Welcome to a better one this time I'll put more effort in to it.
In the woods of twilight, in the deepest darkest corner, there was a tree, to the untrained eye it was a normal tree but in this tree lived a man, this man was no ordinary man he was a mage, a powerful one at that, he wore a white coat and cream trousers with a pair of goggles living upon his head, he had a brown bushy beard and neatly combed hair. This is the story of an adventure that would turn his life around, to the village he was still and to them would always be the twisted mage known only as FlameChaos (due to him accidentally burning down the village).
Flames POV
"*Sigh this is the third time this week, why won't it work, all I want to do is brew a potion that grants invisibility hmmm."
He paced the room for hours trying desperately to figure out how to make the potion, when a sudden knock at the door drew his attention, this being odd as no one knew where he lived or that the tree was even his house, he walked towards the door grabbing his purple sword on his way,when he got to his small wooden door he opened it quickly and raised his sword...
"JOHN?!"
The man at the door cried but not with fear or panic but with joy as if he'd seen an old friend, Flame lowered the blade causality and was greeted with an old, old friend by the name of Simon simple Simon. He was of cat kind ginger tall and fat he went to the same magic school as Flame and they both took up the class of destruction magic so they were rather close friends, well that's what Simon thought Flame hated him, he was too cheerful and gleeful not serious enough about magic like Flame was but he always managed to be better than him at all magic l, Flame while Simon battered on about old times was thinking how to kill him, then one word took his attention "adventure"
"I have an adventure for us it will help our magic aton and we can catch up some more I have a group of men outside all of them went to our school you may know a few"
"okay then erm... I'll come if it will help make me look like a better man to the villagers"
"*sly , it will."
Hope this one is better it's longer and the other paragraphs will get longer the more I commit.
BYE have a great time.
