Well, this is my first ever sasu/naru full length story. I started this about a year and a half ago, posted it on quizilla, it seemed to get a pretty good response, so I'm trying my luck here, especially since I know for a fact that there is a bigger yaoi fandom on here (yay !!). Anyways, don't be shy guys; I really want to know what you think! I CRAVE OPINIONS!! I really love this story, I think it's one of the best- nope, the best I've ever written, and because I wrote it so long ago I have to change some things about it now. My style changed so I want to change a couple of things which I think will make it a little easier to read. It's still an incomplete story by the way and I think quizilla took down a couple of chapters. Boo quizilla! Yes, I have yet to finish this bad boy because I just really haven't written much of anything this year (boo school, taking away my inspiration and being time consuming and sucking the creativity out of everyone) but I read it over a number of times and I still think it's a quality story. Anyway I hope you enjoy it!
Disclaimer (since I sometimes forget to write this *sweat drop*): I do not own Naruto, any of the songs mentioned (ever) unless I actually say I do (I write lyrics, whether they are good or not, I couldn't tell you XD), I just don't own anything okay?? If I owned Naruto in any way shape or form they simply would not be able to have it on tv at all. If I had my way I suppose the only way it'd be so… uh… yummy you'd have to buy the series on dvd to see it ^.^
Naruto was laying on his bed in the dorm he shared with the ever distant Sasuke as he drowned out the sound of the shower with his i-Pod. He had on a playlist entitled "Urges". It consisted of all the songs he listened to while he was, sadly, in the mood without a hottie at his disposal. It was on shuffle, changing up the usual, breaking free from the norm. This playlist consisted of Push It (Salt 'n' Peppa), Boom Boom Boom Boom (The Venga Boys), Faggot (MSI [Mindless Self Indulgence]), Dream A Dream (DDR: Captain Jack), How Do You Do (Cascada), I Wanna Be Bad (Willa Ford), Number One In Heaven (Nemesis), Roses Are Red (Aqua), and others of the sort. He silently mouthed the words, blasting the volume into his ear drums, trying to drown out the angelic vocals filtering from the bathroom. Damnit Sasuke! Why must you be so fucking LOUD?! He thought, irritated by the usually reserved, quiet, raven haired boy who was now belting "Cold as Ice" (Foreigner) at the top of his lungs. He rolled off the bed, rising and taking 2 steps over to the bathroom, banging loudly on the door. "Sasuke we all KNOW you can sing so SHUT UP and stop showing off!" He jumped back onto his bed, tapping his foot to the rhythm to "Dream a Dream" as it reached the chorus -Dream a dream lover take me in your dream take me anywhere you please boy you're making me scream- He somehow heard the shower shut off. Finally! The fucking princess takes longer in there than I do! Light and steam emerged as the door slowly opened, revealing a well- toned, dripping Sasuke in the doorway, loosely holding a towel around his waist. Naruto fought off the blush that dared to creep across his cheeks as his eyes quickly scanned Sasuke's body. The boy seemed to have "Rape Me" stamped across his forehead. Naruto ripped the headphones out of his ears but he could still hear the music blaring. "Sasuke there are no chicks in the room you fucking man- whore! Put some fucking clothes on!" Sasuke smirked at Naruto as he sat up abruptly, shouting at him.
"What? You don't like my body, Naruto?" He asked, leaning against the door pane. Naruto just looked at him, unable to comprehend the current situation. He was stuck where he sat, unable to move as he watched the nearly naked boy walked over to him, smirking at his expression. "Speechless? Really? That's a first for you" He said, now directly in front of the dumbfounded blond. His index finger cupped Naruto's chin, forcing him to meet his own eyes.
"Sasuke what the hell...?!???!?!?!!" Naruto suddenly couldn't breathe as he watched Sasuke slowly sink to his knees, his head now level with Naruto's chest. Naruto's heart pounded rapidly in shock and desire.
"Shhhhhhhh... Naruto, just shut up" The taller man whispered, pulling the blond's face down to his, momentarily locking eyes with him. Liquid steel locked onto bright blue, smoldering, full of intensity and... lust. But that moment soon passed only to be replaced with an even more shocking one; Sasuke brushed his lips against Naruto's timidly, and then applied more pressure. Naruto felt as if his lips were on fire, his face turning a bright scarlet. This isn't happening... It can't be... Not Sasuke... I must be dreaming
The blond was dazed as Sasuke's lips left his, then proceeded to place kisses on his neck, sucking and biting at the burning hot skin, feeling the quickening pulse with his tongue as Naruto became more and more excited. He made his way up to the blond's earlobe, nibbling slightly before whispering, practically purring, "Naruto, I've been waiting a long time for this moment... I want you so badly, I just can't fight it anymore... I have to have you... Right here... Right now" he finished, his words dripping with lust and wanting. His hand traced down Naruto's body, feeling the muscles contract under his tender fingertips. He reached the waist band of the now slightly panting blond's pants. Naruto's breath caught in his throat. He absently noted that he could hear his i-Pod reach the chorus of a song -You're number one, Baby. You're number one. You're number one in heaven- just as Sasuke's cold, smooth hand slid into his pants, reaching for his…
"Naruto! Shit! Kiba, get your ass over here NOW!" Shouted Sasuke, while desperately trying to get Naruto to regain consciousness.
Kiba ran into the dorm of Sasuke and Naruto with an ice- pack and a hot towel, along with some water bottles. This always happens... Every fucking year!... Every time Uchiha comes back Naruto does this! Although the cold-hearted, emotionless Sasuke normally passed through life without a touch of emotion to spare, Kiba saw it; A pang of fear.. And worry... And... Anger... And... concern filled his usually empty eyes. He saw it. Kiba watched as Sasuke looked at the unconscious blonde, who was twitching and shaking in a cold sweat. Why do I always have to deal with this shit? God I hate you so much right now Naruto... Just don't die so I can have the pleasure of killing you myself.
"Kiba, what's wrong with him?" Sasuke asked, holding Naruto's arms still.
"I don't know" He lied. He knew. Kiba knew better than anyone. Every year it was the same routine. Right before the school year started and Sasuke would return, Naruto, in his repeated realization that the one person who he truly loved would never return his feelings, would OD on some shit that Creep-o Kabuto would sell. Kiba knew, from experience, that Kabuto's shit was not something to be toyed with. But would that stop Naruto? Nope. He did it anyway, knowing full well what would happen. Kiba hated him for it because it was so dangerous and each year it got worse and Naruto was his best friend. It killed him to watch. This year, however, was different. As the drug first began flowing through the blond's body, Sasuke stepped off of an airplane, returning to Konoha earlier than usual. Kiba didn't know why it was different this year, but the raven haired man was there and he had to watch his best friend suffer though this. Something's changed about Uchiha... But what? There's something new here, but I can't put my finger on it... He came back EARLY. Uchiha HATES this place... Something's up, and I'm going to find out what. He absently wondered why Sasuke hadn't demanded why he hadn't called an ambulance.
"Kiba... KIBA! Sasuke whacked him upside his head, freeing him from his befuddling thoughts. "God, I'm surrounded by idiots" He mumbled.
"Ah! What the hell man?!" Kiba shouted, annoyed.
"If you're going to space like that I'd probably be better off taking care of him myself." He scoffed.
Kiba took notice, though, that Sasuke may have been talking to him, but his eyes never left Naruto. It was as if he was transfixed upon the blonde. I'm probably just imagining it. "Fine then! Please! By all means, DO take care of him yourself!" He said. "Asshole" He muttered, standing to take his leave. What's up with him? He was about to walk out of the room, then stopped, "Call me when he comes to.. I gotta talk to him about something" and with that, he slammed the door shut behind him.
Sasuke sat on the bed next to the blonde's restless body, draping the towel over his forehead gently. His eyes locked onto that beautiful face. He was frowning and flinching, fitfully. Sasuke frowned a bit himself. Oh, Naruto... What did you do? The raven sat staring at him for what seemed like an eternity, helplessness and dread seeping into his skin.
Naruto began to stir a bit. He's waking up... Sasuke thought, relieved. Naruto's hair stuck to his face from the sweat and towel. Sasuke dapped lightly at his forehead, then removed the towel all together. He couldn't stop himself as his hand reached over and brushed some beautiful blonde locks off that face. It was at this moment that cerulean eyes fluttered open, curiously gazing into eyes that resembled a starless night, catching the raven in this compromising position.
"... Sasuke?..." He whispered hoarsely, almost unsure if the dark haired man was truly sitting over him. Pale cheeks burned at the sound of that voice ringing in his ears. Sasuke slowly retracted his hand.
Well, that's that. I am getting all excited about this story all over again. I think it's good, and I hope you do too. Of course, I know what happens twenty chapters from now so HA! Just kidding, but I do. I plan on posting everything as soon as I can, but of course I'd like reviews and whatnot because, like I said, the story isn't completed yet, so throw those ideas out there, even from now. I'm editing the entire story anyway, who says I can't change it? No one... No one at all… *looks back at the person tied to a chair with duct tape over their mouth* Mwahahaha! Evil? No. I'm just an author *evil grin*. Ciao! *waves enthusiastically*
