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No one asked for this treatment and no one asked to be treated like lower beings. To be skipping school and lying is normal. To be in school and middle class is common in this town. What's not common or normal is being rich and living the high life.

The story of the Panda Heroes begins in a three sided town. Every morning, each of the five members of their "baseball league" get up and head to the dugout. At least two people stop by a shop before practice to eat, while others just wait it out.

One cloudy morning, the head "coach" began her morning routine. Waking up, putting on her black tank top and green capris, grabbing her gum and metal bat, and heading off to the dugout. The clouds made it easy on her eyes and not too long after, she felt raindrops. The girl's green hair turned into a dark, grassy green as the rain fell.

The gravel road turned to a darker brown and the grass became softer. She wasn't too far out of the cities, just a little over a couple blocks. The stubborn, green-haired girl jumped over the fence post and walked over the muddy dirt of the field. With the metal bat in hand, she began to try a couple practice swings. Soon, she sat inside the red painted shack with a shallow roof. It wasn't the best hangout, but it was better than their old one.

Inside, she met with her team of four. Their names were Rin, Luka, Miku, and Lily. They weren't the best of players, but they were her friends.

Rin was shorter and much slimmer than the rest, but the blonde had amazing speed with running. This put her in the batter's shoes. She was the youngest and most energetic of the bunch.

Luka was taller than short or wide. Her hips and full chest made her the catcher of the team. Not necessarily bad at making the other team weep, so to speak. She was the eldest out of the team. Making her the quietest and most responsible.

Miku was shorter than Luka and Lily, but taller than Gumi and Rin. The teal-head claimed her spot as short stop, because of her fast reflexes and timing. She earned her title as the quickest tempered and the most addicted to sex.

Lily was the tallest of the five and strongest. The blonde made her spot as the pitcher, due to her throwing and hitting abilities. Being the newest on of the team, she was rather more addicted to drugs and alcohol moreover than sports.

Gumi, the "leader" of the team, was the best at throwing and hitting. The green-haired girl was often put into the third base or outfield. Unlike the rest of her team, she was still slightly grumpy and angry most of the time. The girl was just a little younger than Miku.

It wasn't a dream team, but they put their abilities to where they need them most. The red shack had a concrete floor and wooden walls covered with chips of red paint. The walls also held the age old equipment for "practice". Often times, the girls wouldn't even practice, let alone anything productive.

Lily was always bringing in some sort of illegal stimulant. Whether it be pot or Jack Daniel's, the blonde always had something.

"Yo, Gumi. Where the fuck 'ave you been? Jesus Christ, we've been waitin' for some God damn time." Rin spat at the green-head before sitting back down at her usual spot.

"Get the fuck off. I've been tryin' to get supplies." Gumi snarled back at the short blonde. Someone was obviously rude this morning and it wasn't exactly the leader.

"Hey! You two. Split up. You guys act like children, I swear to God." Luka said as she directed Lily to move Rin. The pink-haired girl and the blonde put the two in desperate corners.

The green-haired stood up straight and faced toward her team. She tried her best to avoid eye contact with the short, blonde girl. "Anyways, today, I want to actually fuckin' practice. Let's go team, come on." Gumi said as she slowly walked out to the shed door.

"Hell Yeah! Finally, some production... possibly!" Miku shouted, running passed the younger, green-haired girl. She immediately started to dance around in the pouring rain. Her face glistening as she looked up to the sky.

"You people go ahead. I'm staying the hell away from that lava shit." Lily said with a dazed look on her face. The blondie must have taken something before Gumi had reached the shack.

Rin quickly dashed outside in the rain and span around with Miku. The only difference is, the blonde didn't open her mouth.

"Alright! Get to your positions! I'll pitch for Rin, because Lily can't stop taking drugs for one practice." Gumk shouted while running to the pitcher's mound. The muddy gravel was slippery and not necessarily good for practice.

Luka got on her helmet and pads before running out of the shack. The pink-head stationed herself at home base and squatted. Rin and Miku snapped out of their dazed spinning and quickly got their gear together. Both the blonde and the teal-head ran to their positions.

"Okay, let's do this." The green-haired girl shouted. She waited patiently for the youngest girl to get herself ready. Soon after, Gumi wounded her arms back and put her leg back. She pushed her arm out and felt the ball leaving her hand. The blonde caught sight of the ball and quickly swung the bat.

Everyone heard the crack of contact with the bat. The ball shot up into the sky, going directly to outfield. Since there was no one on the outfield, Rin took advantage and ran straight for first base. The blonde ran quickly over to second, the mud was coming up from the ground courtesy of her cleets. She quickly dove to second before stopping for the time being.

"Rin, you wouldn't of made it if we were ta' be in outfield." Gumi shouted before walking over to second base. "Go get ta' fuckin' home base and try again." The green-head spat on the ground before running back to the pitcher's mound.

This time, Rin walked back to her home base and dragged the metal bat. The blonde hacked into the ground before stepping on the home plate. The shorty placed the bat over her shoulder and raised her hands to the sweet spot of the handle. Rin moved her legs to a shoulder length apart. She was ready.

Gumi raised her arms to the original position and moved her legs apart. The green-head swung her arm and let the ball release from her hand at a rocket speed.

Rin moved her arms and torso towards the ball. The bat swung in the perfect time, cracking the ball out of the field. A homerun in any case. The blondie stood in her spot, deciding whether to run or accept the praise. Rin stayed at her spot. She already knew that she can run to all the bases in time.

"Great goin' asshole. That was our las' ball." Miku shouted from her short stop position.

"Fuckin' calm down, Meek. It's jus' a ball. We can always buy one." Luka shouted back in her direction, standing up in the process.

"Not if we don' have any fuckin' money, bitch." The teal-head shouted back and crossing her arms. Miku was questioning why Gumi decided to have practice in the rain. If it were to have thunder, Rin has a chance of being electrocuted.

Luka sighed and decided to walk back to the shack. "Good hit, Rin. Why don't you do that during our games?" The pink-haired teased.

"I do. You just neva' realize it." Run teased back. She walked eight the taller girl and nudged Luka in the ribs.

"Quit your fuckin' flirting and let's hustle." Gumi shouted while walking back to the shack. The green-head was away from the two mischievous girls. The second youngest girl walked inside and sat on her usual barrel. Gumi stared at Lily slightly with a disgusted face.

Rin, Miku, and Luka were not too far behind the green-haired. The team easily forgives and forgets, but not if it's drastic. The blonde quickly ran ahead of the other two, trying to get them to race. Luka stayed behind as Miku and Rin raced to the shack. If the pink-head did race, her chest would not help.

Miku and Rin entered the shack, panting and smiling.

"Heh, I won shorty." Miku sneered as she sat on Gumi's lap. The green-head gave a glare at the older girl before she pushed Miku off.

"What the fuck are ya' doin'?" Gumi yelled, standing up from her barrel. "Are ya' trying to kill me with your fat ass?"

"No... but I am tryin' to get closer to ya' asshole." Miku whispered and laughed. She held her hand against the wall, trying not to fall over.

Luka put her hand on her forehead and looked downwards. The pink-head's friends were being childish and immature. The older woman walked to the back of the shack and grabbed her box of cigarettes. She didn't have a breakfast, so she decided to have a couple smokes for a substitute. Luka lit up her cig and stuck it in her mouth.

Lily's drug effects were warding off. The taller blonde stood up and stretched her arms. "What took ya' so long?"

Rin pushed the older blonde down back to her seat. "You're still high. Sit down, bitch."

"Uh, no." Lily immediately made a disgusted face and stood back up. The older woman went over to Gumi sat on the green-head's lap.

"For fuck's sake, what is up with you people?" Gumi spat on the ground and tried to push Lily off, but failed. "You're too fat, bitch. You're going to make my legs be amputated."

The other girls just continued their business, not paying attention to the two.

"Fuckin' help me!" The green-head shouted and pushed. She finally got Lily off and flashed her middle finger. "Screw you in hell, bitch."

Lily just laughed along with the other girls. Gumi's reactions were always fun to mess with.

"Well, what are we goin' ta' do in the meantime?" Rin asked, rather loudly.