Hello people. I am writing this short part of a new story. It's pretty much a demo. I just want to see if you guys are liking the idea of this story. So please review this if you like it, what changes should be made. Things like that. I would love to know what you guys are thinking. I also need a title for this story so if you like this, please give me a title suggestion. That'd be wonderful. So please enjoy.
Her life was perfect. She had a wonderful husband, who she's been with for 2 years now. A loving family. Great friends. The job she's always wanted. Her life was starting off well.
That was all nice until, these dreams started.
It started a couple weeks ago. She thought it was cause of a movie she watched, or one more glass of wine than usual. But when she didn't drink or saw something, it would still happen.
She could never tell her husband about them, since they were about someone, other than her husband. Someone she could never talk about since he was his best friend.
The dream always started the same, but ended differently. Each time.
It started with her in a dark room. There was no windows and only one door. She would sit the room for what seemed like hours. Then the door would open, and he walked in. When he walks in the room slowly gets brighter. And in the room, there is a bed with red satin sheets. As he gets closer to her, she wonders what is going to happen this time. She looks down and sees that the floor is a dark wooden floor. When she looks up again he is right in front of her. She stares up into dark coal-like eyes. And coal-like eyes stare into light tinted purple ones.
He stretches out his hand and she takes it and stands up. He pulls up her chin to face him and slowly leans in but instead of kissing her lips he kisses her cheek, and moves down her cheek to her jaw line and down her neck.
She tilts her head so there's more access to her neck for him. She moans lightly as he hushes her. He reaches down and slowly lifts up her shirt and takes it off to see a lacy black bra.
He kisses down her collar bone to the beginning of her breasts and unclips her bra and slips of off her shoulders.
She breaths heavy and moans as she feels the sensation happing to her chest. She grips his shoulders and tries to step back but he stops her and pulls her closer.
He takes one pink nipple and pulls in between his teeth. He sucks it gently, till it turned a dusty red. He slowly pulls down her pants and underwear so she was fully naked for his eyes only.
She breaths harder, and moans. Then she feels someone shaking her.
"Hinata. Wake up."
It was a light voice. He stepped back and smiled.
"Hinata. Wake up honey."
He whispers as he walks out. "See you soon Hinata"
She wakes up and is drenched in sweat.
"Hinata. Are you okay?"
She breathes heavy and look at her husband.
"Y-Yeah. Just a bad dream," she says.
He smiles and kisses her cheek. "Okay let's go get breakfast," he says. "Yeah," she says as he gets out of bed.
She looks at herself. The same dream. She still feels the kisses and marks. She looks at the open window.
"Maybe it wasn't a dream," she says.
Well how was that? I hope you guys enjoyed it. Please let me know. Also help me think of a title. Remember this is a demo of a new story. I'll see you soon.
~~WriterwithStyle123 xxoo
