You are Uchiha Sasuke

This is my first poem, go easy on the judging!

Uchiha Sasuke

The name all mortals fear

He is a monster, a power-hungry demon

But I see behind that cold exterior

I know who you truly are

So, tell me, why bother hide?

You worked so hard to be who you are today

But are you happy?

Are you happy with the creature you made yourself to be?

You turned your back on your friends

You rejected your true love

You betrayed your village, your home

But I see past that

I know you want to return to who you once were

But it's too late, ne?

You want to train with your team mates

Laugh with your friends

Embrace your love

But it's too late for that

You are an outcast Uchiha Sasuke

You don't deserve the life you dream -

Every single night of your murderous life

You are a monster, a power-hungry demon

You have the name all mortals fear

You are Uchiha Sasuke …

Please Review. I want to know how I did.

Seeing as how this is my first Naruto fic and poem, I really need reviews. Thanx!