3rd person Chapter One: a normal day?
Zander woke up to the sound of his alarm clock. Wishing it was still summer, he got out of his bed and got ready for his first day of his senior year in high school.
He went down stairs to his mother, father, and little brother in the kitchen. His mother said," Good Morning Sleeping Beauty", with sarcasm," I thought I woke you up 20 minutes ago." He said," I didn't hear anything from anyone this morning." She came back with," whatever." then stormed out of the kitchen. His father gave him an evil glare then went to cheer up his wife. He thought to himself," I don't know why she does that to me." then went outside to wait for the bus with his brother. His Brother's name was Kyle and was the the only one in the family he cared about. When the bus pulled up he sat down with his best friend Jake ,but nobody calls him that every body calls him Four Eyes because of his glasses. From then on Zander didn't have much to worry about. The day went Quick and the kids that bullied him became his friends. On the way home though was when things got bad when he and his brother got of the bus the saw a hole in the ground that looked like a portal off of a syfy movie so they didn't touch it. Next morning he went to the bus stop and it was still there then while he wasn't looking his brother jumped in the portal and disappeared. Zander turned around and knew what had happened and went after him.
Chapter Two: a Different World!
Zander woke up next to something that looked like a Pony From MLP:FIM which was staring at him he screamed. Then it started talking," Zander it's me Kyle what happened to us." but he just kept screaming. After about five minutes he saw something in the sky then he recognized where he was and spoke," I think that we are in Equestria." Kyle said," how can you tell." Then he pointed to a rainbow trail after what was flying then smiled. Kyle smiled to, then said." Rainbow Dash." the end of both words prolonged. After the Awe struck moment Zander said," we need names for in this world," then Kyle nodded and said,"we both have wings so names related to flying I will be Thunder Struck," Zander said ," I am Shadow Blitz,"
Relating to his black body, dark blue mane, and his dark blue/purple eyes. They both nodded and tried to fly but didn't succeed at first but got the hang of it quickly and followed Rainbow Dash to Ponyville. To their surprize they were not watched or followed by anyone else and kept following Rainbow to probly the Tree in town which they knew was Twilight's House, but on the way Rainbow disapeared then they stoped and said simultaniously," we are lost." then after they landed all of the sudden Zander got bucked several times in the side of the head and got knocked out. then kyle said," Zander Wake up I Mhhhhhhh." " WHY WERE YOU FOLLOWING ME," the pony said covering Kyle's Mouth.
Chapter Three: "meeting" the Six
Kyle Broke out of the pony's hold and Punched, a powerful punch, the pony knocking it on the ground. Astounded by the power of this pony she got up and said," Ow! You hit pretty hard for a kid," then Kyle Noticed the Voice it was Rainbow Dash. He Froze the said," I am SO sorry for punching you but my brother taught me when to defend my self," Rainbow said," is that your brother,"
pointing to Zander. Kyle nodded Rainbow then asked," again why were you following me." Kyle said," I will let My brother explain I am not good at explaining things." Rainbow nodded and said," I think we should get him to the hospital he doesn't look good." kyle nodded and they started walking to Ponyville. On the way Rainbow asked Kyle what his name was Kyle said," oh my name is ky- i mean Thunder Struck my friends call me Thunder though your Rainbow Dash Right." Rainbow nodded and asked," why did you stop saying the first word." kyle said by accident," Because We are not from this world."
Rainbow said," what do you mean?" ," that is Quite Literal," Thunder said. Dash zoned out for a second and said," I will be right back stay here." and flew off. About an hour after she left he got and fell asleep.
Right after he fell asleep Rainbow came Back with all of her friends. They all saw the Two and were dumbstruck Twilight asked," what do you mean they didn't come from here they look normal." then she saw something Zander had a Cross Neclace that said ' see no evil, feel no evil' and on the back ' in memory of my sister katelyn 2002-2011' Twilight took back what she saidand changed it to," Spike Write to Celestia and have her meet us here."
Spike was already writing when she finished then they all made camp for the night.
as of this moment i will only use their pony names
Shadow Blitz's Pov Chapter Four: a Rude Awakining
When I woke it was still dark outside but there were tents right next to me one withthat still had lights in them that kind of freaked me out. my brother was gone and I couldn't see anything because my eyes wern't ajusted yet. once my eyes ajusted I went over to the tent with the light on to see Twilight Reading a book about something and my brother sleeping in a sleeping bag. I freaked out and was trying to be quiet when I heard some rustling in the forest next to me and i got quiet then out came Two timberwolves as I could tell and they saw me and walked slowly towards me. then all of the sudden my brother screamed and looked out the tend to see me backing up. Then I felt like I was being watched by something and I looked at my brother and put my hoof up to my lips to signal be quiet and be ready. when I was done signaling my brother I heard gasps as the timberwolves were right in front of me then I stomped on the ground and my brother jumped out of the tent and smashed one of the timberwolf's face into a tree with a branch .At that moment I backed and flew right at the last timberwolf and punched it hard in the face it fell over but got back up fast I finished it off then. I went over to my brother seeing that he was ok and asked," are you ok? and why did you scream?"
he said," I had a dream about the timber wolves killing you."and he started crying. After about five minutes of him sobbing he calmed down enought that I heard "Is he done Crying" and I said,"Rainbow Dash, he is done Crying you girls can come out now." in an angry-ish Voice even though I wasn't angry but happy. They all came out and Rainbow Said to Thunder," Wow kid I knew you hit hard but to break a timberwolf's face Wow," she was smiling allong with the reast of them then I asked Twilight," Twilight I am sure you have questions about something." Than Twilight asked for the rest of the girls ," how do you know who we are I know he knew because he woke up after we got here." I said ," because we followed Rainbow Until She knocked me out and right before I saw the timberwolves I checked your tent for my brother because he stays up late and seeing that is about midnight I cheacked the tent with the light on." they all questioned me for an hour before I in the middle of Rarity asking me a question I fell asleep.
Ill be back with more later this week but about the same amount of chapters though i want to pace my self B
