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"Where am I?" It was dark and I couldn't see anything. "Hello!? Is anyone there!?" I was starting to panic now, all of a sudden a light flashed and everything went from dark to a garden of roses. "What..." I started to walk around, the smell was wonderful. Then it changed again, this time to what looked like an old asylum. I looked around again, nothing behind me but blackness for who knows how long, so I went inside. "Hello..." "hello..." I jump up. I know that wasn't my echo. I go inside the door to the place, its depressing. I then see a light flicker, I go towards it. Right when I get under it it turns off. Great. I'm in complete darkness again. I then do a full 360 of the place. "As if I can actually see anything." It was no use, there was nothing to help me see. Then I hear that voice again. "Hello..." This time in a soft creepy tone.I turn to look behind me, nothing. Still complete darkness. "Do you want to play with me?" This time its closer. I look to the side, still nothing. THen the light above me flickers and goes on, this time a red color. I look around me. Something then falls on my cheek. I touch it, its slimy and red. I look at it more closly. "Blood...!?" I look up and what I see was horryfying. I scream, but nothing comes out of my mouth. I try to run away but then notice that I'm stuck to the floor. Someone! Please! Help..me... The thing on the ceiling jumps down, its eyes black as crows. It looks at me, its flace bloddy and torn. You could see its skull and flesh. It smiles. "Do you want to play!?" I tried to scream but I already knew no one would help me. I turn to look another way before I completly throw up, and I see even more blood. I see bodies hanging from the ceilings. Then I finally smell it. The rotten smell of more than twenty dead bodies. Its horrifying. I then look at the thing again, it touches my face. Its nails diging into my skin. I feel the blood running down. It then turns to look at the other things. They stop feasting on the other bodies and get up. They see me and then start coming. I feel more nails on my face and see more. Some with no legs, heads, feet, hands, everything! I try to cover my mouth but I can't hold it in anymore. I throw up....blood. The things bend down, and smell it. Its blood, complete blood, not barf, blood. The things look at me, there faces disgusting, and flesh revealing. "Do you want to play with us!?" They all say at the same time. I try to puch away but only to figure out my hands tied to the ceiling. I try to scream one more time, but this time I gurgle. More blood came out, and the last thing I felt before I blacked out were millions of nails digging into my flesh and pulling it off, and let me tell you, you will feel that pain and its worse than stepping on a tack.
"AHHHHH!!" I wake up from my dream, and fall off my bed. "ALICE!? Alice!?" I get up to find my sister, Luna standing next to me, concern in her eyes. "Alice, are you ok!?" "Yeah, yeah." She looks at me with her strong eyes. "I know you better than that Alice." And you have to give it to her, she does. Ever since our parents died, she was the one always there for me, strong and almost unbreakable. "Ok, ok. Its just those dreams again." Ever since I was 4 I have always had these dreams. They were fightening dreams, not just the ones of you falling down or going to school with no pants. No, these were different. Luna looked at my arms. "Alice come here." I go to her. She looks at my wrists, nothing. Legs, nothing. Then she see's it. A mark on my cheek. She looks at me, horrified. "You better tell me everything, or so help me God you will be with out dinner for 3 weeks." And when it comes to her, she really means it. "Uh...I'll go take a shower and get changed." I run, and slam the bathroom door.
These dreams are ordinary to me. They happen every night, but lately...they have been getting a little disgusting, and just plain wierd. Evertime I go to sleep, even a nap, I have dreams like these, and everytime I wake up I always have some mark. There was one dream were I got cut in the stomach and when I woke up, DING! Yes, you gt it, i had a huge, and I mean huge slash on my stomach. These dreams always involve me dying in some gross, vomitning, disgusting, stomach turning way, that if these dreams were made into a movie, it would be rated X-17 for blood and gore. I mean think of this. You getting slashed open, and these animals with broken open skulls, and faces that look like they were in a blender eating the guts right out of your stomach. Yes, I know, BLEH! But hey! I'm the one who actually has these dreams! And ACTUALLY FEELS THE PAIN! Sometimes the pain is so bad, that I actually blackout in real life when I'm asleep. My sister freaks out and all but she knows I'm ok. As long as i'm breathing and all.
"And there you have it." I looked around, and didn't see Luna anywhere. "Uh...Luna?" GAG! It came from the bathroom, we were eating breakfast, and I even told her to wait till we were finished, but noooo. She had to hear it here and now. I went up to the bathroom door. "I told you so." She looked at me. "Disgusting! Complete horror!" GAG! Sigh I went up to her to keep her long black hair from going into the toilet.
"Why do you have these dream?" It was 6:35am...School started in 2 hours and 25 minutes. I had gotten up, screaming at 4:57. "You think I haven't asked that question to myself already?" She was eating breakfast again, and her coffee. She vomited most of it up. "Luna, look. I think these dreams are a warning." She looked at me..."Really? Explain?" She wasn't really believing it, so I knew I had to give her a good explanation. Ok, here I go. "Remember that time when I was 7?" "YOu mean when you dreamnt about the little girl and like you had cuts everywhere?" "Yeah." "And how you told me all about it and the next morning we heard on the news that the same little girl had gone missing?" "Yeah." "Ok, yeah I know. What about it?" "Well think about Luna? I dreamnt about her. In my dream I was her. I saw everything. From when she was taken and to the point of when her mother, her own MOTHER killed her." Tears where coming down my cheeks. "You helped her though in the end." "Yeah but there was one thing I didn't tell you about then." "What is it?" This time she looked at me seriously. Her mood changes were going all WOO HOO today. "When the police took her body away and you left with them I saw her. She was looking at her body and then she turned to look at me. She walked up to me, and told me, "This isn't the last. There are more. After the number 12, your next." She then disappeared." Luna's eyes widened. "How many murders have there been so far, counting that one!?" "3! Just three. There hasn't been any lately. Why!?" "I think I know what she means..." "What do you mean?" "She was trying to tell you, that after the 12th murder your number 13. All these dreams! There warnings, telling you to be careful! GOD ALICE! Why didn't you tell me that sooner!?" "I don't know, but what do these monsters have to do with that!?" "Ok remember what else you told me about your dream that day?" "No..." "You told me, her mother's eyes were red as blood. Her mother wasn't human Alice. Her mother was a demon." I looked at Luna, terrified and confused. I had just started getting these dreams, these gross dreams. "So then these gross dream I'm having..." "Yeah, your seeing what other people will see when they die. Your seeing their murders, from their point of view even before they happen."
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