Before I release chapter 7, I want to remaster chapter 1, 2, and 3, as I got feedback saying that it's unreadable. So what I will do is remaster them. Here is chapter 1, remastered!
It was dark. It was raining. Flying fish were poking at Greg's house. Greg happens to be a terrarian who made it far enough to get full platinum gear. He has white skin, wears full platinum armor, but somehow makes it transparent, so someone would see his clothes and hair. He wore a yellow shirt, yellow pants, and he had brown hair. His eyes were blue. He was unlike any other terrarian. He was a bit abnormal. He then sensed dark aura. He went outside and found a man with brown skin, gray eyes, a black shirt, black pants, and black hair. He looked extremely shady.
"Hello?" Greg asked while looking at him.
"Greetings. My name is Ithen, or as some call me, Dark Doom. Your name?" Ithen said.
"My name is Gregory, but most people call me Greg." Greg said.
"Why are you out so late? You should be home by now." Ithen commented.
"You're right. I'll be going home now." Greg lied.
"Good." Ithen said before walking away. Greg followed close behind, before Ithen built a shrine. He placed an odd looking magic mirror in the middle, which started flashing in between worlds. It stopped at one would, showing many images. It showed a boy in purple hair doing chores, a lamia fighting against a goddess, a dragon girl taking over a city, and a raging storm sinking a ship.
"Good. Now fuse." The odd magic mirror released a pulse of energy, before the ground started splitting apart. New land filled it in, and new monsters showed up. Greg stared at Ithen. No, not Ithen, Dark Doom. Greg jumped high into the air and landed in front of Dark Doom.
"What have you done?!" Greg shouted.
"I've simply fused these worlds." Dark Doom said.
"I know you're not fusing them for a good reason." Greg claimed.
"Heh. You're smarter than you look. Fine, I'll reveal myself. I'm Dark Doom, the master of darkness. I am fusing these worlds so I can rule both worlds." Dark Doom said.
"Whatever happens, I won't let you do that!" Greg shouted, before unsheathing his platinum broadsword.
"You can try." Dark Doom taunted, before unsheathing two blood butcherers, before rushing towards him. They clashed, his sword met with his two stronger swords. Greg slashed at Dark Doom, launching him towards the magic mirror, in an attempt to shatter it. He recovered before he could hit the mirror, and jumped into the air, spinning around with his two swords, making him dangerous to get near. Greg rushed towards him, ducked underneath his blades, and kicked his legs. He fell to the ground, as being kicked in the legs while spinning can really ruin someone's balance.
"Ancient Darkness: Speed!" Dark Doom shouted before speeding up real quickly. Greg just barely dodged an attack, before he launched numerous attacks on him. Greg barely blocked them, feeling like someone was guiding his movements. It was a bad time to feel like that, because he left his entire actions to that force. Now, something was guiding his actions, but it wasn't strong enough to move him entirely yet. Dark Doom saw an opening, and sliced at Greg's arm. He barely dodged it, before he was punched in the stomach and thrown into the air. He recovered rather quickly, and got back up. He felt something hit him in the back, before he fell to the ground. He looked up to see a boulder wedged into the ground next to where he fell. He realized he was struck by the boulder, and saw Dark Doom standing over him, smiling evilly as he faded from consciousness.
He woke up in an inn. A various number of monsters could've gotten him, and since he's in THIS world, raped. A woman greeted him when he woke up. He figured she was the innkeeper.
"You're up? That's good. We found you out cold in the forest. Had to send in a few soldiers to pick you up." The innkeeper said.
"Yes, I did happen to be out cold. A boulder fell on my back, and happened to knock me out. It's a miracle I'm not dead right now." Greg said.
"Or enslaved, eaten, or violated." The innkeeper added.
"Wait, what?! What the fuck? The only monsters I know are bent on killing you, not eating you, enslaving you, or violating you!" Greg shouted.
"What? Where are you from? We're from Earth, where monster girls try to rape you. It's an act forbidden by Ilias." The innkeeper said.
"Who the hell is Ilias?" Greg thought, but knew not to say that. He saw a purple haired boy walk in with bandages, liquid, and other liquids in jars in hand.
"Ah, there you are, Luka. Thanks for being such a dear and fetching these so quickly." The innkeeper praised. "I think that'll be all, you can return to your chores and practice."
"Yes ma'am." He said before running off.
"Who was he?" Greg asked her.
"His name is Luka. Today he's going to be baptized as a hero in the name of Ilias." She responded.
"Alright. Do you mind if I leave?" Greg asked.
"You need to heal. I'd suggest you stay here." She said.
"I have a bunch of lesser healing potions on me." He said, reaching into his pockets and pulling out some lesser healing potions, and drinking them, quickly healing his wounds.
"Alright then, you can go. I must warn you, there are monsters outside this village." She said.
"I'll be able to handle them." Greg said, before getting up and walking out. He explored the village. He looked in the weapon shop, and found out that most of the weapons there were weak compared to his. Hours later, he was out in the village, exploring some more.
"Everybody, hide in your house! A monster is in the forest. Hide before she makes it to the village!" A villager shouted. The town quickly went into chaos.
"Seriously? My god, it's just ONE monster." Greg started to run towards the forest. He saw the purple haired boy running towards the forest too, and he caught up to him.
"Sir, you need to go home. I need to defend the village, and I want to protect the citizens." He said.
"Kid, it's just ONE monster. I can handle it." Greg said.
"Well I'm going with you." He said.
"Alright then. Let's go." Greg said while running next to Luka. Eventually, they found the monster, which happened to be a slime girl. Luka stared at the slime in amazement, while Greg was ready to unsheathe his sword.
"Am I the first monster you've ever seen, by any chance?" The slime girl asked them.
"Y-yes." He said, as a chill ran down his spine.
"First monster GIRL. Most of the monsters I've seen aren't like you." Greg answered.
"If you surrender to me, I'll make you feel good." The slime girl said.
"I can't let you do that. It's one of Ilias' five commandments. Thou shall not have intercourse with a monster." He stated.
"I'm not interested in that stuff, and I won't let you do that." Greg said. The slime girl attacked the boy, and he got stuck in her slime.
"Now sit back and let me make you feel good." The slime girl told the boy.
"I can't believe we're fighting for our virginity, and for the virginity of the town. Wait, didn't that innkeeper mention being enslaved, eaten, or violated? She'd probably enslave the town. This fight has a bigger effect than I thought." Greg thought to himself, before he sliced at the slime girl where the boy was, freeing him.
"Ouch." She said before recombining, recovering health.
"It's useless. She'll just keep recombining." The boy said.
"Come on kid, we'll find a way somehow." Greg said, before pointing his sword at her. The boy attacked, but she easily dodged him.
"How could an attack that slow hit me?" The slime girl taunted.
"Kid! You think you could attack any faster?!" Greg shouted at the boy.
"I can try!" The boy shouted before flailing wildly. The slime girl took damage. She tried to recombine, but she couldn't heal as much.
"It works!" The boy shouted. Greg jumped into the air and came down, piercing through the slime girl. She recombined, but she was beaten too severely to fight.
"You two are mean!" She shouted before running away.
"Thanks for helping me, I almost lost!" The boy said.
"No problem. I never got your name by the way." Greg said.
"Oh, my name is Luka." Luka said.
"My name is Gregory, but call me Greg." Greg said.
"Alright then Greg." Luka said, before they heard a loud crash. They rushed towards where they heard the crash to see a crater, with an unconscious lamia in it. Luka woke her up.
"Uhh, Miss Monster, are you alright?" Luka asked after waking her.
"Where am I? Who are you?" She asked.
"I'm Luka, and you are in the Ilias continent." Luka said.
"What happened?" She asked. Luka decided not to say anything.
"I honestly have no idea what happened. All I know is, a boulder hit me and I ended up here." Greg lied, not talking about the fight between him and Dark Doom. The lamia coiled around Luka, and bound Greg with magic.
"Miss Monster, I really have to get going." Luka said.
"Why must you leave so soon?" She asked them.
"I need to get baptized as a hero." Luka stated.
"I need to find my house. I have lots of good things in the chests there." Greg said, not knowing where his house was.
"So you're going to be a hero? Why didn't you kill me when I was unconscious?" She asked Luka, unaware of what Greg said.
"Not all monsters are bad. I just couldn't kill you like that. I want monsters and humans to coexist." Luka revealed.
"Monsters from Terraria can't change their ways." Greg stated, but he was again ignored.
"What a stupid idea." She exclaimed, before looking at Greg.
"So you have a house with good stuff in it? What did it have?" She asked Greg.
"First off, let Luka go and I'll tell you." Greg said.
"Very well." Alice said, letting Luka go.
"Secondly, I'll answer your question when you tell me your name." Greg said.
"My name is Alipheese Fateburn XVI, but call me Alice." Alice said.
"Alright Alice, my house had lots of potions, copper bars, silver bars, gold bars, platinum bars, and food." Greg said.
"If you find your house, give me some of your food." Alice told Greg.
"No." Greg said.
"What?" Alice questioned.
"I just met you, and now you want food? No." Greg said.
"Do you know who I am?" Alice asked menacingly.
"Someone of royalty, because nobody is just named Alipheese Fateburn XVI normally." Greg said.
"Close." Alice said.
"Queen of Monsters?" Greg asked.
"Closer." Alice said.
"Monster Lord?" Greg asked.
"That's right. Now I'd say if you find your house, you'd give me the food." Alice said.
"I need it to survive, and I don't know you." Greg replied. Her eyes flashed white.
"You will give me food when you find your house." Alice said.
"Well, no." Greg said.
"What? How did my magic not affect you?" Alice asked.
"The light protects me. I'll be taking my leave now." Greg said.
"I want more information." She said, before coiling around him.
"No. I don't know anything else." Greg said.
"You seem to be from another world. What can you tell me about that other world?" Alice asked.
"Nothing. I will leave now." Greg said.
"Not until I have answers." Alice replied.
"Fine. Ancient Light: Strength!" Greg shouted, before glowing yellow and breaking free.
"What the?! How did you break free from the monster lord so easily?!" Alice shouted.
"I said the light protects me. Ancient Light: Speed!" He shouted, before running back to the village.
That is chapter one remastered. Here are the differences: In the original, I had grammer issues and spelling issues. In the original, Greg just got knocked out right away, and Dark Doom was suddenly evil without explanation. He had no real name either. Another thing is that Greg was suddenly able to get up right after being knocked out and taken to the inn. I fixed that. I also expressed Alice's love for food, but I think I did it too much in this. In the original, randomly Greg just somehow magically finds out Alice is the monster lord, and even though I said there would be mods, I barely will include them anyways. Why did I just mention mods? I gave Greg a wristband that magically makes him immune to magic. I now made it so the light protects him, just like he's able to use it, it can use him if he lets it. I misspelled Ilias' name throughout all of chapter 1, 2, and 3. You know how I said Dark Doom would be the most powerful villain in the story? Well, scratch that, he becomes the most powerful at the end. Not right in the beginning. And he doesn't just waltz right up into heaven and fucking destroy Ilias, and have her somehow go into her final form right when the fucking game starts, and she gets fucking obliterated again. I'm not going to do that this time. And when Greg and Luka fought Granberia, to just magically make Greg OP as fuck, and throw Dark Doom in there "just for fun" so I can show you his abilities too. I'm not going to do that. I'm going to try to improve the first three chapters. If there are any suggestions you have, please leave a review telling me. Thank you for reading this, and thank you for putting up with me at the end right now. Have a nice day!