A New Addition Chapter II

A New Addition Chapter II

Hi Everybody! Before we start on the story, let me make a brief announcement. I challenged dbz rox to see who can make the best second chapter to A New Addition. And dbz rox accepted the challenge! So after you read, please review and give me a score from one to ten. Make sure you do the same with dbz rox. Yall be the judges. So let the games begin!

Broly watched Emily climb the ladder to paint the wall. Broly's eyes moved every which way that Emily moved making sure Emily doesn't fall. There was an awkward silence as Emily was painting the room pink. Finally Emily broke the silence. " I have the most perfect name for the baby." Said Emily. "What is it my love?" asked Broly. " The name should be Angel or Sapphire." Said Emily.

Broly floated up to Emily. He pulled her off the ladder gently and captured her lips with his own. Emily who was now in a trance dropped the paint brush and kissed back. After their "love" moment, Broly pulled back and moved a strand of hair from Emily's face. "Those are both wonderful names." Said Broly in his gentle voice he'll only use for Emily. Emily smiled at Broly with love written all over her face. Broly pulled Emily to him and held her. He rested his chin on Emily's head running his fingers through Emily's curly hair.

Emily rested her head against Broly's chest not wanting the moment to end. Emily closed her eyes and said, "I love you Broly." Broly closed his eyes, loving to listen to Emily's soft voice, which to him sounded like an angel from Heaven. "I love you too, my princess." Said Broly.

There was another silence. Broly finally broke it. "Let's go out for dinner. You need to take it easy." Emily smiled. "Okay." Replied Emily. Broly, who still held Emily, picked her up baby like. Broly walked over to the window. The window which was already opened. And Broly and Emily flew into the night sky.

Authors Note: So… what do you think? Please review and tell me how I did. Please give me a rating from one to ten. Make sure to read dbz rox's chapter also and give her a rating. The one with the highest score gets to add the chapter to A New Addition. May the best one win!

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