Ok so you might be wondering why the story sounds really weird and funny and not so literature like. That's cause this story was written by two people at a time. Out of boredom and some creativity, we made this story for amusement. Hope you'll enjoy it too.


Once upon a time, there were a couple of kids playing next to a well. One of the kids, named Ryan, fell in the well by mistake. Eric, one of Ryan's friends, started to panic. He tripped over a rock and fell in to well with Ryan. Ryan screamed, making Eric scream also. Meanwhile, Ryan and Eric's friends, Meghan and Janey, were laughing at them as they screamed. Then the two tried helping Ryan and Eric up and out of the well, but fell in instead. Mysteriously, the bottom of the well opened up and they fell, screaming.

"AHHH!" screamed Ryan.

"AH-HA HA HA!" laughed Janey as she was spiraling downwards.

"Janey!" shrieked Eric, "We're FALLING! Why are you laughing?!"

"Because!" Janey said while still laughing. The girl was holding her stomach since she was laughing too hard. "This is like a dream come true!"

"What?!" screamed Meghan, "You have some weird dream or us falling?!"

Janey laughed some more. "No! It's just that I'm suspended in air with you guys and Ryan is screaming so much!" Janey pointed to the screaming, spiraling, flailing Ryan.

All of a sudden, the four saw the ground beneath them. Meghan and Janey landed in a pond, getting soaked wet. Ryan and Eric landed on the ground next to them with a thud.

Janey coughed up some pond water. "Yuck" she said in disgust. She heard a groaning sound near her and turned to see Ryan face flat on the ground with Eric sprawled on top of him. Janey laughed at the strange sight. "You guys alright?"

"Shut up" said Eric in pain. A muffled sound came from Ryan, who still had his face in the ground. "What?" asked Eric as he sat up, still on Ryan.

Ryan lifted his head up and yelled, "GET OFF!" Surprised, Eric jumped up and off of the boy. Meghan started laughing so hard she fell backwards and into the pond again. Ryan got up and spit out the dirt in his mouth. They looked around, and saw a beautiful meadow next to the pond, and on the other side, a huge castle painted black in a huge dead forest.

"Cool!" exclaimed Janey with a light in her eyes. She quickly got out of the pond and ran towards the eerie castle.

"Wait, Janey!" called Eric, but she had already disappeared into the forest.

"Janey!" Meghan yelled as she got up from the pond and after the girl.

"Holy crap" breathed out Ryan. He wiped the grass off his pants. "What are we going to do now?"

Eric and Ryan stood there staring as Meghan disappeared into the forest as Janey had.

"Well I'm off!" exclaimed Ryan, coming to a decision. He went off after the two.

"Hey, wait for me!" Eric yelled, following after Ryan.


Ok this is short I know. I'm still trying to figure out how to make it so the story is a little more literate. I'll fix it some other time.

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