Here is my edited Chapter 4:

Approaching the clearing near the castle, Martha leans on the Doctor's back, putting her head on his shoulder, letting the beating of his hearts lull her to sleep.

"Doctunzel I presume?" Breanna asks, as they approach the stables. "Yes I am Prince Doctunzel- and you must be Breanna?"

"Yes I am. It's an honor to formally meet you. I see the Queen has fallen asleep beside thee. Since you know of me, might I transport the two of you to her chambers so you can look after her?"

"It's alright. Let me get down off the horse, and I think I can carry her inside the castle." The Doctor says, carefully getting off the horse.

"Thou art most loyal to my friend and I thank thee for keeping her safe. Martha, her Majesty, means a lot to me and knowing thou has been keeping her safe is a great comfort to me. She is an important part of my life. The best part of my life."

"Prince Doctunzel, thou are most welcome, and I will begin fortifying the castle against Laneska, after I have shown thee to her majesty's chambers."

"Thou hast time to work thy magic. Laneska is away for four days- gone somewhere, I know not where, to meet with friends of hers. For a while I say that we are safe."

"I shall go prepare the proactive spells to shield you and her Majesty from Laneska." Breanna says bowing humbly.

"Breanna?"

"Yes Prince Doctunzel."

"Don't be nervous around us! Treat me as you would Martha, and we don't have to be so formal in our conversation. But best to talk formally only when we're around the nobles."

"I am sorry for my nervousness. I shall be more relaxed in the future." Breanna says bowing.

"Could you show me to her chambers as I don't know where they are."

"Follow me Prince Doctunzel. I shall show thee to her chambers, so you may look after her and watch over her. Doctunzel, also- don't forget the Queen."

"Yeah right! Sorry about that Martha." The Doctor says, reaching up for her, and picking her off the horse he carries her carefully in his arms, as he follows Breanna to Martha's chambers.

"What has he done to the Queen?" Lord Remey shouts running towards them.
"Nothing, Lord Remey. He has accompanied her Majesty back to the palace, and she hath fallen asleep on the journey back. The Queen helped Doctunzel escape from a most awful witch that had keep him locked away, and he is Prince Doctunzel, beloved of the Queen and as such, shalt be treated with the same respect as the Queen and he doth be under the protection of her royal Majesty." Breanna says commandingly.

Bowing, Lord Remey allows them to pass by with the Doctor following Breanna.

"Doctunzel -her royal Majesty's chambers." Breanna says, as she opens the door.

Walking in, the Doctor is struck by the beauty of the room, "This is brilliant! The tapestries and the large carved wooden bed, with the royal shield above it and- oh the dress room, where the queen's wardrobe is, is simply brilliant." The Doctor says with a bright enthusiastic smile.

"I know you're admiring the room, but wouldn't it be much easier with the queen resting on her bed while you do it?"

"Sorry- got caught up in being here, in a castle. Been a long time since I have seen a castle up close like this." He says, as he carefully puts her on the bed, covering her with a blanket.

"Martha is right- you do have a bright smile!" Breanna says, staring at him.

"Thank you."

"You have truly caught the eye of Queen Martha- she cares for you immensely."

"I care for her to a lot Breanna and - ouch!"

"Are you alright?"

"Yes I'm fine -just stepped on my hair again."

"Stop for a moment and wind your hair around your arm, so you won't trip or step on it again."

Stopping for a moment the Doctor winds his hair around his arm in a long coil.

"Doctunzel." A soft voice calls to him.

"I'll leave you to look after her. Call if you need me." Breanna says, leaving.

"Doctunzel are you there?" Martha's soft voice calls.
"Yes Martha -I'm here Martha." The Doctor says sitting down on the bed next to her. He stares at her for a moment. "Are you alright Martha?"

"Yes I'm fine! I was just tired and needed some sleep. Walk with me in the gardens with me. I have missed you and your company."

"I would be honored, your Majesty."

"Doctor, please call me Martha when we are away from the nobles, but when we are around them we should be formal."

"As you wish. Take my hand and let me help you up Martha."

"Thank you Doctunzel. First let's try to cut your hair, so you won't trip over it again. Sit down on the bed and I'll cut your hair for you."

"Martha I want toe thank you for standing by me through everything. I haven't been truly happy in a long time Martha. I'm happiest when I'm with you."

"I'm almost done Doctor. I'm trying to style it like you usually have it."

"Martha come here." The Doctor says, as she moves to stand in front of him.
"I don't know what holds your heart back I do know I don't' want to be without you in my life."

"I think that's better at least now you won't trip over your hair again."

"You're changing the subject Martha- wait." The Doctor says, following her to the balcony. "Martha when you walked away form the Tardis, I felt my hearts sink. I didn't know what to do or what to say. I did the only thing I knew. I left –ran away. I couldn't' take losing someone I cared about again! Ahhh! My head aches- ahhh!"

The Doctor screams stumbling to the balcony floor.

"Doctor what is it?" "I don't know- help me to a chair please." He says as Martha catches him,guiding him to a chair.

"Sit and rest a moment Doctor. Are you alright? You're sweating! Wait here -I'll be back in a moment." She says, leaving to get a damp cloth to dab his forehead with.

"I'm here- I've got you Doctor. Your hair- its growing long again. I thought if I cut it that would break the…I'm sorry Doctor."

"I'll be alright in a moment Martha. Blimey- it's even longer than before! I'm going to be tripping over it with every step I take."

"I am sorry I have been nervous with you. The truth is Doctor, I am happiest when I am with you too. I never want to be apart from you again." She says hugging him.

"I never want you to leave me Martha! I should have told you that a long time ago."

"Doctor sometimes you talk too much! Just hold me. I've missed you so much -even though we have only been apart a short time. Only it feels like years that you have been away!"

"I think I'm fine now. The spell is done- my hair isn't getting any longer. Let's go walk in the gardens together. Walk with me, your Majesty?"

"Yes my dear sweet Prince Doctunzel."

Jumping up with a bright smile on his face, he bows, offering her his arm, as Martha smiles back, taking his arm. Smiling back, she kisses him, saying, "I've missed your smile."

"I've missed your hugs! Can I ask you something?"

"Anything Doctor."

"Can you help me with my long hair. I don't want to trip over it again."

Laughing softly, Martha picks up his long hair, and carries his hair in her arms in a pile, as she walks with him through the gardens.

"Majesty art thou alright?" Lord Remey says bowing to Martha

"I assure thee Lord Remey, I am fine! I was only tired, and needed a bit of rest I thank thee for thy concern."

"Thou art most welcome Majesty! You sir are Prince Doctunzel?"

"Yes Lord Remey I am Prince Doctunzel. It is an honor to meet thee." The Doctor says, bowing.

"I shall leave thy Majesty to rest and enjoy the gardens, and enjoy the company of thy friend." Lord Remey says bowing to them.

"Your Majesty- art thou sure that thou art alright?" The Doctor asks.
"Yes my Prince Doctunzel. I am fine I was tired most greatly, and needed a bit of rest. Let us walk on in the gardens together. I enjoy thy company greatly."

Smiling the Doctor offers her his arm. Smiling back, Martha says, "Thank you thou art truly a gentleman."

Away from prying ears Martha asks, "Are you alright? You looked so weak last night -and pale -I was concerned about you."

"With you by my side, I am always stronger."

"Doctor you are safe here. Laneska can't hurt you here."

"She is away for a few days- well four days to be exact -so I'm safe for now. Till then we have time to come up with a plan."

Laughing, Martha smiles "Doctor you could always make me laugh."
"So I amuse you now do I?"

"Yes but in the very best sense! Come, let's sit down by the fountain, on the bench nearby."

Sitting down by the fountain, she asks him "Are you alright you seam a little weak still?"

"I'm fine Martha- truly I'm ok."

"Majesty." A timid voice asks.

"Breanna is that you?" Martha asks

"Yes Martha, it's me. May I beg a seat beside you?" Breanna says, coming out from behind one of the shrubs.

"Yes please, sit down."

"Hi- I'm Prince Doctunzel. Sorry weren't properly introduced earlier." The Doctor says with a beaming smile.

"I am Breanna. I help the Queen and grad her life as my own." Breanna says bowing.

"You are most loyal to my friend. I thank you for keeping her safe. Breanna, as you may know Martha means a lot to me, and knowing you have kept her safe is a great comfort. She is an important part of my life- a very important part of it."

"Prince Doctunzel you are most welcome. I will leave now to fortify the castle against Laneska." Breanna says as she leaves for her chambers

"She is a bit of a shaking leaf isn't she? But she seems very nice, and I am glad she has kept you safe."

"She can be a bit of shaking leaf, but she is only nervous around you. Once she gets to know you, she will relax. I trust her! She will help us- and she may even be able to find the Tardis too - because I think she can do it."

"Martha -rest your mind for a moment. Things will work out fine. We have been up against Daleks and even tougher scrapes than this! I will keep you safe Martha, with all my power. I promise you."

"Doctor -I trust you completely with all my heart."

"As do I you, Martha."

"Doctor- maybe I can help you with your hair, so you don't trip over it again." Suddenly his hair becomes rope braded smiling the Doctor softly says "Thank you Breanna."

"You're welcome Doctunzel."

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Alone in her chambers Breanna, enacts her protective magic to safe guard the castle. Standing in the middle of her chambers with her arms outstretched she stands with strength.

"Ancestors of the past hear my call.
Stand tall beside me in these hours of need!

I need your help to keep my friends safe.
Lend me your power give me your strength.

For these two have shown me great kindness.
Truly they are deserving of your help!"

Breanna calls to her ancestors, as a soft silvery glow emanates around her, as sparkles of magic invisibly surround the castle. Weakened she collapses onto a pile of pillows at her feet, near the fireplace.
"Thank you ancestors." She says respectfully as she blacks out.

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"Martha come here." The Doctor says moving closer to her on the bench.

"Doctor look! The castle- it's shining silver!"

"What?" The Doctor says, surprised. Looking closer, he says, "You're right- it is slivery looking- but how?"

"Breanna's work Doctor. She's a sorceress- a good one Doctor. She only uses her magic for good."

"Nice change in subject Martha, but come her closer beside me."

"Doctor I…" Her words are cut off by his kiss.
"Martha you are safe with me, here in my arms is where you belong."

"Doctor -a moment something is wrong with Breanna! I can't hear her! Follow me Doctor."

"Always Martha! I never want to be parted from you again."

"Nor do I want to be parted from you Doctor, wind your hair and follow me."

Hearing a loud sight, they run down the hallways of the towards Breanna's chambers.

"Come- she's in here- these are her own personal quarters! I gave them to her when I gave her the title of my Lady in waiting. Something she should have had a long time ago."

"Martha you are very generous and kind –one of the many things I've always liked about you."

"Doctor-I can't open the door. Doctor?"

Taking out his sonic screwdriver, he uses it to open the door.

"Breanna are you alright?" Martha asks.
Walking deeper into the chambers, Martha finds Breanna collapsed on a pile of pillows by her fireplace.

"Doctunzel!"

Running to Martha's side, "She's so cold we need to warm her up, get a blanket for me to cover her with."

The Doctor finds a small blanket on a chair near Breanna's dresser, "Yes that will be fine."

"Doctor will she be alright?"

"Yes I believe so."

"Rest Breanna, and when you're awake if you can come to my chambers or call for me."

"Come Martha, lets leave her to rest for now. We'll go out on the balcony and watch the day turn to night."

Leaving her to rest, they walk out of her chambers, "Martha she will be alright after getting some rest."

"Doctor I am sorry about all this you being locked in a tower with very very long hair. At lest now your here with me and your safe."

"Martha its not your fault it was some kind of space and time flux or a time rift I don't know what it was but I'm gad it brought us here."

"Do you really mean that Doctor?"

"Yes I do Martha I'm not myself without you."

"Doctor I'm sorry I got angry at you yesterday snapping at you as I did. I only want to be happy with you. My life wouldn't be the same without you." Martha says hugging him.

Dropping his long hair to the floor he wraps Martha up in his arms hugging her back. "I will never let you leave me again."

"Good because if I did I would want you to come after me."

"Martha, Doctunzel?" A weak voice calls to them.

Turning, they see Breanna staggering over to them. "Breanna are you alright?"

"Yes, I was weakened by the protection spell I evoked. It took a lot of my power to cast it. After more rest I will be restored to my full power."

"Take a few days to rest, and regain your strength Breanna. That's a royal order!" Martha says smiling.

"Thank you Martha, Doctunzel. I hope to talk to you more once I am stronger."

"That would be nice. Rest well Breanna."

"Before I leave, I have enough magical strength to do this for you both." Smiling, she snaps her fingers as a dinner and candelabra appear on the balcony's table.

"Enjoy." Breanna says leaving

"Breanna- that's brilliant thank you!"

"You're welcome Doctunzel -your royal highness."

"Breanna- you don't have to bow to me! It's alright, you are an equal to me and the Queen by your loyalty and kind heart."

"I am honored that you liken me to you both! I should rest. Good night."

"Martha- will you accompany me to the balcony for dinner, and a wonderful view of the night's stars?"

"Yes I'd be happy to accompany you dear Doctunzel." Martha says smiling as she takes his arm.

Sitting down with Martha he helps her to a chair beside him. They enjoy the roasted turkey, and tea.

Looking over at Martha, he stares at her for a moment, silently thinking, "You have stayed by my side through so much Martha- through the Master nearly destroying the earth- and you travelling around the world to save the planet. The time you looked after me when the sun was taking me over -they way you looked at me it was with so much devotion -far more than just caring. I never should have let you walk out of the Tardis."

"Doctor are you alright?"

"Yes, I was looking out over the landscape, thinking of how wonderful it is to be out of that tower."

"Would you walk with me in the gardens tomorrow? I would ask you to walk with me there tonight but I'm too tired to walk. I'm happy right where I am."

"Are you alright Martha?"

"Yes I'm fine- only tired. I am glad I was able to safely get you out of the tower. I like having you here beside me. This is the way it should be." Letting his hair fall to the balcony floor again he moves closer to Martha as she curls up next to him, laying her head on his shoulder.

"Doctor?"

"Yes Martha?"

"I am so glad you're beside me! I've missed you so much- even though it was only a short time we were apart. Still I didn't like not having you beside me."

"Martha when you would come visit me in the tower, it was the happiest time of my day! I have never been lonelier than when you weren't with me. Martha are you still awake?"

"Yes- I'm awake still . What is it Doctor?"

"After we are able to leave here I was thinking that we could go to a beach somewhere, with nothing but white sand and a sparkling blue ocean before us. Nothing but rest and relaxation for us both. How does that sound?"

"Oh that sounds wonderful Doctor! We could use a vacation where we're not running for aliens or for our lives. I can't wait to go there with you it will be even more fun sitting next to you on the beach. It sounds perfect."

"Once we can leave here, I promise we'll go there -just you and me. No aliens, no monsters to run from, just the two of us."

"Martha?" Looking down at her he sees that she has fallen asleep next to him, "Sleep well Martha I won't ever leave you again." He says kissing her forehead.

Seeing her shiver in his arms he pulls her closer to him draping his cloak over to keep her warm. "I will always keep you safe."

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Morning lights shine upon the castle's stone, making the stones almost glisten in the morning sunlight.
Stirring beside him, Martha wakes up -seeing the Doctor beside her in his arms, keeping her safe and warm.

"Doctor." Martha softly calls to him Looking up at him she sees that he is still asleep beside her. "Doctor." Marta says trying to wake him up. Sitting back down on the chair she brushes her hand down his face softly she rests her hand on his face leaning over to kiss him.

Slowly he wakes up wrapping his arms around her he kisses her back for one brief moment his hearts over rule his logical mind.

"Martha I'm sorry I got a little swept away! Well then -a walk in the gardens then?" He says pulling away from her and jumping to his feet with an enthusiastic smile on his face.

"You just don't get it do you?" Marta says frustrated as she leaves for her dressing room.

"Martha wait please I didn't mean to…Martha."

"Wait for me by the garden gates I will meet you there." Martha says turning away.

"Martha -Good morning." Breanna says stepping into the room with a chipper smile on her face.

"Doctunzel go wait for me in the gardens."

"I am not letting you run off- what did I do to upset you?"

"Nothing Doctunze.l Just go."

"Tell me Martha."
"You say you want to be with me and every time you get close to me you always push me away. Maybe you are better off without me -traveling alone with no ties to anyone. That's the way you like it, right?" Martha shouts turning away going deeper into her dressing room.

"Is this a bad time." Breanna says nervous.

"Go wait for me in the gardens." Martha shouts from her room.

"Fine then I'll go!" Doctunzel says leaving angrily, as he trips over his hair as he tries to run out the door.

The sound of the door slamming behind him allows Breanna out of her hiding place.

"Martha can I help you get dressed for the day? Breanna meekly asks.

"Breanna please help me I've made a terrible mistake I need to get to him before he leaves the castle I can't lose him." Martha says, her voice shaking.

"You really are head over heals for him! Come worry not I shall help you."

"I need him Breanna he means the world to me and I…" her voice drifts off

"I know Martha." Breanna says with a knowing look.

"Maybe you could do this the easy way -a little magic to hurry things along. I need him Breanna without him I have nothing he is everything to me."

Smiling Breanna says, "In this instance, I will stand still for a moment."

Swirls of magic form at Martha's feet slowly the comets' cascade swirling around her spinning faster and faster they explode in around her encompassing her in golden sparkles of magic.

Fading away they reveal Martha wearing a soft gray blue kirtle, with a soft overlay on the kirtle of a silhouette of fines, and a golden crown rests on her styled hair. The crown fold with fleur delis and deep blue saphires line the bottom rim of the crown, with a crescent moon necklace around her neck.

"Breanna- its stunning! Thank you."

"Your welcome Martha. Now run to him -he needs you! I can see him- he's going towards the stables! If you hurry you can catch him."

"I will Breanna." Martha says, holding her skirts and running down the castle hallways towards the stables.

"Majesty might I have a word with thee?" Lord Remey says bowing.

"Lord Remey I pray thee not now, but later is when we shall talk, not now." Martha says running past him, barley stopping.

"But thy Majesty."

"Later Lord Remey." Martha shouts as she runs.

Seeing the Doctor at the stables, she shouts, "Prince Doctunzel-wait please!"

Turning around with this long hair trailing behind him he turns to see Martha running up to him.

"Martha? I thought you wanted me to leave."

"Wait! No I need you- I never wanted you to leave me."

"I'm sorry I keep pushing you away. I just didn't want to get hurt again."

"You won't get hurt again, and you won't be alone again! I know your past has been full of pain but let me be the joy in your life. Promise me you won't leave me again. We both got mad at each other! I'm just glad your still here."

"I promise I won't leave you again."

"I thought you were leaving, and that Laneska would find you- and I couldn't let that happen Doctunzel."

"Don't ever walk away from me again I can't stand to watch you walk away from me. It was like reliving that moment when you walked out of the Tardis it broke my hearts." The Doctor says kissing her deeply.

"I won't ever do that again my heart won't let me walk away from you again."

"You had every right to leave! I can't be away from you…" he says as Martha cuts him off with a kiss before he can say anything more.

"Martha we should go back to the gardens, and talk more formally too, in case anyone is around."

"Doctor wait for a moment longer -please I ask thee to hold me for a while longer. I need to be in thy arms a while longer."

"I shall honor thy request gladly -but we should return to the garden bench, away from prying eyes."

"I thank thee for honoring my own wishes. Come Doctunzel, your arms are most welcoming I feel most safe in them."

"Doctor I am so sorry! I don't know why I snapped at thee like that! I do say that I do think the entire castle heard that! Sometimes when thou lookest at me that thou art not seeing me -but someone else."

Away from prying ears they talk less formally.

"Martha I will never forget Rose- she was a part of my life. She is safe in the other world, with the human me. I will always remember the past, but I can't let it hold me back any longer. It can't hold me back from something that could bring me great happiness, and keep me from feeling something that I haven't felt in years. When I look at you I have always seen you! I was pained too much by my past to try to open my hearts again."

"Doctor do you really see me?"

"Yes I have always seen you- needed you by my side. You have made me see how wonderful life is again."

"Doctor I have waited so long for you to say that to me."

"Now I feel like I can finally say it. I have always seen you. I like the way you look at me, with that beautiful glow in your eyes. You have saved me, and stood by me through so much, Martha. Remember when the sun was taking me over and I was burning up with what felt like a fever? I remember the look in your eyes when you were standing beside me on the stasis chamber. You were determined to stay by my side, even though you had to leave to save the ship and me. I think even then I more than cared for you. At that moment I sent you away I knew you had to go- but honestly I didn't want you to leave me for a second."

"I didn't want to leave you either." Turning to Martha he pulls her into his arms hugging her tight.

"I care for you a great deal Doctor- even with your very long hair." Martha says with a soft chuckle.

"As I cared for you, even when you weren't a Queen of a strange land. You will always be the one I want to be with. You look beautiful in the late afternoon sunlight."
"Your hair shines in the sunlight too, making you look even more handsome Doctunzel."

"Martha I love it when you call me that." The Doctor says with a glowing smile.

"Doctunzel I want to travel with thee still, if thou wouldst still have me aboard the Tardis, even after I was such a twit earlier."

"Yes of course I still want you aboard the Tardis. It wouldn't be the same without you."

"I don't know if I have ever said this before but I have always liked the sound of your voice and your accent. Your voice is very relaxing." Martha says leaning on his shoulder as he wraps his arms around her.
"I have never had anyone who actually wanted to stay with me before, until now. Rose was happy with the human me, and she is safe in her world -and I know she will be happy and will have a great life."

"Are you sure you are ok?"

"Yes- Rose has me in a way, and is safe and that's what matters the most. But in this world I have you, and I am happy having you in my arms. I was so blind for so long Martha. I didn't know how to react when you left. I did the only thing I knew how to do -I ran away! I am sorry I left you."

"I did hope for a while that you would come back for me. I waited for days hoping I would hear the sounds of the Tardis brining you back to me."

"Looking back on that moment, I should have come back- I missed you so much. The silence of the Tardis was too much for me to take. I need someone, and Donna made me realize that."

"She was right -you do need me! Who else is going to keep you out of trouble and rescue you when you get in trouble." Martha says teasing him.

"I like your suit or whatever it's called here! Sorry -I don't know the name."

"You look stunning Martha very beautiful indeed."

Picking up his hair off the ground Martha winds her fingers in it again, "Your hair is so soft and it looks nice on you even though its really long."

"Thank you I thought I looked a bit silly though."
"No you look great- you truly do."

"Martha I meant what I said that we'll go to that place I talked about once we leave here."

"Nothing but sand and an ocean I can even teach you how to body surf! It's a lot of fun. You'll enjoy it more than running from aliens."

"Honestly- I have never been surfing before."

"Really Doctor?"

"Yes not kidding it does sound like fun."

"I promise I'll teach you."

"I look forward to learning how! It seems like a lot of fun as I have seen others enjoying the sport!"