Hello all the brave readers that click to my story, this is my first story in English (I have two more in Spanish) hope you like it… I love the idea of bring them together in a romance pair it's absolutely romantic. But I read the books first and knew that Susan will be missing when all go to Aslan's country so I was a little disappointed to think that after they brought them together they were going to be separated an this idea pop to me from a quite long but finally I could began put the pieces together so here I am… hope you like it and please leave a review even it's a bad one I'll accept them…
After the last battle everything seems to be perfect, everyone was in the New Narnia living all together with only one exception…
Susan return!
DISCLAIMER FOR THE ENTIRE STORY: I DON'T OWN NARNIA NEITHER THEIR CARACTERS THE ONLY THING I OWN IS THIS CRAZY IDEA!
She's an estranger
-Where is Susan?
That was the first question that made Caspian when the 3 Pevensie children (that they weren't longer), Lord Diggory, Lady Polly and even the Pevensie parents enter to the new Narnia.
Their reactions where the last thing he could imagine to happened.
Peter turned extremely angry, Edmund was so pale like if he had listen a curst, Lucy, her parents, Lord Diggory and Lady Polly were sad.
-She's not longer a friend of Narnia.- the great lion appear to the scene with sad expression, the saddest face of all.
Caspian couldn't assimilate the words that he just listens; his heart couldn't and wouldn't understand it.
-No.-he whisper. - That's not true, where is she?- He said desperate
-Cas…- Lucy began putting a hand in his shoulder. Caspian looked at the young lady that became Lucy.-She stop believing in Narnia.
-Why?
-We don't know, she change when she returned from a trip.- Edmund said.
-But she was not the same, since the last time both of us were in Narnia.- Peter intervened
-What?
-When we returned to our world she suffer more than the rest of us. We understand it because what happened the last time- Lucy continue
-Or better said, her last action she made- Edmund corrected.
A flashback comes to the young man that was listening the story.
He was looking how she was leaving but couldn't hold long his look to her… He couldn't stand how she disappears from his life.
He was looking to the floor when he felt his neck took and looks at the blue sapphire eyes filled with determination and suddenly he felt her lips in his.
She was kissing him!
In that moment he knew she wasn't any girl and no one will ever be better than her, his feeling for her grew more with that simple kiss, a kiss that was everything to him because with it he knew what she felt for him… the same strong love…
Love…
Caspian returned from his memory when Edmund continue talking.
-We thought that a change would be benefic to her, so she went with our parents to travel. We keep contact with her throw letters and seems that she was cheering up. But our amazing cousin sends also a letter when we returned from Narnia and write about a topic we wanted to tell her when she comes back home.
-Eustace told he about your plans of marring to Lilliandil- Lucy said
-After that she got worst, and forbid us to speak ever again of Narnia.- Edmund said sad
-We try so many times to make her listen to us but she refuse.- Lord Diggory speak for the first time.
-But she became a person hard, angry, and cold.- Peter said angry- Even once hit Lucy on the face for speaking of Narnia.
Lucy began to cry and every person that was around keep silence, even the great lion had his eyes shiny and Caspian could see that he was trying to keep tears back.
-She's not longer my sister.- Peter say with determination.- She's an estranger for me…
Here you have the first chapter, hope you like it… about the update days I wouldn't have cause I'm in collage so I have a lot of stuff to do but hopefully on vacation I will update many chapters as I can. And also I have in mind another story for the fans of THOR the movie… and if you haven't see the movie go! It's awesome really!
PLEASE leave a review!
Greats to everyone…