This is my first time trying freeverse. I've always loved it, but seeing as I've never been much of a poet, this is just experimentation. With Albus Severus Potter, of course, who else would i use? I absolutely adore him, despite the fact that he's only in the books for a few pages.

please please review

disclaimer: no, I do not own Harry Potter


can't you see it's all just b o r r o w e d : : ?

look in the mirror child

don't you see that

blackblack h a i r ?

And those

greengreen e y e s ?

are just

; borrowed ;

because that h a i r is your

[ father ' s ]

and

those e y e s are your

[ dad ' s ]

.

keep your head

D

O

W

N

b o y don't let them see y o u

they will just see

greengreen e y e s

like

lily's&&emeralds&&harry's

and don't forget the

blackblack h a i r

like

james's&&ink&&harry's

but not

y.o.u

no never never you honey

you're

[ i n v i s i b l e ]

.

keep q u i e t now honey

don't be seen don't be heard

you'll be c.a.u.g.h.t.u.p in the

fame&&fortune&&legends

and

e x p e c t a t i o n s

that you can't ever [don't even t r y]

live u p to

because o n e was

wise&&headmaster&&brilliant

and o n e was

brave&&infiltrator&&courageous

and o n e

oh yes h i m don't forget dear

was

savior&&survivor&&hero

and you are just

a l

.

s l y t h e r i n

dear boy mind you

hold on to that

because those colors :

s i l v e r

and

g r e e n

aren't

; borrowed ;

from your f a t h e r

they're y o u r s boy

that's y o u r

onelittledetail

that can m a k e y o u

a. l. b. u. s. s. e. v. e. r. u. s.

and not just

H a r r y

boy w h o lived

savior o f t e word

god d a m n hero

P o t t e r