Hello! My name is Christina but I go by the name cmams3515 on here. This is my first writing so review and let me know how I do! If I have any grammar mistakes I'm sorry about that. :)
Max POV
'Sup, my name is Maximum Ride and welcome to my wild life. Long story short, I've been on the run with my non-blood related family for a pretty long time now. My little Flock includes Fang, Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy, Angel, and myself of course. When we were young, like recently born young we were experimented on and given some superhuman abilities, such as super-hearing, raptor vision, and wings. Yeah I know, wings, how cool right? Wrong, I mean in a way it was totally awesome that gave you a whole new sense of freedom, but these gifts came with a price that no child, let alone human should ever have to pay.
It all started when we escaped the school with the school with the help of a good guy at the time scientist named Jeb, but when he disappeared and then reappeared at the place where we were created I knew he had become a bad guy yet again. I hated seeing him, some of the reason being that he always had some sort of evil experiment of test we would have to endure, or maybe it was because he was my father. Well the world might never know. Speaking of the world, that gigantic blue and green orb was the main reason of our creation in the scientists' eyes, well it was technically my mission to save the world but I needed every member of the Flock to do so. Without those nutjobs I would have failed a long time ago, heck I probably wouldn't have even left the School, a.k.a. the lab we grew up in. Sike ha-ha.
Since the destruction of Itex, we thought things would settle down, but boy we were wrong! The Flock and I sat in a McDonalds in southern California munching on our large quantity or unhealthy food because we wanted to and who could say no to Angels bambi eyes?
"Max I was wondering if we could maybe stop at the walk of fame," Nudge spoke in a loud tone rapidly, " Ohhh and maybe afterwards we could go to the Hollywood sign and like sleep on it. Wow that would be so cool I mean who has the chance to say that the slept on the Holly-." Nudge was cut off by the pale hand of Iggy quieting the ruckus she created with her usual motor mouth.
"Finally." the Gasman breathed out in between bites of his very salty French fries.
The Flock started to laugh at Nudges death glare at Gazzy and Fang gave one of his rare lopsided grins that always seemed to make my heart stop. He looked at me as I thought about that cute grin as though he knew I was thinking about him, and I blushed a deep red that matched the containers that held Gazzy's fries. As I calmed down my wild heartbeat I heard thoughts pop into my head that definitely were not my own.
'Max I'm sensing some trouble incoming, I think it's Erasers but I'm not sure, I mean I have to be wrong cause they're all dead aren't they?' Angel sent me with a frightened but tense look. I guess you'd be alarmed if someone was putting thoughts into your head, but for our telepathic sweetheart it was kind of normal for us to talk like this, especially when it could evolve into something threatening.
'Yes sweetie they're all gone', I spoke into my mind knowing the powerful six year old was watching my brains thoughts to get a response that wouldn't scare the others. I watched as Angel relaxed and bit into her third McChicken and I immediately tensed with the thought of more Erasers coming after us, I mean do those things ever die?
Turns out I got my thoughts answered quickly as the windows suddenly burst as though they had been made of paper and twenty Erasers stood at all exits surrounding us into the middle of the McDonalds. One Eraser particularly looked familiar as he stepped forward, cracking his neck and finger in the process. I quickly stepped in front of Gazzy and Iggy as soon as that Eraser had stepped forward, and I could hear the employee's calling 9-1-1 in the background, but the only thing I was focused on was protecting my Flock and making sure we got out of there with minimal injuries.
"Hello Maximum," the voice said creepily. I instantly recognized the voice, it belong to Jeb's only son who had to be only seven years old. " I've been waiting a long time to see you again, but the fun and games are over and its time to go back to the School."
The sun was already starting to set, and I knew with all of these Erasers were going to be hard to take down especially since we were trapped in a building with nowhere to fly out of, but Ari was counting on this. So I did the only thing I could do while being trapped, I relied on my handy dandy mouth to talk u out of this mess before things got ugly. "Isn't it a little past your bedtime little boy, or does your father even know you're out right now I wouldn't be surprised if he was coming to check up on me instead of you!" I spat out him.
Ari was never really good at handling is anger and boy oh boy did he not handle that particular comment very well. He lunged at me with inhuman speed, and as I put my hands up to block him he suddenly changed directions and too me out and sent the two of us flying over countless tables the impact took the breath out of me, and I knew I was gong to feel that in the morning. Before I could even react he pulled me up and help me above his head, as if I as some type of trophy for the others to see. I caught Fangs eyes and motioned for him to do an up up and away, but he stood frozen to the spot and instead yelled this at the younglings as he attempted to attack Ari as he as still holding me u in the air. I watched as Iggy threw a small explosive at two unlucky Erasers and went kaboom as their guts spattered on the walls and I pitied whoever had to clean up this mess. I thankfully watched as Iggy herded the younglings out like sheep, but I was angered that Fang disobeyed a direct order and was captured with me.
Ari bent down and put his hand on my face in such a way that he forced me to look directly t him, and when I looked into his eyes all I could see was a dark pool of fury and hate directed towards me, but also happiness that I assumed came from the fact that he had actually caught me surprisingly.
"Prepare yourself piggy," he spoke harshly and I was sprayed with the spit coming from his muzzle, talk about gross. "School isn't at all what it used to be."
I turned towards Fang and gave him a confused look that was lost on his bottomless brownish black eyes and emotionless face, and before I could say a word I felt a hard force slam into my temple and then all I saw was darkness.
So this was the first of many chapters, I hope you like it so far!
-cmam3515
I do NOT own Maximum Ride
