hey guys! this is my first warriors fanfic so if it's not very good, i would LOVE to hear some advice, so please review. and if it's good i would LOVE to hear! so go easy on me... anyway on with the story!
Sterlingtail: 'bout time!
Me: okay, okay, relax Sterlingtail
Sterlingtail: no thank you! i'm deputy of a clan and your not!
Me: never mind that.. let's get on with the story!
P.S. i do not own Warriors, but however, i do own all of IceClan AND their warriors and apprentices and all that stuff...
(in this story IceClan territory would be where thunderClan territory is and ThunderClan would be where ShadowClan normally are, ShadowClan does not exist in this fanfic)
Dawn was just shining in through the curtain of lichen that covers the entrance to Cherrystar's den. it was another warm day in greenleaf. Cherrystar went outside to watch the dawn patrol part. it was being led by Grayclaw who brought Fernpelt, Purplepelt, Sterlingtail and Sorrelpaw. Grayclaw spotted the pretty tabby she-cat and sat down and neatly wrapped his tail around his paws. "greetings Cherrystar" he meowed as she got closer.
"good morning Grayclaw, which border are you planning to patrol this morning?" she asked sitting down in front of him. "well, we were thinking of patrolling the WindClan border. things have been quiet lately, but with the new hostility coming from them, we should be careful." there was a glimmer of worry in his eyes. She could understand why. Their clan was still recovering from their battle with ThunderClan.
Fernpelt walked over, "we should probably get going" she mewed, then stalked off. there was an edge to her voice. "okay, bye Cherrystar!" Grayclaw meowed before walking off. "bye" Cherrystar called after him, standing up.
sorry this chapter was short, i had very little time but don't worry, i'll be updating soon. please please review! i want to know if i did good or bad. i also want advice other than make it longer. Cause believe me, i will.
