Me: My first story fan-fiction you wont review on.

Gaara: She's sad because you wont review.

Saki: =P serves her right!

Me/Saki: (start fighting)

Gaara: Leiko does not own Naruto. If she did Sakura wouldn't be a whiney bitch.

Starting the story…..o.k.

A secrete I will never tell. A secrete of myself no one knows. I have met others of my kind. Kyuubi my older brother knows of my secrete. My name is Naruki Namakaze and I'm a fox demon. A vixen of the night. Kyuubi is one to but he doesn't hide it like I do. I'm different from most fox demon. Instead of orange hair I have blonde. It's long and goes down to my ass like a blonde coat. My eyes are blue, my brother says they could put sapphires to shame. My frame is small, I guess. My brother Kyuubi is way hotter than me. He has orange hair with red highlights in it and it spiky. His eyes are crimson red. They put vampires and to shame. Speaking of vampires, Kyuubi's been dating one. I think his name was Sasuke.

BAM!!!!!!

"OW DAMIT", yelped my brother. "WAKE THE HELL UP NARU! WE HAVE SCHOOL TODAY!!!", he screamed. " IM UP ALREADY!", I yelled grabbing my small black jacket and pulling it over my red tank top which shows off the piercing in my navel. It has shiny sapphires on top with chains dangling down almost touching my dark blue skinny jeans. My shoes were red converse with black spirals flowing on them. My brother wearing his usual black hoodie with a design of red spray paint. Baggy black pants with chains at the pockets. Then his red and black Jordans. With his signature black and red back pack. I just bring a binder and a pen and mooch off of Hinata when I need a pencil. My brothers a leader of gang too did I mention that? No. well now you know. He's the leader of the Jinchuruki. The members are: Kiba, Shikamaru, Neji, Lee, Ino, Sakura, and finally Hinata. My brother don't want me involved because its dangerous blah blah blah. Kiba is a wolf demon. Shikamru is a shadow demon. The vampires are Ino and sakura. Neji and Hinata are bird demons. Lee is lee. There's a raccoon demon in school my brother wants in the gang but he cant ever find him. His names Gaara and a cool guy once you get to know him, is what I hear. Plus the fact Sakura says he's pretty hot . "hello anybody in there?", said Kyuubi in front of my face. " shut up", I said pushing him out of my face and getting in to my car and driving off. We have separate cars. His is a red lamborghini . Mine is a red sports car I got imported from my grandfather Jiraya. One thing fast cars are usually a demons or a vampires. As we raced each other school we find more racers. Kiba, Shikamaru, and Sakura. Kiba's is a black sports car with red racing stripes. Shikamru's a green Porsche. Sakura's is a pink convertible. It's usaly Kiba or me who win because we know the streets like the back of are hand. Today was my day because Kiba missed a turn. I was there way before the others and pulled into my usual spot. When everyone besides Kiba showed up I knew something was wrong so I called him.

The ring tone he has for me is cassie by flyleaf. "hello", said a dark voice. Fear went straight into me. "who are you?", I asked hoping he'd say Danny, Kiba's cousin. "that's none of your business", he said then a muffled grunt and a thud. "where the fuck is Kiba?", I yelled in the phone catching the others attention. "oh he's here with me having some fun.", he said chuckling. "what the hell are you doing?", I asked my eyes going violet. " Playing with him he's a good doggy", a cracking sound then a howl of pain is heard. My eyes turned pure red with a diamond pupil. "don't hurt him, please", I said into the phone really getting there attention my brother coming over now with a worried Shikamaru. " oh I wont if, I get you instead", he said. "what?", I cried. "you want him dead", he asked a click in the background. "okay!", I cried into the phone my eyes dimming to violet with tears coming down my face. My brother was 5 minutes away as he told me the address. I jumped in to my car speeding off. "I wanna talk to him", I said tears dripping down my face. "alright", he said amusement in his voice. " naru please don't come ", he said pain in his voice. "Kiba are you okay?", I asked ignoring what he said. "not really", he answered. "Kiba it's ok really", I said holding in my dignity. " no its not", he said sounded like he was sleepy. " Kiba don't go to sleep!", I yelled into the phone. " but I'm tired", he said. "Kiba you cant go to sleep", I yelled again. "okay", he said like he wasn't there. Then there was a shifting noise. "KIBA!", I screamed into the phone. " guess who", said the dark voice said. I stepped onto the gas driving faster. Then he hung up. I dropped the phone as I raced past stop signs and red lights.

My phone started ringing it was my brothers ring tone there for you by flyleaf. "hello", I said. "WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON!?", he screamed into the phone. " stuff", I answered. " what stuff!?", he said annoyed. " ask Shikamaru he probably figured it out", I said into the phone. There was murmuring on the other side. "don't you dare!", he yelled into the phone. " what?", I asked innocently. " Kiba was kidnapped wasn't he!?", he yelled. "hai", I said then hung because I just arrived at the location. Kiba's car was totaled out front. So I got out and was grabbed from behind and handcuffed. " hello beautiful", said the voice in the abandoned warehouse. " where's Kiba!", I yelled. " my friends are playing with him", he answered coldly. " he was good Itachi", said one voice. "wolf demons usually are", said another. "fucking akutski", I muttered. "oh you we'll be", said the voice or Itachi the leader of the akutski. "hmmm she smells lovely", said a deep voice he was tall." is he ok?!", I yelled at Itachi who chuckled at me. " oh he needs a doctor, but that's all.", he told me reassuringly. He was in my face now rubbing my cheek as if he got the prize of the century. Then he hissed and slapped me. " you brought them here you stupid bitch", he hissed at me. " leave the boy and come on", he said running out the back into the forest dragging me with him.

Naruki: wow…

Gaara: why wasn't I in it!?

Kiba: why was I raped!?!

Me: shut up!!

Kiba: please review.

Gaara: please.

Naruki: that's if you want the next chapter.

Gaara: she well even except flaming if you says she needs to do to make it better!

BYE FOR NOW!! (at least 2 reviews until the next chapter comes out)