Hello Frostiron buddies,
here is a little tester for a story that I may or may not continue to write well that all depends on you; tell me what you think in a review please and then I will decide if I want to continue,
Enjoy!
Asgard; It is a old realm which was sky full of building, all different sizes and heights.
Asgard is the realm of the gods- royal gods and common god.
The royal family- Odin, his wife Frigga and their two sons Thor and Loki.
As it was right for them to marry as it is for them to have children yet Loki was not interested, he had come to realise that he was different; for one the way he looked- Thor had blonde hair and blue eyes like their mother and father yet he had black hair and green eyes, the other big difference between them was their body structure and how different their personalities were.
The other thing that Loki noticed was the fact that Odin always favoured Thor- it was always him, Loki was only brains and magic and Thor was a perfect son; he was strong and ruthless in battle, not saying that Loki was not it was just that Odin thought of Thor as a more rightful King then he did Loki- which only pissed Loki off even more.
It was now the middle of falls in Asgard, there was a celebration being held- something to do about Thor's biggest hunt yet or at least something like that.
Most of the people were crowded into the the royal hall.
Standing at the front was the four royals and their trusty allies such as guards.
They were dressed in their traditional armour and under clothes.
Thor was knelt down in front of Odin whom was sat on his throne with Frigga and Loki at either side of him.
"Every person that is stood here today shall rejoice at the success of my oldest son, Thor," Odin voice echoed through out the hall making it so that everyone could clearly hear him.
"Ha! Success," A voice from the crowd commented, it was strange to witness this- someone in the crowd was mocking the royals, no one in their right mind would do such a thing.
"Who are you to say so?" Odin asked shortly after, it was clear in his voice that he was annoyed and it was all because of that person.
"My name is Anthony Stark nice to meet you your highness," The man replied as he walked through the crowd to show himself to the king before he bowed in a mocking manner.
Anthony had brown shortish hair which was styled in a rather messy yet interesting way, he had honey brown eyes and white creamy skin.
He was obviously a Blacksmith by what he was wearing which classed him as a high enough man.
"How dare you come in here and disrespect my father!" Thor's voice boomed with anger as he moved towards the man.
Loki did not know want was so infuriating about this moment because he was finding it rather comical and he was slowly taking a liking to this man.
What do you think PLEASE REVIEW!
