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hollywoodtombs vol.1
CHAPTER.1 PALESKINBEGINNINGS

August 25 2014..

Its late I can't see the time. there's a clock in the trains cockpit. I can't get up to check the time. i have window seat
and the passenger sitting next to me is rather strange id rather not bother him by getting up. he looks like hes in his mid 40's starting
to go bald and little greys in his scruffy beard. Hes wearing a coconut print button up with a cosby sweater on top, he looks
as if he just walked out of the thrift store my sister took me to last week. He has an array of neck wear on i notice hes wearing a thoth amulate its not like the Frobisher but still.
I saw him once before I just know it that amulate is rushing a lot of memories back into my head his face looks so the homeless
who was checking out the egyptian exhibit at the school's library! its a small world after all i think to my self.

Just as i was about to fall asleep my sister walks down the narrow train isle asking me if i was going to sleep. I told her "not anymore" in an annoyed voice.
My sister is lovely just "lovely" as everyone would say. Shes a musician and a boring one at that! very talented but boring. she was in a classical orchestra
but decided to leave to come to america to be exposed to a new sound and that's why im here in this situation. My parents said "its a good opportunity"
to goto school in the states but really the idea is bullshit in my opinion, well i fancy the pop culture here but as a whole id rather die then live there.
She says "sorry for you having to come along i know the people at anubis house meant a lot to you" then she sighs and walks back up the isle to her seat.

August 25 2014 7:30 AM

After hours of thinking about my friends back at anubis house we arrived at the hollywood train station. i took a deep breath got up out of my seat and
went to wake my sister up. we got are luggage and headed for the exit. once we got out our host families were waiting for us. Yes familieSSS.
i havent been living with my sister for years theres no way i would leave my friends and come to america without a fight! i demanded my parents to give us
seprate housing while we were here. My hosts were the Vega's, the paper said there were 4 of them but only a man and a girl who was complaining showed up
she was whining "I DON'T WANT HER HERE" and "SHE CAN'T HAVE MY ROOM WHEN I LEAVE" i figured she was talking about me i giggled because i didnt want to be here anyways.

My sisters hosts were the valentine's the paper she was given said family of 4 as well but there was only 3 in attendance. they had a big sign
and a girl our age with red hair who was smiling at the ceiling while humming. she then start laughing "HIIII! im kat"she said loudly "sorry my brother isnt here
he had a fight with a dinosaur because the dinasour wouldnt let him touch his chicken nugget" my sister replied "hi im piper" with a smile.
she gave kat a hug and headed off with her hosts. i put my attention back to the vega's the man i figured being the father was trying to talk her daughter out of lying on the floor
she protested that she will "not get back up if SHE comes back home with us" the father said "trina honey we have a responsibility to look after her now please get up"
trina backfired with a "FINE! ill just stay here im not coming" she gave me a nasty look but i shrugged it off i had bigger stuff on my mind..eddie.
looked at me and said "come on lets go" i grasp the handle of my luggage and follow mr vega to the car trina is staying behind i guess she'd rather walk then get
a ride its fine by me it would be a long drive with her along.

As we reach our destination my jaw drops, the vega home was big. not like a mansion but really nice theyre living the "american dream". Mr vega directs me to the front door
and gets his keys out he inserts it in the lock "okay here we-" the door opens up and a skinny tan gir with brunette hair runs out the door saying "hi dad" and runs
a little more but stops to turn around and say "hi you must be Patricia, im tori. id love to talk and get to know you but im late for school" she gets out a odd shaped
phone and texts away while looking irritated. i spoke up "no problem im not going anywhere we can talk when you get back" she smiles "MY RIDES HERE" she screams.
i watched as a pale beautiful black-haired girl gets out and says something not so beautiful. "togo les go!...NOW! or ill have my car ride over you to school". i laughed
it was rude but i could tell she was just joking i mean how could somthing so wrong come out of those oh so right lips. tori gets in the car and they leave.
I finally enter the house, mr vega had already went in when i wasnt looking he seemed in a hurry because Trina's complaining took him off schedule.
The living room was the first thing i saw, reddish-orange couches, big windows, open kitchen, unique stair case and alot of modern decorations. There is alot of exploring
to be done and ive been missing that type of action since i left anubis house. i head up the stair case to find trinas room. i find a door with a big "T" on it.
i figured this is where i would be staying. i open the door and walk into a pink walled spacious room with pictures covering the walls i skim threw them to see what
trina is about, it was mostly pictures of tori, the lovely pale skinned american girl, the red head girl from the airport i think kat was her name and some guys and a puppet.
it didn't take long for me to realize i was in toris room.

ITS GIVE ME ABOUT A WEEK FOR A 2ND CHAPTER. I REALLY WANNA MAKE IT DETAILED. I STARTED OFF DETAILED IN THE FIRST PARAGRAPH AND FELL OFF A LITTLE BIT I REALLY WANT YOU GUYS TO ENJOY THIS STORY. ITS ALREADY BEEN FIGURED OUT IN MY HEAD YOU GUYS WILL LOVE IT.