So
here is my another world fanfiction
this was the first story i
ever did and as i totally love carly and carjack in atwt i totally
fell in love with m.j. and adam cory in another world.
you
can compaire them a bit as carjack and m.j. has just as carly made
some mistakes in her past and adam is much like jack a stubborn man
who seems to think that m.j. was perfect untill he found out she was
only human just like everybody else and he couldn't handle
that.
guess i just love the underdog LOL
my story kind of
starts about two years after adam broke up with m.j. on their
wedding-day on screen and i couldn't watch it on tv anymore and i
made my own another world as i thought things should go.
ofcourse
i added some karakters of my own choice and started up some new
s.l.'s as well as continue on some old in a way.
here's some of my
first pages of my another world story.
i added a new girlfriend
for adam: susan harrison,she works as a shrink and she has a
brother,ryan who is a cop.
shawn cassidy who is felica's dead
husband,zahn's nephew.
i let jamie & lisa get married as well
as involve nicole with shane and a few other things
hope you enjoy
it
Another world;
A new beginning...!
It was a beautyfull saturdaymorning and the sun was shinning,but adam Cory didn't seem to notice it when he was woken up by a loud pounding on his front door and angry,because of the way that he was woken up,he got out of bed.
"Do you know what time it is?"asked he angry when he saw jake standing outside his frontdoor;"You woke me up!"
"I'm sorry,adam,but you asked me to come here at ten and it's 15 minutes past ten now."answered jake;"How is your head?" "It feels like it's ready to explode."
"I'm not suprised about that, adam, because you had a lot to drink at your birthdayparty lastnight."
"I hardly remember a thing about lastnight,jake,it's all a bit hazy."said he slowly;"Did anything happen lastnight?"
"Well,it was a great party and you were having fun,untill susan got angry at you around one in the morning."answered his friend;"She left and you started drinking pretty much until) i took you home together with cass around three this morning." "Why did susan get angry at me?"asked adam suprised;"Was it because i was drunk or something?"
"No,she was angry because of my cousin?" "Because of Cheryl or kathleen?"
"No,because of your ex-flancee,adam,about m.j."said jake slowly;"She was really mad at you."
"But why?"asked he confused;"That makes no sense."
"Susan overheard you talking to me about m.j. and she got it into her head that you were still in love with her."
"That's crazy."answered adam;"Why would i have let her go if i had still been in love with her?"
"I don't know, adam. "said jake hesitating;"You're the only one that can answer that."
At the Cory's amanda had been up for hours and she just got back from the stables when she ran into sam;"Hey." "Hey."said her husband slowly;"You were up pretty early."
"I couldn't sleep anymore,sam,so i got up and decided to go to the stables."
"I'm sorry about lastnight,amanda,i didn't mean for it to get so out of hand and end into a fight again."started sam as he put his arms around her waist;"I hate it when we fight."
"So do i."answered amanda tired;"So why do we Keep Going it then?"
"I don't know,amanda,i really don't want to fight with you."
"Neither do i,sam."smiled his wife sadly;"I do understand why you want us to get a place of our own,but i just think that we should wait until) after the baby is born."
"Why don't we talk about that anymore time."answered sam slowly;"What were you doing by the stables anyway, amanda,did you went to feed the horses or something?"
"No,i went for a ride on lighting sam."
"You know that you can't do that right now!"said her husband irritated;"You're pregnant."
"1 know that,sam,but that doesn't mean that i can't do anything anymore!"answered amanda angry and started to walk away again;"Mind your own business!"
"Damned!"said sam tired and followed her back to the house; "Amanda,wait!"
At the same time cheryl was trying to sneak back into her parents' house,praying that they'd allready gone to work and hadn't noticed that she's spent the night somewhere else,when her mother caught her going up the stairs;"Cheryl ,where have you been all night?"
"At a friend of mine,mama,i fell asleep on the caugh while we were watching a movie."answered her daughter as she came back downstairs;"Are you and paps mad at me?"
"Your father doesn't know that you didn't come home lastnight,cheryl,i didn't know it myself until) this morning."said mary slowly;"And you're lucky that he doesn't know,because you know how he can fly off the handle sometimes."
"Thanks,mama,i really didn't mean to worry you like that."
"He must be really something special if you're willing to risk getting into trouble for him."smiled her mother teasing;"Your father would have had fit if he'd found out."
"Do you think that i didn't come home because of a guy?"asked cheryl,acting all innocent;"Don't you believe me?" "Come on,sweetheart,i know you well enough to know better."laughed mary;"But i don't mind,cheryl,as long as you're more careful) in the future,because your father isn't going to be so understanding."
Cass Wintrop was just getting dressed when his wife came into their bedroom;"I thought that you were still asleep."
"I just got up."said he and turned around;"Where's ray?"
"In his bed."smiled Kathleen as she put her arms around cass and kissed him gently;"Why don't we go back to bed?"
"As tempting as that sounds,honey,I'm afraid that I can't."laughed cass and kissed her back;"I wish that I could,but I can't."
"Why not?"asked his wife surprised;"It's Saturday and ray is asleep,so why not?"
"Because I have an important meeting in about 30 minutes,honey,I told you about that lastnight."
"I forgot."said Kathleen disappointed and sat down on the bed;"Why are you have a meeting on a Saturday-morning anyway?"
"Mack really needed to talk to me and I promised him."answered cass as he kissed his wife again;"I will make it up to you tonight,Kathleen,I promise."
"You'd better keep that promise!"warned she him teasing;"You don't wanna end up on my bad side."
It was almost lunchtime when jake came out of the elevator at tops and saw his ex-fiancee,marlee Hudson,sitting at a table with her parents and her twinsister,Vicky,so he walked straight up to the bar;"A beer please."
"Hello,jake,what brings you downhere?"asked felica gallant,his friend,as she sat down next to him;"Did you and cass get adam home allright after the party?"
"Ofcourse we did."answered jake and got up;"I'll be right back."
Slowly he walked towards the bathrooms and was about to go into the men's room when he was pulled into the ladiesroom;"Hey!"
"What kind of a hello is that?"asked the beautyfull woman and pulled him into one of the toilets while she started to open up his shirt;"Aren't you glad to see me?"
"Ofcourse I am,Vicky,but this is the ladiesroom!"whispered jake surprised and gently tried to stop her from opening up his shirt;"What if somebody finds me in here?"
"So?"laughed Vicky and began to kiss him all over;"I live for danger,jake,don't you?"
"You're nuts."smiled he,knowing that he wouldn't be able to resist her;"What if your family were to find you in here with me,Vicky?"
"You're no fun."said she teasing and wanted to open up the toiletdoor;"Bye."
"Oh,no,you're not going anywhere!"whispered jake into her ear as he pulled her back into his arms and kissed her;"Do you really think that I'm gonna let you leave now after you've turned me on like that?"
"You're bad,jake ."smiled Vicky and kissed him back;"I love it!"
Just as things were heating up some more they suddenly heard somebody coming in;"Vicky?"
"I'm in here."answered she,as jake held in his breath,from behind
the closed door;"I will be right out."
"Allright,we'll be by the elevator."said her twinsister as she left the
ladiesroom again;"See you in few minutes."
"Keep that thought until later on."smiled vicky and kissed
jake,while she walked away;"Bye."
To be continued…
