Before you read, I tried to keep everything the same and I don't own the original story, I just adopted it.

I know i shouldn't be writting this, what with 2 other stories on but i've got authors block on those. me no own naruto and sorry if seem ooc

"Yo"demon talking

"Dumbass" human talking

'worthless' writting

scene change

'moron' thoughts

"Grand fireball"jutsu

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In Suna, there once was a clan with the power to control blood. They even had their own demon, the black blood demon, the brother of the juubi, the no-tailed hawk Desu. They however viewed it's jinchuuriki as the demon incarnate and treated it as such...

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"...Monster."

"Why does that freak even come out?"

"Go away monster."

Tears entered the dark rimmed teal eyes as children once again ran from him. All he'd tried to do was retirn their ball.

"Um," just as he was about to lose control, a quiet voice was heard next to him. He looked to see a small girl who seemed to also be about 6. She had jet black straight hair which hung down her back, pale cremy skin, thin limbs and angelic features with wide expressive violet eyes surrounded by dark bags like his. She was dressed in rags and was covered in cuts and bruises though. She was looking at him and nervously shuffling her feet "wanna pway?"

He stared at her "Don't you think i'm a monster?"

She smiled at him "Your not a monster. Monsters are scary. What's your name?"

"G-gaara," he said, nervous. He was worried that the moment she heard his name she would run off screaming like the others.

"Raa-chan!" she exclaimed, hugging him, much to his shock "I'm Kira and you're not a monster, you're just Raa-chan!" she picked up the ball he'd dropped and lightly tossed it to him. Before long, they were in a full swing of playing until Kira said she had to go. She promised to come back tomorrow though and for once, Gaara went to see his uncle with a smile, ready to tell all about his new friend.

An adult dressed in black saw Kira arrive at the compound and grabbed Kira by the hair causing her to cry out.

"Where have you been you little whore?" he spat in her ear.

"P-playing with my friend Mito-sama," she said nervously but the man slapped her round the face as she finished, leaving a large throbbing red hand mark.

"Liar! Who'd want to be friends with a worthless demon incarnate like you? I guess i'll have to punish you for running out again" he hissed and began dealing punches, kicks, stabs, cuts and burns to the unfortunot girl who just wept as she felt all the pain. He ended by carving word 'worthless' onto her back with a kunai and spitting at her as he left.

Crying, Kira dragged herself into an alley and laid down to sleep...

Meanwhile, inside the seal...

A very pissed off hawk rammed against the cage bars, hoping to crack the seal so he could comfort his host. He was not evil and what those bastards did to her made him feel sick. He thought of the girl as his Eyas, his little baby. He wanted to hold her close, comfort her, tell her she wasn't a whore or worthless or a demon incarnate. Tell her that she was loved.

Then, after a lot of searching, he noticed a flaw in the seal and grinned, a gleam entering his golden eyes, before channeling youkai straight into the girl. If this worked, she would become a hanyo and would have a copy of all his powers and he would be able to escape the seal and care for her. It would however take the last drop of her human blood spilling to complete the transformation. Till then, he would have to hope she survived...

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DL: It sucked didn't it? i knew shouldn't have added a new story *sulks in a dark corner*

Kira: It was fine author-chan. I hav someone who loves me and my friend Raa-chan to keep me company now *jumps up and down happily*

DL: *smiles and comes out of the corner* please review but no flames please because i know my writting sucks so you don't have to tell me. i'll add to whichever of my stories seeems most popular