My Chocolate Chemical Romance
Chapter 1. The factory
Hi! This is Kait and Care! We decided to join forces and write a few stories together! Since we are OBSESSED WITH JOHNNY DEPP! we decided to write an early story before his new Charlie and the Chocolate factory comes out! If you want to read some stories that we wrote separately then check out Evil Duckie of the BlackLagoonCare and Moulin Rogue PirateKait
ps. WE LOVE U LAUREN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OH YEAH! WE DON'T OWN WILLY WONKA OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS OTHER THEN MANDRISA AND ANALISE!!!!!!!!
Charlie couldn't believe it. He was next in line to OWN the infamous Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory! But
something inside of him tugged at his heart. He could see how much Mr. Wonka loved his factory. But as much as tried, he couldn't bring himself to love candy that much.
Actually, after a few weeks of being surrounded by chocolate, he knew he'd soon grow tired of it. But, he couldn't find himself able to break Mr. Wonka's heart and tell him he didn't really want the factory. "Maybe when I'm older it'll be easier." He thought to himself as he watched the Oompa Loompas working on a new piece of candy.
--A Few Years Later--
"This is amazing isn't it Grandpa Joe?", asked young Charlie Bucket walked around staring at the chocolate river richly flowing away still in shock at the thought of owning this amazing factory. "That it is Charlie my boy, that it is", Grandpa Joe said slowly sitting on a giant candy mushroom.
"And this is all yours Charlie!!", as Willy Wonka, in his purple velvet jacket and his black and pink pinstripe top hat sitting on his deep brown hair, appeared out of nowhere his pale face smiling joyously . Charlie stood there silently and until he turned around to Willy, "Mr. Wonka? I need to tell you something", He said slowly. Mr. Wonka smiled down on him and asked, "What is it my boy?"
"Mr. Wonka I love your factory. You know that, but I can't have it anymore. I know it means a lot to you, and I've realized I am never going to be as good of an owner of this factory as you were, he said as a few oopma loompa's ran past him holding large bars of gold chocolate.
"But Charlie.... he said seriously. "You won this factory fair and square. I know that you have been taking good care of it, and you'll one day be an excellent owner", he said as he held Charlie's shoulder's grinning down on him. "Mr. Wonka
I really can't take care of it anymore. But since I won then could you do me a favor?"
"Of coarse! anything!", he said as Charlie smiled. "You take the factory and keep it and you let me visit you any time I want and bring my family and my friends but, only if it's alright with you?", as Willy Wonka rubbed his chin at the suggestion.
"Alright Charlie. Agreed!", as he and Charlie shook hands. Immediately after their hands parted Charlie ran to Grandpa Joe hugging him tightly, tears slowly running down his face. Once again Willy grinned a twinkle in his eyes as he walked away shaking his head whistling all the while swinging his cane.
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"And you can come with me and visit!", Charlie said excitedly to his friends waiting for the teacher to appear in homeroom. "Are you positive Charlie?", said young Analise. Analise was a good friend of Charlie's. A close one at that. Without her in his life his childhood would have been boring and meaningless. More his life would have been boring and meaningless.
"Of coarse I'm positive Ana! Why all of you are invited! After school we can all go and see Mr. Wonka", as the entire
class around him shouted in joy at the concept. "You may want to go Charlie but I am bringing my mother", as the rest of the teenagers snickered behind their Analise there is nothing to be afraid of Charlie protested, but even with his nagging she stood to her idea of taking her mother just incase anything bad were to happen. Charlie just shook his head and sighed as the ringing bell could be heard for the beginning of class.
--A few hours later at the end of class--
Charlie's entire class ran outside together running down the Street, bumping into people and rushing to get there first following Charlie steadily behind. "Common guys!!! The faster we get there the longer we can stay there!", pushing their motivation harder all the while Analise dragging her mother close behind them.
"Common mum!! We have to go faster or we're never gonna catch up with them and then they are going to lock us out!", she yelled as Mandrisa sighed deeply at her daughters impatience. Mandrisa Salaman was a 32 year old heiress to the Salaman fortune. Her father had been a famous but corrupt banker, cheating people like Charlie's father out of their
money while steadily building his own fortune. He was known as the Rockefeller of England. When he died, he left his fortune to his beloved daughter and his only grandchild.
She was deeply attractive to many bachelors all wanting her hand in marriage but her hand belonged to no one but
herself and she planned to keep it that way till she found love in a man. With shoulder length black wavy hair and rich chocolate brown eyes she was to most men what dreams were made of.
"Analise if we run any faster then we are going to hurt ourselves",she said, sighing once more apologizing as
she crashed into people one at a time. She was not exactly taken all that well with people when they learned to discovered she was an unwed mother. She had repeated to herself constantly that the night was a mistake but when she had her 16 year old daughter she realized it might have been the greatest thing to ever happen to her.
When the factory was insight and they were found in front of the black gates Mandrisa could finally catch her breath. "Well that was my exercise for the day", she said sarcastically as the black gates slowly opened. The teenagers
stood there in shock, none moving whatsoever except Charlie, who already started walking inside towards the factory before the gates closed.
The rest quickly followed behind him. "Oh
isn't this exciting mother?!", Analise asked brightly, skipping past the gates inside. "Oh I am ecstatic darling", she replied sarcastically following her daughters skipping form. They all entered together as a large group holding each other's
hands in the darkness as they walked through the large door.
WELL THATS OUR FIRST CHAPTER!!! HOPE YOU LIKED IT!! READ AND REVIEW!!!!!
