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Chapter 1: The androids

The birds flew high in the sky and the sun was up, as if it were watching over the earth. It would bring such promise to one's eyes for peace, but the androids changed it all. One with black hair wearing a black shirt an jeans with an orange handkerchief hanging loosely around his neck threw back his head and laughed at all of the sufferings. The other with blonde hair and wearing a white shirt with jeans and a jean jacket continued to throw her punches around. Citizens of the city would fall unconscious from the blow.

For them, it was just another day. They had gotten so used to the fact that no one tried to stop them, for their own unknown reasons, that they didn't notice the teenaged half-saiyan with lavender hair and a Capsule Corp., shirt. He smiled. He sensed that they hadn't noticed him yet. Jumping off the edge, he landed silently behind an abandoned building. He glanced up to the older boy that was with him and nodded. The black haired half-saiyan with a blue outfit flew upwards and called out to the androids. "Is this all you ever do?"

"Oh, look, 17 people are out to play," The blonde smiled and tucked a strand of hair behind her ear. "Do you want to take him? He's alone today."

17, the black haired android, smiled at his sister, and replied, "Sure, why not? You had him a week ago. Tell me," he directed to the half-saiyan, "Where's your friend?"

"Oh, he's…around," The half-saiyan said. Not even a flicker in his eye to reveal where his 'friend' was.

17 laughed. "Probably at home, right? Oh, well. Let's get started shall we?"

17 launched towards the black haired saiyan.

The saiyan then glanced at the teen and yelled, "Now, Trunks!"

17 was soon greeted with some ki thrown by the other saiyan. He flew through a building.

Trunks, the teenager saiyan, smiled at the other. "Did I get him, Gohan?"

Gohan smiled back and said, "You hit him, but it isn't over yet."

The dust had cleared by that time and revealed Android 17 without a single scratch on him. He was laughing as if it were just a game.

Android 18, his sister, said, "Well, brother, it looks like I will be joining in as well. I sure hope you don't mind."

"Do as you please with Gohan, I want Trunks."

Gohan heard and landed next to Trunks. "Sorry, but you will have to take both of us. Let's go!" As he said it, he powered up. Trunks did the same.

18 flew towards Gohan, and Gohan sent a kick towards the head. 18 blocked it, and in turn punched him in the gut and then elbowed him in the head. Then she glanced at Trunks and 17. Trunks had just been kicked through a building and knocked unconscious. Gohan, however, wasn't as easy to get rid of as Trunks was. Flying towards 18, he twisted his body aiming for her head with his foot. It never reached his destination. 17 sent a ki blast at Gohan, and he fell to the ground, defeated.

The androids looked at each other and nodded. They had had enough. Without another word being uttered, they flew away.

Gohan was having a hard time keeping conscious. He had to help Trunks. Then, he heard a voice. It was Bulma! He leaned his head back, and was letting the blackness take over. The last thing he heard was, "Gohan, wake up! I know a way to fix this!"

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