I am redoing this chapter. A friend helped me out a lot on this so thank you friend!


Hi, I'm Brooklyn. I'm 15 years old. And last night, my life changed.

I was in my bedroom when I heard someone knocking on my door.

"It's open."

The sound of two hooves clacking on my flooring proned me to look up.

"Oh, sweet mother of the cookie monster."

A short, half man half goat had walked into my bedroom and was now clearing his throat.

"Ms, Brooklyn? Hello I'm Grover, nice to meet you, now if you will just come with me-"

"Go? With you? Where, to Candyland? No, no thanks, small fictitious man you can just leave. Shoo, go away."

"I'm sorry Brooklyn I can't, now come with me. Your in danger. We have to leave now."

"In danger? From what, a robot chicken made of chocolate. No thanks goat man flappy bird needs my help."

"First, I am a satyr. Second, you're a half-blood daughter of one of the big three which makes it impossible for me to leave without you and -"

"Oooh, I'm a half blood, what does that mean? Am I a Vampire?"

My window shattered and a fierce wind engulfed the room.

"I'm sorry Brooklyn, but I have to do this."

I felt a sharp pain in my neck and then everything went pitch black.

I tried to open my eyes to look around but everything was blurry.

My head was pounding and I could hear voices.

Hmm, I must be insane. Ooooh maybe I was taken to an asylum where I get put in a room made of a giant white pillow. That actually wouldn't be half bad.

I tried getting up.

I brought my hands up to my eyes and tried rubbing then to clear the fog.

"Oh good she's waking up."

The voice was clear and crisp, very much like my imaginary friend the goat man.

My eyes slowly began to focus.

A round face came into view.

"Morning sunshine."

Great, It was my small friend, Mr. Sat tire I believe his name was.

After the fogginess rose another figure revealed itself.

I nearly screamed. It was a large burly man who had the torso and head of a human but the lower body of a horse.

"Man is my imagination messed up or what."

The large horse man spoke in a surprising gentle voice.

"Well, I' really not one to confirm or deny that statement."

He helped me get up off the long pale blue coach I was laying on.

"Hello, I am Chiron. Head of Camp Half-Blood."

"Oh, this again. Well um, thanks I guess for all of your help Chiron but I'm just going to go literally anywhere else right now so if you and Mr Sat here could just you know go away it would be greatly appreciated."

I pinched my self.

"That's weird."

I pinched my self multiple times not getting anything but small pricks of pain in return.

"Look, Brooklyn. This isn't a dream."

"Of coarse it's a dream. Look I'll prove it to you."

I looked around for something, anything.

"Ah, ha! Look, I'll walk right through this wall. I briskly walked a couple of steps till I collided face first into the very solid wall.

"That wall real, Defiantly a real wall, really a real life wall." I rubbed my forehead where it seemingly took most of the impact "Yeah, I'm just going to sit down here for a second. Thanks"

I took a deep breath and looked over to Mr. Sat who was now sitting beside me on the coach.

"Mr. Sat tire-"

"My name is Grover."

"Right sure, Okay Grover. What on earth am I here?

"Because," The tall horsey man interrupted "You are a Half-Blood and-"

"Okay Stop it right there, hit the pause button. What is that, a Half-Blood. Tell me the truth, am I a vampire?"

"No you are a Demi-God, Half mortal Half God. Your mother in this case was the mortal and your father is one of the Big three. The three are the most powerful of all the gods."

"Cool beans. So who's my dad?"

"We don't know you haven't been claimed as of late but you have the distinct smell of one of the three and that is how we deduced that fact. Tell me Brooklyn, What's your favorite color?"

I was a little taken aback by the strange question but just went with it. My day already beat all other meanings of strange, Being asked my favorite color by a horse was only whipped cream on the pancakes.

"Blue, or more specifically an aqua color."

"Whats your favorite place to be?"

"The beach, in the water, at all times."

Chiron looked at Grover then back at me.

"Have you ever felt the water calling you?"

"How did you know?"

Chiron Looked back at Grover once more. "I believe we can safety assume who her father is.

Put her in the Poseidon cabin and make sure she meets Percy."

Grover simply nodded and gestured me to follow him.

I did as I was told and followed the short man outside of the house.

It was stunning outside but i didn't have time to notice.

"Percy?"

"Percy Jackson, He's the hot shot around here. The popular kid and a son of Poseidon."

"So, he's like my half brother?"

"Right on the nose. You know your really lucky, Almost every kid here would kill to be Percy's half brother or sister. Figuratively speaking of course."

"oh, cool."

We reached the Poseidon cabin without running into any other campers which surprised me because there we so many cabins. Grover saw my confusion.

"Everyone is at the dining hall, it's lunch, but Percy should still be in his cabin."

At that moment we reached the cabin and Grover knocked on the door.

"Percy? It's Grover."

A tall, cute boy answered the door.

"Oh, hey Grover. Whats up?"

"Congratulations you are a big brother, Percy this is Brooklyn, Brooklyn this is your new step brother Percy.

Percy, Chiron asked me to tell you to show her around and such other formalities but I have to be going. Good luck and don't mess it up seaweed brain."

Grover promptly left leaving me and apparently my new big bro on the front step of the cabin.

Percy turned to me and gave me a disarming smile.

"Hey, you must be Brooklyn. I'm Percy."

We shook hands and everything went smoothly from there.

He showed me around the camp and we talked, a lot, and found we had a lot of things in common.

We both have ADHD and we are both dyslexic.

"You should meet my girlfriend, Annabeth. You guys would get along great."

"I would like that."

"You know what, She's still at the dining hall I bet we could still catch her and we haven't eaten lunch yet so we could also get a bite to eat."

"Sounds good."


If you read the first version of this chapter, I hope you like this one too!