Okay guys, yes, i decided to redo this story. This is the revised edition of chapter one. I hope it's better. I'm pretty sure it is. It's hard to get worse then the original. When rewriting this (which I did this past hour because I was bored and wanted to) I said to myself in disgust, ''This is ridiculous!"

And here's my original AN:

Hey guys! Ok, the beginning of this story might be a little like my Just Another Sanubis Love story.

But please read anyway! It's only the first part of chapter one that's a little like it. Here it is:

Sadie's Pov:

I walked along the dusty dirt road, heading towards who knows where. I'd just had a big fight with Carter over something VERY stupid, and took a walk to escape. I needed a break. From life. So many things were wrong. Like Carter and I.

And trust me, I've got other problems too- the house is a wreck, enemies, Drew Tanaka, life, and so little things were right...like Walt, Anubis, Jaz, Zia, my friends, school (well, school wasn't perfect, but...okay, most of school was bad too. Ugh.) Walt, Anubis, Zia..Did I mention Walt?

The air around me seemed to get thicker as I walked, out of breath from walking for so long. But still I kept walking. The sky turned darker, and i paused. I was a long way from home now, I figured. I'd better go back.

But I was still really mad at Carter. We were fighting over Walt and Anubis, and things got out of hand. I had stormed out, slamming the door behind me then.

Biting my lip, I contemplated things. I didn't want to be stuck out here in the dark, like, in the dark dark. Wow, what am I, five?I sighed and started to turn around. But then i saw it,and I screamed and jumped back, falling down in the dirt.

I know this is extremely short. I wanted to see if people were still interested. Should I delete the original chapters from here or post it as a new story? Let me know! I have most of chapter two done!