never a citizen of Konoha in the first place just like my parents because both of them were Whirlpool ninja that later came to Konoha."
"Konoha like most every village has a law that makes it where if you aren't born in Konoha or declared a citizen then by law you are a citizen of the same village or country as your parents are."
"Basically where your born doesn't madder you become a citizen of the village your parents are from making me even if Whirlpool was gone a citizen of Uzushiogakure and just taken resident of Konoha not a citizen of Konoha."
"Furthermore if your parents are ninja then you become a ninja from the same village just like them."
"If you have parents from two villages then you can become a ninja of either but defaults to which ever village you join as one."
"So when they tried to make me adult and a citizen of Konoha that falsified records and broken multiple laws making my ninja license null and void."
"Not to mention my parents left me, my birth certificate stating my ninja and citizen of Whirlpool."
Naruto and party reach the edge of the forest and were able to see Tazuna house
"As for why Konoha isn't part of the alliance if you haven't already figured it out they just aren't trustworthy anymore and only become shadow of its former self."
"My allies and I have all agreed that any alliance with Konoha would be one-sided with them trying to take advantage of us."
"Well I can't say I understand how a village that pushes teamwork and equalities with each other can treat a child like that but know you won't have that problem with us."
"As for the alliance we can discuss it after Wave is free and Gato is gone."
The group reaches the house and stands at the front door and Tazuna knocks
"Well it's not much but we have a few extra rooms for the other Leaf-nin and you. And you can meet my daughter and grandson."
"I can't say about the rest of your group but I know that their like you."
"My grandson Inari is not in the best mood since his father was killed by Gato but I sure once he see you some of the strength and courage of your will rub off on him."
"As for my daughter Tsunami she a little rough around the edges not to mention her temp…."
As Tazuna was talking the door opened a beautiful blue hair woman appears hearing what the old man was saying followed by hitting him over the head with a frying pan which seem to appear out of thin air.
Smiling happily Tsunami turns to look at who was with her father.
Looking up she saw long crimson hair that had golden tips, a crimson silk shirt, and a pair of black silk pants.
Looks at face into his eyes, a deep azure blue that seem to draw her in cause a blush to appear on her face.
After what she thought was a few moments but was really a minute or two she realize that she was staring which on cause her blush to grow even bigger she tries to introduce herself through stuttering
"Hi…i…i mmmy na...am..me...es...s Tsunami."
All the while looking into Naruto eyes
Naruto see the reaction he was getting from couldn't help but laugh inward at how cute she was then looking right back into her eyes giving her one of his signature foxy smiles.
"It's nice to meet to Tsunami. I'm Naruto, Naruto Uzumaki."
All the while looking into Tsunami eyes and smiling brightly
The next thing Naruto see is Tsunami face turn a deep shade of red before she start to fall backwards.
A quick shunpo and Naruto appears behind her and catches Tsunami.
Looking at Tsunami he sees a bright smile on gracing her face.
"Will looks I still got it and I didn't even kiss her."
"She reminders me of Hinata when she faints, too bad, Hinata is pretty cute but engaged to Kiba which must really suck because all he ever looks at when he seen or talk to her is her chest.
Really even with that coat any fool can tell she well endowed.
However too blatantly stare at someone like that isn't right especially with uncontrolled lust in your eyes.
Well I should put Kakashi, Sakura, and Sasuke to bed and take care of Tsunami and Tazuna till they wake up soon….man what a long and in a very Shikamaru moment a troublesome day."
Giving a mental command to one of his clone another clone appears and picks up Tazuna and sets him on one of the chairs in the living room and while the real Naruto gently lays Tsunami on the sofa.
Looking he see his other clones coming in caring team 7.
Remembering what Sakura said to him after he saved her, and how Sasuke ignored the mission to boast his ego, followed by Kakashi blind favoritism for Sasuke and complete disregard for his so called team, Naruto fell into a positively pranksters mood after remembering.
As sinister smile appears on his face, with a mental command to the other clones the same smile appears on their faces which had became known as Naruto's pranksters smile and all know when they see Naruto with it that nothing good was going to happen.
As his clones took their cargo, I mean fellow teammates up stairs to their room Naruto decides it would be better wait for Tazuna and Tsunami to awake up so he can brief Tsunami on the situation and answers any questions before they turn in for the night.
As he can already hear Tazuna waking up and see Tsunami coming around.
Oh yes this mission should prove to be quite entertaining at the very least if Naruto has anything to say about it, if he stuck with a cyclops, banshee, and duck but may as well have a little fun, well fun for him not them.