Author's Note -

This is my first try at writing a story, I hope you like it. Please tell me what you think of it, and whether I should continue, thanks... x


I walked out the house on what seemed a normal day, okay, it was a rainy day, but that was normal here... what else do you expect from England? I lived right out in the middle of no where, right on the outskirts of a town no one's ever heard of, Biggleswade. The rain started getting heavier as I walked so I headed into the cover of some trees in a small wood. It was a lot dryer in the trees, so I wandered around aimlessly waiting for the rain to eventually slow down, or even stop. I came across a small... house-like thing hidden between a few trees, it looked even dryer inside than out so I went in.

It was definately a hut, there was a chair, a table, and a stove, everything made of wood... except the stove of corse. I sat down in the chair and started my wait. I pulled out my phone, one bar of signal
It's better than none I thought and called my friend Charlotte. After 5 rings she picked up.

'Hey Kate!' She said cheerfully on the other end of the phone line

'Hi Char, wanna chat?' I asked, equally cheerful

'Sure, I wated to say something to you anyway'

'Ooh, really'

'Yeah... hang on, I'll come to where you are, so you don't waste your credit' I heard her picking up a few things and shoving them into a bag 'Where are you?'

'In the middle of the woods' I laughed 'Literally'

'The woods? But it's chucking it down with rain... oh well, I'll see you soon' She laughed too

'Yeah, see you' I smiled and snapped the lid of my phone shut, I was glad to have someone to talk to... once she got here

After 5 minutes of waiting I heard some movement in the tree, I walked over to one of the small window and looked out and saw... nothing. I went and checked out another window and still there was nothing... until...

'BOO!'

I screamed, turning around and saw, standing there laughing, was Charlotte

'Don't. Do. That. Ever. Again. Charlotte! You scared the living daylights outta me!'

'That was the point' She replied, smiling, she'd finally stopped laughing... but I could still hear laughing.

'Can you hear that?' I asked her

She went silent for a moment before answering 'Yeah... who's laughing? 'Cause I'm not... and you're not... and there's no one else here...'

'No one... except for me' Said a misterious voice... belonging to a young man, who had just stepped out of the shaddows

'Who are you?' I asked, feeling slightly scared

'You'll find out later... but right now there's something I need to do' He stepped closer to both of us again... then... he was right infront of us... in one second he'd crossed the rest of the room to us... I looked up at him, he was tall, blond and had... red eyes... he smiled at me, showing his teeth and that was the last thing I saw before... pain... just pain, firey burning pain all through my body, i screamed and fell to the floor, I heard the same thing happen to Charlotte before I passed out.