Human Nature/Family of Blood Rewrite

I'm writing a rewrite of these episodes as i was thinking on how intresting it would be with Rose and how much John Smith's secret love he inherited from The Doctor would make him react and his human hormones.

Chapter 1- The Dream

"Get down!" The Doctor shouted, running to Rose's side quickly when the lazer just missed her and hit the console with a big exsplosion. "Rose...you alright" He anxiously said, checking her for any damage by running his hands up and down her back.

"I'm Fine, I'm fine. Stop worrying" She quickly said, trying to stop the feeling of his hands running up and down her back, then suddenely pulling her to her feet and cradling her wrists.

"Did they see you" He said in a no nonsence tone, looking deep into her face to see the answer when she started stuttering with uncertainty. "I...I don't think so...they...might of catched a glimpse. I don't know...or..."

"Rose it's important, did they see your face!" He impatiently said, cutting her stuttering of and rocking her backwards and forwards eagerly with his hands.

Rose then gave a quick thought "No, they couldn't of. Besides, your big head would of been in the way in the first place." She playfully said, watching him turn around and look at her with hurt eyes.

"Oi!" He squeeked, running to the console screen and groaning frustratidly at the readings "Their following us" He aggrivatedly said, pulling his hair in annoyance and staring into deep space, trying to think of a statagy. "Their never going to stop either. Stolen Vortex Manipulator you see" He quickly said when he saw Rose about to open her mouth to ask how. He then thought of an idea and turned round to look at the Chamelian arch hanging above his head. "I'm going to have to do it. Only choice we have" He mutted to himself, leaving Rose trying to figure what the hell he was on about. Which she mainly did every time he went head first in a tricky cituation. "Rose you trust me don't you?" He nervously said, realising that would sound like an insult to Rose by now. And her face without doubt said that.

"Err excuse me. We're like family me and you by now. What sort of question is that Mr" She exclaimed, putting her hands on her hips demandingly.

"Yeah, sorry but save the argueing later. Because this all depends on you Rose" He more seriously said, running round the console to collect something then running back towards her, shoving a strange old fashioned watch in her face. "Because this watch Rose. This watch is..."

End of chapter

Finished first chapter. Hope you like it. I might change Rose's job from what Martha was in the episodes (maid) to like a libarian or something more intresting. Next chapter, pulses raise when John Smith tries to hit on Rose. And Rose tries to ignore it

see ya xxx