Basically, this is my idea of a Saw trap

Disclaimer: I do not own Saw


A man woke up strapped face up to a table.

"Ugh, where am I?" asked the man

The man looked directly up and screamed, what he saw was a big black cylinder just a foot above his face

"What the fuck is that?" asked the man

He heard a TV switch on, when he looked at it, he saw a scary clown puppet.

"Hello Paul" said the puppet

"Who are you? What do you want?" asked Paul

"I want to play a game, you see that mirror?" asked the puppet

Paul looked to his other side.

"Behind that mirror is your girlfriend, Joyce, on her side is a button, once she presses it, keys will drop from the ceiling, she has 2 minutes to pick the key that stops the machine that you're strapped into, but only one of them releases you, the others raise that 50 pound weight above your head another 3 inches, if she can't find the right key in time, well, let's just wait and find out" said the puppet

In the other room, Joyce, Paul's girlfriend, pressed the button, the keys dropped from above and the 2 minutes began, she grabbed a key at random and placed it in the machine, it was the wrong key, so the weight raised 3 inches. Joyce could see everything as it was a one way mirror.

"No!" yelled Joyce

She grabbed another key, again, wrong, so the weight raised 3 more inches.

"DAMN IT BITCH!" yelled Paul

Joyce grabbed another key, another wrong choice, so the weight raised another 3 inches

"God damn it" said Paul, whimpering

Only one minute was left, and still so many keys, Joyce grabbed 2 down and tried both, neither were the right one, so the weight rose another 6 inches.

"Oh man" said Paul

Paul and Joyce were both worried, they didn't know what was going to happen and they didn't want to know, Joyce grabbed another key, it was wrong again, raising the weight another 3 inches.

"Oh come one" said Joyce

Only 45 seconds to find the right key, still so many choices, she grabbed another key, wrong one once again.

"Shit" said Joyce

30 seconds left, Joyce was panicking, but not as much as Paul, Joyce grabbed another key, another wrong decision so the weight rose again.

"God" said Paul, practically crying

20 seconds, Joyce grabbed another key, once again, wrong decision, meaning the weight raised another 3 inches.

"Please, help me" said Paul

10 seconds, Joyce grabbed another key, this was the final one she could grab as the other keys started raising higher, out of her reach.

9...8...7. Joyce tried the key. 6...5...4...3...2...1 The weight didn't raise.

"What? Hahaha! I'm alright" said Paul

Joyce was relieved, until the weight dropped right down.

"AAAAHHHH!" yelled Paul

Joyce screamed at the sight in front of her, she picked the wrong key and her boyfriend paid the price.


Done with that

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