So I have decided to write something even though I know I am a horrible writer. Keep that in mind. Reviews welcomed! I need some good writing tips! Thx! : )
Note: I own no Naruto.
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Chap. 1 What Family?
It was finally evening. The light was beginning to fade and the people of Suna were beginning to go home. For him the day was just beginning.
He walked to his favorite shaded spot. He liked the spot because it looked out over Suna. From there he could see everything happening in the village. Not only that but he knew he wouldn't be followed here. Anyone in there right mind would stay as far away from him as possible.
He gazed at the moon. Then he heard it, a faint brushing sound, like a predator sneaking up on
its prey. But he wasn't prey. The "attacker" was his prey. No one ever got in his way and lived to see the next day. " So thought you could sneak up on me?. Are you another one of his assassins'? Well how is dear old dad?" No reply. "Sand Coffin!" he yelled in a sinister voice.
"Ga.. Gaara!" It's me Temari! Your sister! " Temari?" He said in a softer tone. He let her go from the deadly hold. " What do you want?" his tone hardened. "I'm sorry Gaara! I had no intention to sneak up on you… I just didn't want to disturb you!" 'You didn't answer me." he mumbled. " Oh well you brother and I will be leav…" " Don't call him my brother!" Gaara cut in sharply. " You can't honestly still think I'm part of that family! You two are that good for nothing man's children and in no way will I ever allow myself to be called his son!"
"Enough, Gaara! It doesn't matter what you call yourself, you are still his son. I hate him too, but there is nothing we can do about it! We are still family whether we like each other or not! Temari shouted. " Well its not like I chose to have him send numerous assassins after me!" " Gaara, I'm sorr…' " Just go." " But?" " I Said GO!" The sand flared up viciously around him.
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Well it turned out better than I thought but please comment and stuff!
Its kind of an abrupt ending so I'll work on chapter 2 but I'm basing the ending on yourreviews.
Arigato,
I am Gaara
