Hi everyone I am writing my very first Avatar, flick. It is a Zuko and Iroh flick, but they wont be in it for a while.
This is based in the metal rigs where all the earth benders are forced to work in the metal mines.
This is before the earth benders fought back.
Oh and also in this flick the Warden is actually Irohs and Ozai cousin.
So remember to read and review.
Chapter 1 Prologue; kidnapped.
We got arrested for earth bending, myself, my twin brother Li and our grandfather who raised us, we were dumped in this huge metal mine, where we must mine.
The oddest thing for being arrested for earth bending is myself and my brother Li are not earth benders, we are worse. My grandfather is an earth bender and so were my mother, but I suppose our father must be a fire bender… the worst thing, the one thing I hate is a fire bender, but that is what Li and myself are. And we cannot fight back, there is no ground, no earth… they will kill our grandfather is a second.
He is all we have.
So I mine so they can fuel there ships with the coal, so fire lord Ozai can kill us. So all I can do is mine, eat and the slop and I sleep in a huge over crowded room my name is Keti and I am a prisoner.
"Child," I turn my head, grandfather was there he helped me lift the heavy metal, I heard a noise, and eight or nine cold-blooded fire benders are there, they are surrounding the warden.
It is time for him the dreaded weakly progress report, if we don't make the expected produce, we are all punished.
We have been here a whole month, but we have never been this close to him; we were three meters away from him. Grandpa was sweating he was terrified. All that is covering us from the cruel warden is a small wall of metal and a fire bender.
Li and I were working normally as hard I can, we don't say anything, and I don't want to be thrown over board. He got close to us, too close.
"Shiuu," the warden says, for a second I thought he sneezed than I remember it is my grandfathers name, Grandpa stopped and bow.
"Warden," the warden is shocked, he looks at us and says.
"State your name and ages children and your relationship to this man," he orders his eyes are so cold. He is so evil, he makes the fire lord look like a priest.
"My name is Keti sire, and this is my brother Li, he is our grandfather and we are eleven years old." I say, I look at him, his eyes are shocked, oh no his going to throw me over board.
"I see," I at once bow, "Well ah... um continue your fine work." The evil warden said, than he walked away, we keep going.
"What was that about?" Li asks, Grandpa said nothing, "I bet he just wants us to clean the gunk out of his hair, slimy much."
"Yeh, I reckon he shares hair products with Ozai." I say,
"Actually, I have the same brand of hair products with Iroh." We both turn, the warden was there, oh no his going to chuck us over board.
"Warden," we chorus, we bow, Grandpa turns pale.
"The children meant no disrespect," Grandpa said to my surprise. The warden ruffled Li's hair,
"Such spirited children, you two much come to have tea with me sometime very, very soon." He smiles at us, and one of his fire lord guards faint, in shock.
Don't blame him.
"What was your mothers name?" the warden asks,
"Jekuse." I say I was scared, I am not such a good swimmer, and he smiles.
"And your birthday is in August, right?" he asks, he never lost his 'friendly' smile.
"Yes warden, how did you know?" Li asks, the warden just smiles more.
"Oh nothing, no matter, Ozai does not use hair protects, Jekuse's children." He says, he smiles and walks away stepping on the fainted fire bender.
Than he started singing, and dancing an earth bender starting next to us said.
"I always knew he was crazy." She muttered, I nod and keep working.
"Don't say anything just work." Pop says, I nod, the fainted fire bender was waking up.
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