Hello all, well this is my fist fanfiction, so please be nice. I accept all critism good or bad (if it's bad, put it nicely, there's NO need to be nasty, cuz if you are i just wont listen:p). So let me just say that the first couple of chapters are more informative than actiony and stuff, so just bare with me here, K? Thanks
Disclaimer: I WISH i owned Naruto...teartear
Oh, and i know the prologue is vague, but it'll be explained in later chapters.
Name: Amaya (Night Rain) Kurohana (Black Flower), but last name gets changed to Yoshitake for a little bit.
Born in: Land of Snow
Age: in prologue 7, in rest of chapters 12.
Hair: Jet black with midnight purple highlights (like the way Sasuke's hair is except with purple highlights instead of blue). It goes a couple of inches pass her shoulders, angles, long bangs, and straight. She usually has a black ski hat over it.
Eyes: Crystal Sea blue.
Complexion: porcelain pale
Outfit: Pretty much what Ten Ten wears but with several differences. The sleeves go to the second knuckle of the fingers and are tight until the elbow and then they become like clean cut hippie sleeves. The shirt is black with a dark purple lining and stitching. She also wears dark grey sweatpants and normal blue ninja shoes. She also wears a black glove that goes up to the middle of her upper arm on her right.
Prologue.
"AMAYA-CHAN!!" Kin cries as she reaches out to her best friend. She struggles to get away from the darkness of hell. The sinful souls from below the platform on which they were previously battling on, pull Kin to the depths of eternal torture. Amaya looks to her friend through teary red eyes as she crawls to her. Her body is bruised and soaked with her own blood from the battle with Miyoko. The 7 year old Amaya cries as she inches to the edge of the stone platform to her friend. She leaves a large trail of blood from her right arm, which had been viciously torn off by the once trusted and beloved Miyoko and thrown into said depths of hell. She pulls herself to the edge and reaches out for the small girl who has the kekkei genkai to control fire.
"Kin-chan! Kin-chan! Kin-chan take my hand!!" The blue eyed girl sobs. The silver-white haired and steely grey eyed girl reaches out and the two take the other's hand in a death grip.
"Amaya-chan! Don't let go please!!" Kin shrieks, horror written all over her face. The swirling black and ghostly hands of the dead move up on the 7 year old's body.
"Kin-chan! Just-just hold on to me!" Amaya screams as she feels herself also getting pulled from the stone, floating platform. Amaya sees one of the sinner's hands cut off Kin's right arm, blood spewing everywhere. Amaya flings backwards as she hears the spine chilling petrified scream of Kin. Amaya crashes into the backstabbing 27 year old, boy short strawberry blonde hair, deep sea blue eyes, Miyoko. Then there was a flash of blinding light and Amaya realizes is that she is lying facedown on the gravel floor in the dead of night. All she can hear is her own sobs and the deep panting of Miyoko. Amaya focuses on the wrist of Kin's torn off arm. The wrist has razor cuts on them. Even at the age of 7, Kin was suicidal. Amaya rolls onto her back, pain shooting every where in her body.
"You dumb bitch! Why? All I wanted was your fucking elemental Kekkei genkai! Was that too much to ask for?!" Miyoko rambles on. Suddenly Amaya looks to Kin's disconnected arm and her eyes widen as the arm turns completely black. The next thing she knows is an immense pain shooting from what remains of her right arm, which was from the top part of the elbow and up, as Kin's arm connects with it. Black swirls pull Kin's arm onto Amaya's with the same black demonic swirls from the other dimension. Kin's blackened arm fuses with Amaya's arm as the demonic black blood seeps into her pale skin racing up her shoulder, creating tattooed dark swirls that burned. Amaya screams and arches her back with the burning, numbing, throbbing pain in Kin's arm, which she now can control as her own, and her shoulder and the back of her neck and head.
The pain subsides, not much, but enough for the dark haired child to stop screaming and crying. 'What? What's going on? This has to be a dream. There's no way that this can be true.' She thinks. "You mother fucker!" Miyoko yells as she runs up to Amaya who is still lying on her back. She runs up to the 7 year old and kicks her in her side. Amaya yells in pain as she hears a rib or two crack loudly. She tumbles a few feet. She manages stand up barely.
"Aunt Miyo! Why?! I don't understand!" The 7 year old cries as she holds onto Kin's and her's arm.
"You don't get it you little shit face! I was the one who killed your mom! I killed Kin's older brother! I ordered the assassination of Haruki's grandfather, who was the Kage of the Hay Village! I ordered the murder of Washi's family! I have been planning this for years! In fact! My clan has been trying to attain the powers of the 5 elements from everyone one of your clans for centuries! And I almost fucking had it! I had it until you and that brat realized that I wasn't going to bring back the people that I killed, fuck!" Miyoko yells. Her fists turning white and the veins in her neck are visible due to the amount of rage she has.
"No! No! You said mom was killed by n-ninjas! Aunt Miyo, you-you wouldn't do this, any of it. Y-You promised mom that you would take care of me and l-love me" Amaya sobs. Miyoko rolls her eyes and walks up to the sobbing child and takes hold of Amaya's neck and raises her into the air.
"You sure about that pip-squeak?" Amaya gasps for air as she holds onto the wrist of Miyoko. Amaya extends her right, black arm to Miyoko's face, when all of a sudden the young blue eyed girl falls to the ground after hearing cracks and splashing. After she coughs a few times, Amaya looks to her right hand, formally Kin's right hand, to see that it is in the shape of a javelin, and it was covered and dripping blood. The spear morphs back into a normal hand, with the exception that it was black. Amaya looks to Miyoko and gasps as she jumps backwards. Her head had a huge hole in it. Amaya starts to cry uncontrollably and then blacks out from the massive amount of blood loss.
