Quilian

Mark, Courtney I don't know where to start, so many things have happened since Zaada. Loor had to stay; the tribes were not quiet friends yet. Ok let's start where my last journal stopped, the flume. Loor and I were saying our goodbyes to our friends on Zaada while we traveled to the flume, when a huge shadow flew over us. We looked up and saw a huge black raven, the worst thing about it was the eyes they were an electrifying blue color. The bird looked down at us and said "On to Quillian" and disappeared in the direction of the flume… Saint Dane. When we got to the flume the light was already retreating in to the gaping mouth of the tunnel. "Saint Dane must have beaten us to the flume" I said my last goodbye to Loor and yelled into the flume "Quillian".

When the flume ride stopped I found myself in a cavern the size of a small house. As I looked around I heard a feminine voice behind me "Bobby?" I turned, it was Aja Killan the traveler from Veelox. "Bobby there is no hope for Quillian, the territory has already fallen just like Veelox" she said. "NO! IT CAN'T BE" I screamed. A maniacal laugh erupted from behind me. I whirled around and there in Aja's place stood the last person I want to see right now, Saint Dane.

I screamed and lunged at the demon. He quickly dodged my foolhardy attempt to harm him. While I was getting back on my feet he fled, but not to the flume, he went out to the territory. It must mean that he had not finished with the territory or he would have gone to the flume. I was about to follow him when the flume behind me activated again and I was surprised to see Patrick, then Loor, then Spader, closely followed by Gunny and Alder. I wanted so badly for Kasha the traveler from Eelong to step out of the flume. I sat there wishing for the flume to activate and for the huge jungle cat to step out. But it didn't.

So what do you think so far?

Should I keep on writing?