Here is the first chapter of one in like 20 stories I have in the works, this story was originally going to be a lot darker and grimmer, I was a bit tired when I wrote this so, If you guys want me to I could rewrite it so it more like it was supposed to be, btw it will still be kinda dark as you can probably see, also it was really only going to be about Tai, Kari, and Sora but it changed a bit as I wrote it as you can see. Anyway I'm not the one of the best writers by far, but I have some decent Ideas so I figured I would try them out. Tell me what you think.
Don't own digimon
Eyes were filled with tears as young ten year old Sora Takenouchi scanned the dim waiting room, between her own sobs. Sora's legs were pressed up against her on the small uncomfortable metal chair she was on. On the empty chair on her right was a small package with holes in it. Thousands of emotions swirled around her head, she felt dizzy, she wanted to throw up. She was startled a little when she felt a warm arm wrap around her. She looked up slowly to her left, to find her mother looking down at her trying to comfort her. Sora locked eyes shortly with her mom, she wanted to smile just a little, as a gesture to thank her mom. But she couldn't do it, and she quickly began to sob hard again, but not before wrapping her arms around her mom, crying hard into her chest. In the midst of all her sorrow something else powerful was burning, it was anger. The words the nurse said to her, burned in the back of her mind.
Sora heard his heavy breathing as she approached the room. All of a sudden someone grabbed her roughly and unkindly by the arm.
"relatives only" the nurse said dragging her to the waiting room, with a look in her eye like she didn't care at all what happened to him.
"NO PLEASE LET ME IN I HAVE TO SEE HIM IT COULD BE THE LAST TIME I EVER DO, PLEASE" Sora sobbed fighting the nurse with all her strength.
"I don't care" the nurse responded sharply.
Sora saw a doctor standing near them " PLEASE MAKE HER STOP, I HAVE TO GIVE HIM SOMETHING, I…I LOVE HIM!" she screamed at the doctor who diverted his eyes pretending not to hear her. " PLEASE JUST ASK DR. KIDO HE WILL LET ME IN!" The doctor just continued to ignore her as the nurse harshly threw her and the package she was holding at the waiting room chair. Sora started crying uncontrollably. Kari ran up to her and gave her a hug. Kari was also crying hard.
"Please" Mrs. Kamiya said sadly directed at the nurse "Can't she just go in with us, she is like a sister to him" she finished as Mr. Kamiya tried desperately to comfort the two girls, but he knew there was nothing he could really do.
"Ma'am I do not care it's the hospital rules she can wait out here only you, your husband, and your daughter can go in, enough whining, I should have gotten off work an hour ago, but because of your son I have to work overtime and I'm not complaining"
"HOW DARE YOU" Mrs. Kamiya yelled snapping, which she rarely did, she slapped the nurse. "MY SON MAY BE DYING AND ALL YOU CAN THINK ABOUT IS WHEN YOU GET OFF WORK, YOU ARE A DISCUSTING HUMAN BEING!" The nurse just shrugged and walked away coldly and she dared to smirk at Sora as she left making the girl cry harder. " Sora honey" Mrs. Kamiya started while chocking up herself " I'm…I'm so sorry j… just know Sora he loves you never… never forget it." Sora curled up into a ball and wailed harder as Mr. Kamiya picked up Kari and they walked toward Tai's room.
"Mommy its not fair" Sora sobbed into her moms stomach.
"Shhh… I know honey, I know" Mrs. Takenouchi said trying hard to comfort her young daughter.
"But…But I will never know mommy, maybe he doesn't even love me, who knows what he would have said to me, besides there are so many girls always around Taichi, why would he choose me." Sora sobbed harder, her mom was speechless not understanding what kind of love Sora had been always talking about that she felt for Tai.
Sora shortly after heard heavy breathing behind her, someone trying to hold off tears, she figured it was Mimi there to comfort her like always. When she felt a shaky hand on her shoulder she quickly turned around and found herself looking into a familiar pair of blue eyes, yet today they were riddles with veins, tears, and the look of pain. " Don't you even begin to think like that Sora, No one knows Tai better than you, but he is my best friend too and don't you even try to say that Tai doesn't love you." The Digidestined started making their way towards Matt and Sora. " If anybody deserves to be in there with Tai its you Sora." and Sora for the first time, since Tai has been in the hospital smiled lightly. She hugged Matt hard crying on his shoulder for a short moment.
"Thank you Matt" She cried.
The digidestined gathered round and Matt had them all put their hands in the circle. " We get Sora in that room no matter what it takes." Matt said with a small smile as he looked around at his friends all with hope and determination in their eyes.
"Sora we all played a big roll in the digital world, but we all know without you and Tai we never would have made it through it" Mimi said to her best friend. "The least we can do is get you where you belong, with Tai."
"I'm in, my dad should be able to help us, even though this isn't his hospital" Said Joe.
"Prodigious" Izzy said stating what has become his catch phrase.
"Don't forget me" TK said looking up at the others. The others chuckled a little, making everyone feel a little better, though the thought of the shape Tai was in kept tears in their eyes.
"So what's our plan" Matt asked, and everybody leaned in close.
"I will call my dad, he has authority to override this hospitals command, he will make things right but… I don't how long Tai has" He said sadly, everyone choking up a little at the thought. " I will tell him to get here as fast as possible."
"Good job Joe" Matt said giving him a pat of the shoulder "Now Izzy any idea how we can get Sora in there before." Matt knew he had to take charge because Tai couldn't.
"Well that nurse pretty much is the guard for that door… I think we are going to have to get ride of her" Izzy stated.
"um Izzy what do you mean get ride off…" Joe asked nervously.
"… Lock her in a closet" Izzy answered while everybody stared in disbelief at him "What just because I'm nerd doesn't mean I'm just going to let someone mess with my friends.
So that's the first chapter, please review, I mainly have been slow on the updates for my life for my love cause I'm not getting to many reviews for it, not that I'm looking for a certain amount of reviews but I have been getting people telling me that there are a lot of problems with my story, but not really any suggestions of how to fix stuff. Anyway I'm ranting my point is, please review and tips would be very appreciated.
