Hey guys! I am just writing this little note because I would like to start writing another story, and I want to know your opinions on if I should even write it or not. Below is a little summary/plot of what I hope to call either, "The Asylum" or maybe "Love in Desperate Times". So please review this and give me those beautiful opinions on the plot and even the title. Enjoy!


It's the early 1920s and Bella Swan has been put in an insane asylum. The thing is, she is not crazy in the slightest. It's all because she wanted freedom from her parent's strict rules. She wanted to be a flapper. To be able to do what she wanted, when she wanted. When she first started drinking and smoking, her parents locked her in her room. But once she started sneaking out and going to dancing at speak-easys, it was the final straw.

And that's how she got landed in the Central Indiana Hospital for the Insane. On arrival, Bella meets Dr. Weeks, (My Original Character) and he recommends hydrotherapy and other assorted treatments. Bella lasts many months with this terrible treatment, but is unrelenting and therefore seen as a threat. The doctors put her in isolation and schedule a lobotomy. But before it takes place Dr. Weeks, is replaced by Dr. Edward Cullen, after he is arrested for abusing his patients.

Dr. Cullen meets with Bella, and he knows right away that she is not insane. He orders that the lobotomy not take place, knowing that if it did, it would cause irreversible damage to Bella perfectly normal brain. But it's too late, and the day of the surgery arrives. The worst part is, Dr. Cullen must perform the procedure himself.

As Dr. Cullen is about to cut open Bella's head, he takes the scalpel, and he kills the two attendants that are with him. Then he takes Bella, who was awake the whole time, and they run away from the Hospital. They run off to Chicago, and stay at the Congress Hotel and Annex. They decide to get married, but as fate would have it, things did not go as planned.


Ok, so there you go! There will tons more details and there will be an actual ending. I just didn't want to put it here, because I really want it to be a great big surprise when you read it. Also, there will be more complete details of all the locations, and I will try to keep everything as historically accurate as possible. In fact, as I m writing thins, I have been looking up things, making sure the time periods and names of buildings were correct. And it's all for you guys, my greatly wonderful readers. So be awesome, and drop me a line, telling me what you think of all this. You can even message me. Everything is welcome. I look forward to hearing what you all think! Thanks for being so supportive of my other story, I hope the same support with be shown for this one!

Thanks for checking this out!

-Valerie-