Hello. My name is Ashley. J This is my first fanfic. I have always read them and never really wrote one. So hope you enjoy it!
"Maaaax!!!! I am hungry! Can we please stop somewhere to eat?!"
Ugh. That's Nudge. She doesn't know what the word quiet means. She's about 10 or 11. Then you have Fang who is the complete opposite, which can get quite annoying sometimes. He just never talks! And of course the Gasman who is somewhere around 8. Don't ask about his name... There are some things you don't want to know. And my baby, Angel. She is the cutest little girl ever! Then, the best cooker in the whole world, Iggy. Who...is blind. But sometimes I forget that... And me. I am Max, the "indestructible." Right…Anyways. We are all flying somewhere over California.
Yeah, I said flying. We are cool like that. As babies we were taken away from our families and taken to some place called the School. There, we were tortured with needles and such. It was awful. But we were rescued by Jed. We don't talk about him anymore...He went to the darkside. Then came back to the good side. Something about the "greater good." Whatever.
So back to the flying….We were somewhere over California. The shore was pretty from this far away. But I could still see all of the people dotting the beaches.
"Max!!!! Please can we stop?!?!" Nudge pleaded.
"Fine. Pick somewhere," I mumbled unhappily.
"Oooo! I see a McDonald's down there!"
We circled down slowly to a deserted part of a street. We walked into the McDonald's to eat. I saw the town name. Peridido Beach.
We approached the counter warily looking out for potential enemies. We were almost up there, mouths watering. Then, all of a sudden, everyone disappeared but a couple of kids around. We jumped into a fighting stance.
"Max,
I don't like this," Fang whispered quietly.
The kids that
were there looked around and started freaking out.
"Let's get out of here," I told the flock urgently, " U and A now!"
We jumped up and spread our wings. We got out of the restaurant and flew in formation with me in the front. We got up about 15,000 feet and an unknown source started shocking me. Without warning, my wings folded and I dropped like a rock.
Well…I hope that it's good. It's a start I guess. Please review to help out with the next chapter!
