datshortiiBeYGuRl: oh yeah!

dustin: what?

datshortiiBeYGuRl: you're nice in this story!

dustin: what!

datshortiiBeYGuRl: yup!

dustin: gives a mean look

datshortiiBeYGuRl: oh... um... but in chapter 2 you're mean!

dustin: good

Enjoy the story!

-datshortiiBeYGuRl


Chapter 1 (9/27/05 5:44 PM)
Ray's Secret Girlfriend Beyblade Fire Revolution

"If Nelly was here ... I would wrap her around my arms." whispered Ray. Him, Kai, Tyson, Kenny, Daichi and Max were at the river. Ray, however, had someone in his life that he loved. Mariah is so not the person. Nelly Mew was. A girl who also came from where Ray had come from.

"Yo!" Tyson shouted at Ray and Kai. "Come on! Who's beybattling me?"

"You're battling." Kai said.

"Fine." Ray when he got up.

"Alright Tyson. Don't be so hard on Ray Kon." Kenny said smiling.

"3 ... 2 ... 1 ... Let It Rip!" A girl with long blue hair, light skin, and bright eyes stood up on the bridge.

"Ray!" shouted Mariah. "How come you didn't call me!"

"Hold on, Maraih!" Ray shouted over the beyblades.

"Huh?" Nelly turned and she smiled; running her fingers trough her long blue, silky hair.

"Kai? Would you like to go after Tyson?"Kenny asked him.

"Sure. Beybattling Ray would be awesome once again." Kai closed his eyes and laid down.

"What the hell does he mean by that?" Daichi said.

"Kai and his words. Words from a Fire Child." Nelly rolled her eyes at the girl.

"What?" Kai got up and turned,

"Ello mate! Long time no see!" She waved at Kai and Kai blushed.

"Damn it!" Kai shouted. "Dana?"

"No." the girl said. Kai guessed Jennie. She said no. Kai guessed Mandy.

The girl rolled her eyes. "Change something."

"Candy!" Kai said blushing.

"Finally! You bad dog!" Candy said.

"Candy Ann Reda!"shouted at boy.

"Candy ... Ann?" Nelly said. "Your family's dumb with names."

"What about Nelly Mew? What about that last name?" Candy said.

"Candy!" shouted the boy again.

"What Justin?" Candy said with a smile.

"Dustin! Not Justin!" he said with his arms crossed.

"Right ... right ... so what do you want?" Candy said.

"I need. ..." Dustin looked at Kai. Kai was blushing but looking away from Candy. "I guessed you never told him?"

"Yeah. But ... But I'm going to tell him now! Or later!" Candy grabbed her backpack and ran to her house.

"Ray!" Nelly shouted. Mariah stopped cold.

"Ray. Who is that?" she asked.

"Nelly! Nelly!" Nelly came running down along with her heavy backpack. She grabbed her and held him tight as she was hugging a teddy bear.

"I've missed you so!" Nelly said crying.

"Ok ... I not goanna ask." Daichi said.

"Aww. Isn't that cute." Tyson said.

Dustin rolled his eyes. "Come on Nelly. We don't have time for this ya know."

"Sorry ... It's just that ... Me and Ray have been friends for years." Nelly smiled. Mariah cried.

"I hate you!" she shouted. "I thought you and me had something-"

"Wonderful? Mariah ... I can't believe you thought of that!" Ray kissed Nelly right in front of Mariah.

"Ray, don't you think this is deep? This isn't like you ..." said Kenny.

"Ya know he's right, Ray. Nelly told us so much about you." Dustin looked at Mariah.

"Who's us?" Ray said when he herd the word.

"Our team." Nelly said.

"Team?" Ray looked at Dustin and saw him wear a unform. Then Nelly. She was wearing the same thing but a yellow one.

"Come on!" yelled out a voice.

"Coming!" shouted Nelly and Dustin.

"I gotta go, Ray." Nelly said. "See ya!"

"Bye." Ray said.

"Fuck you." Mariah said. She went to Tyson's house crying.

End of Chapter 1

Tyson's House Um... I think that's where the guys are staying ... I duno ... .'